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Im sick of the smell of the hallway of the school
Im sick of the words, me and you
u used to make my body feel giggly and numb
but honey your like chewin gum
the flavor is so juicy and sweet
but then later the flavors gone and meek
just like those three little words that race outta your mouth
little people would laugh out loud
because they all know what youv done
youv taken two hearts
and broke them into one
its sad really
how u lie and cheat
because everyone knows
revenge is oh so sweet
We all know u cheated and lied
o honey but i didnt die inside
i kept right on going
down my mary way
knowing that today
Was our so called day
the dag that i fell so hopelessly in love
because u were the one i was dreaming of
u used to want
u always would hug me
but that gum is gone and dirty
your not the only one that lias and cheats
because other that do know
revenge is oh so sweet
posted by animelove30
How I Love You

Years have gone by. I don’t mean to cry but I’ve missed u so much. Those restless days when I wish u wasn’t away, filled up most of my life. Now you’re here in my arms, unable to get away. But to tell u the truth, I’m wrong in so many ways, I didn’t know u found love.

Now I’m stuck in the corner of the room, watching u kiss her. u seemed so happy, I could cry. But I never shed a tear my love, because I seen your smiling face. So I thought of how I love you.. and walked away.

Life was a dream, just u and me.. Up against the world. But then u me left...
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posted by animelove30
How Could You


It’s okay, u kicked me to the side. It’s okay, u were completely blind. u couldn’t see the love of me and u threw my hart-, hart away. I forgave u back then. I forgive u right now. I’m screaming my hart-, hart out loud. I still love you, but then I hate you. What am I gonna do?

I am fine, here without you. There’s just one little thing I need to know. How could u pass me door on that cold winter night and leave me all alone? How could u take your love away? u weren’t here to stay, without a goodbye. Sayonara baby. Cause I’ll never see u again as long as I ask...
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posted by animelove30
Chapter 3- A Beautiful Thing

    Jade and Amanda started gossiping until Jade heard a ring upon her cell phone. Jade raised her eyebrows and quickly grabbed the phone. She flipped the cover and answered “Hello?”. “Jade, it’s me Chris.” She heard over the phone. “Oh my God! Chris! How did u get my number?” Jade asked with excitement and a sparkle in her eyes. “Aw!” Amanda zei with a smile. “Small town, small phonebook.” Chris answered. Jade laughed in return. “So u actually searched for my number?” Jade asked with amazement. “Well, I had to...
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posted by animelove30
Chapter 1- The Bar

    In the small quiet town of Saint Vincent, Oklahoma, Jade Neal sat in her bedroom as the rain hit her window. She smiled at the somewhat silent pitter patter and thought about her late father and how he loved the rain. She almost lost herself in old memories until she heard a hard knock on her door. “Who is it?” She asked with a sad tone for voice. “Hotel room service” a girl zei through the cracks. “Come in” Jade replied. Amanda walked in with the biggest smile on her face ever and sat beside Jade. “Guess what?” Amanda asked with anticipation....
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posted by animelove30
My Heaven (English Version)

Love u boy.
Baby yes u are my heaven.
Sing it with me.
La la la…

24/7 Baby you’re my heaven. 24/7 My everlasting heaven.

24/7 u send me to heaven. 24/7 Baby lets go.

Even though I let u down, do u wanna kick me on the ground and tell me that I’m not enough for you. But I’m still in love with u and everytime I see your face, I know I can’t let go. So.. Be my ever loving heaven yo

Everytime I see your face, u make me wanna fly. Like I can touch the stars. I can touch the sky. I know you’d never leave me, and baby this is true.. Baby boy you...
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posted by Edward901
nobody understands love,
nobody really believes.
u can't put a price on the way people make u feel,
but u can always say:
i love you
but what does it really mean?
those three small words?
to many people it's just
i care about you
isn't that easier to say
than make someone believe
you'll always be there for them
that they are the sun, the moon, the stars
that they will be the person that u want to be the last person to see before u die?
is it so hard to NOT make someone believe
that u will always be there for them
that u will be the one that they need
for life
for eternity
forever?
volgende time u say
i love you
mean it
because if u don't
your just hurting yourself
and the person that u say it to
posted by Edward901
this will be the last chapter i post... the rest you'll have to read in the published book when it's done being written and comes out



Music was playing when I could feel again. Abigail was lying on my bed with me, playing with my hair.
    “Bobby will be home pagina in two hours. I called him when u stopped responding to me.” I recognized the song, it was Bobby's favorite. He had told me that I was who it reminded him of.
    I looked away from Abby, ashamed. “I can't believe how selfish I am. He was finally where he wanted to be and I dragged him away...
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posted by angels
the time we have is so very precious...
u can blink of turn and it is like a whole lifetime has passed
a fiend whom has helped me in so many ways has, in a blink of an eye it seems
has gotten older and i have trouble seeing that time has passed so quick
even now the newer vrienden and family it seems change in a blink
u are left wondering where was i when did all of this change........
in the dag to dag routines of life sometimes u can forget how precious life, friends, family, even your pets, and just people u meet can just be so different; the volgende time u really take the time to...
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posted by elanor260
I wrote this a few months ago. Any feedback is greatly appreciated!

Black Roses

At the end of the day, the sun slowly set, painting the sky in a brilliant regenboog of colors. She looked across the golden field, staring at the horizon. Her expression was that of one who is looking for something, but cannot figure out quite what. A slight breeze stirred the tall grass, creating the semblance of waves. Her hair moved slightly as she looked down at her lap, and the three black roses that lay upon it.

The roses meant something, of that she was certain, but she did not remember, not yet. It had been...
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This is a poem I wrote today, 7 May 2008. Feedback/analysis is welcome.

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My eyes have been thirsting for you
These long lonely years
My ears have strained to hear your voice
The boy's enthusiasm for his lover
Has not sagged but rather swelled
With deprivation

Memory paints you
Perfect in wit, charm
Desire

Today I saw u briefly, from afar
I had to avert my eyes
Lest I be consumed
My ears heard your distant laughter
Through all the other noise
In that crowded place

I know that memory lies
But still I shivered
With longing and remorse

Today I also heard of the other man
Now in your life
Somewhere...
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So one may of may not recall that a few months ago, I geplaatst link that I wrote in my high school years and my freshman jaar of college. The purpose of this was to compare it to the work I was required to do in my poetry class (a pre-req for the creative writing track of the English major). Since I recently discovered that I was accepted to the track (yay for me!), I decided it was time to post the results of that poetry class to compare to my other poems.

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sapling

fingers curl like dead leaves and grip a
fleshy branch which tickles

lines of stories etched in arching
looping whorls rub against...
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posted by Edward901
Rulers of Darkness

Hunting. The best word in a vampire's vocabulary.
    “Ready?” Abby asked me expectantly.
    “Ready.”
    Our eyes dilated and all of our senses were down. I crouched low,listening, the world no longer had any secrets. Wind rustled leaves, a storm was coming in a couple of days. A deer grazed peacefully, not what I wanted. Abby attacked a grizzly. Nope. Finally, I heard it. A pack of gray wolves.
    Wolves were my favoriete drink. They always hunted in a pack, a canine family. Something that...
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posted by Edward901
this is part of my book that i wrote... tell me how it is...

Rulers of Darkness

I sat there, watching, waiting, listening for the sound of Abigail calling me. She didn't, she just stood outside my door letting me cool off.
I smiled, I'd wait for her to decide to talk to me, patience was one of my best abilities. Of course, I had to learn patience while others were seconde nature, but time had perfected it.
Abby waited, but her toes tapped impatiently on the other side of the door. I heard her sigh and knew I had won.
An involuntary victory smile formed on my face as the door knob turned....
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posted by Cinders
Preface: I wrote this in tenth grade, when I was sixteen. So it was about four years ago... Comparing it to link which was written four weeks ago, it's interesting to see the changes in those four years. I would love to discuss that. I've updated it for Fanpop, editing and tweaking it from the original which can be found link.



It was probably nothing different to little Ellen, munching ever so innocently on a good-tasting set of keys in the corner, surrounded door blocks and the spilt contents of her poor mother’s purse. Mrs. Shaw had neglected to put the portemonnee out of her dear child’s...
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posted by animelove30
    Butterfly

    A beautiful creature up in the air.
Up above, way up there. Floating around without a care. Through the clouds, over the rainbow. The people stop and stare, it’s just too rare. Above the earth’s surface, flying with the breeze. Gliding through the sky with special ease.     The children wave as she flies by. Up, Up, Up, and higher in the sky. She hovers over the grasslands, and above the sea, how happy this vlinder has to be. She flies over Africa, Europe, and Asia too, everywhere the skies are blue. She never...
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posted by HaleyDewit
Got no reason to cry
I’m okay
Got no reason to hide
I’m okay
Got no reason to run from life
Or to fake a smile
Everything’s perfect this way
I’m okay

Bury me while I’m still breathing
Haunt me while I’m still sleeping
Torture me while I’m still feeling
Everything’s perfect this way
I’m okay


Got no place to run to
But I’m okay
Got no heaven to go through
Still I’m okay
Got no idea what to do
Or how to live without you
But everything’s perfect this way
I’m okay

Bury me while I’m still breathing
Haunt me while I’m still sleeping
Torture me while I’m still feeling
Everything’s perfect...
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posted by HaleyDewit
Frustration is causing me to pull my hair out
Desperation is causing me to cry my hart-, hart out
Imagination has caused my head into the clouds
But realization has caused me to tumble down

Of all the guys I got to know you’re the one I will remember
And I won’t shed a tear, but inside I’ll cry a river

I’m falling back down to earth
My feet steady on the ground
If anything I’ve learned from love
It’s u get lost but never found
Broken down from these emotions
I realize how unfair life is
Still I can’t stop believing
There’s gotta be meer than this


Acting like a teef I abreact on my friends
Hoping...
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posted by HaleyDewit
When u read this
I’ll be gone
Though I never zei I love you
I wrote it in many love songs
All I ever wanted was to be with you
But I guess it was asked too much
Now all I want to do is run away
‘Cause I’ve had enough

I wanna let go
But my hands are tied on you
I wanna walk away
But my feet refuse to move
I’m love struck, u got me completely
And now we’ll never know what might have been


Don’t feel sorry
I’m the one to blame
I shouldn’t have been so damn gutless
And told u straight away
But I guess it’s not very convenient
When you’re living miles apart
Though I know physical distance
Doesn’t...
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Have u ever had a dream? I have. My name is Isabella, but u could call me Izzie. I have 6 siblings, 5 brothers, 1 sister. I can not work out in the field. This is 1859 us as women, we have no rights. My dad was a sailor. He was striped of commanding his ship. I was only 5 when that happened, now I'm 16 the oldest in the house, and I still get no respect! But anyway, my dad smuggled slaves into the north. Well, my dream was to be a carpenter. When I told my dad my dad he zei "Psh! A carpenter! Thats a job for a man, not a skinny girl like you!" That made me furious!
"OHHHHHHHHH! Izzie's...
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