For this one writeing assignment in class we got a bunch of notecards, 5 words for each like and we couldnt switch the words around . and i had weird words but do u think my poem turned out okay for not chooseing my words??

except i added the , as, where ,has, when and the cuz were allowed to add those.and the titel i amde up.here it is.

Unheard dream
the sad imaginitive realistic dream that swells

as forest breezes listen immersely and stare

where quite delirious unknown chaos has soul

when tangy lyrical danger crashes happily

the swaying seasonal roses whisper passionatly


i know it dosent make any sense..but i couldnt mocve the words around to differnt lines.lol
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Magicuser said:
not sure if my opinion means anything... but i like it!
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katana64 said:
it sounds ok to me gegeven the circumstances
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thanks(: yove answered a lot of my stuff anything i can do u you??
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i do it for fun, really i have to thank u for putting it up
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okay(:
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CMJCMJLG said:
It's really great I would like to try that some time!

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make notecars with a bunch of random words..even flamingo!!!! and then shuffle it and draw five and put it in five piles and those are your words!
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