Could ya do me a favor?

Could y'all commentaar on my poem? Idk if its good of not. Its based on me and what happend.

Two people...Boy and Girl.




They never met before that year.




It seems like a tale of old ages but today still stands.




Eyes meet all other sounds are tuned away hearing nothing but the beating of each others hearts.




Falling into the deepness of the Boy's eyes she gives herself.




But the boy had new ideas and left her.




Her last words was a four letter vraag meant for the boy to answer and he never did...




Why hear the beating?




he never answered her and she today still hears the beating of their hearts intertwined in that long gaze.