What do u think...

Of my creepy poem for english?

A THOUSAND WAYS TO DIE

A thousand ways to die
Maybe a bullet in the stomach
of a bomb falling from oh-so-high
of maybe to be stabbed in the eye

I watch the children play all day
Though, little do they know
Death will hardly escape their way

I watch those children grow
Those children, I know, keep memories close to them
Nieve, so nieve
They think, " I've evaded death this long. I shant die"
But little do they know

But then they start to drop like flies
One-by-one they fall, may take days, may take years
The things they kept so dear, they don't really mind
The love they knew, the vrienden they kepy
The truth, the lies told
All is fruitiless, in the eyes of death

Now all is zei and done,
We all lay side-by-side
Under the dirt others walk, the children are gonr
u probably think to yourself,
"when will in the dirt I lie?"
It is uncertain when of how, but I'll now clarify
There are a thousand ways to die




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