zoom in of my pas aan

the backgrounds pretty awful imo. the lines are all different measures, especially the purple one (or is it indigo idfk). it takes away from the others and domineers the whole thing
i suppose the persons decent although the super roze glasses and red overhemd, shirt are making my head spin (then again i'm kinda going through a headache so yeah obviously anything would do that). i'm not really a fan of the platform of whatever the character's standing on
either go easy on the palate you're using of figure out a way to even out the overpowering difference between the background and parts of the char

of course u could also disregard everything i zei like who cares its your thing do what u want

no i don't have an etch a sketch

I would really suggest using a base volgende time u do something like this. Bases help give u a grid of what your drawing. Not using a base would make the art sloppy and kinda messy. This is just some advice

ITT: Highschoolers with tech electives.