Do u Think She is Good Now?

My Oc Dani was used to be called a Mary Sure for being most perfect, most beautiful, most talented, had a super tragic past, has like E cups x3 always wore slutty clothes x3 but recently I changed her up quite a bit. Now she has C cups, she has her flaws, she isn't the most beautiful but she is still attractive c: to some people x3 not all guys fall for her, she's meer of a tomboy! and when she was a Mary Sue she was also a 'tomboy' not really xD didn't seem like it x3 Do u think she's better now? x3 Mary Sue Dani is on the left, normal Dani is on the right? x3
 Do u Think She is Good Now?
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BlondLionEzel said:
Yes.
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egyptprincess7 said:
Kinda. I don't understand though why having E cups though is a mary sue but okay. What flaws though because if u have the standard cutesy type flaws well then u didn't do much to her. u do need to change the super tragic past part. She still has mary-sue qualities.
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Yeah I do like E-Cup breasts
BlondLionEzel posted een jaar geleden
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Doesn't have one now what? Explain.
egyptprincess7 posted een jaar geleden
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Oh she doesn't have a tragic past anymore
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sieluvzsoul said:
Sure
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x-Yumi-x3 said:
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misscindyspice said:
Well, she is much better now (not that she was bad before), but I honestly find being a stereotypical "tomboy" character is almost as bad as being a stereotypical girly-girl character, as the whole "Tomboy bad-ass chick who thinks that all girly crap is horrible and needs to die", is pretty overused. If u don't make the tomboyishness too overblown, I feel that Dani could be a very good character. :)
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neonClouds said:


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MineTurtle5 said:
Yes! Totally!
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KissKissHannah said:
I think the changing of breast size wasn't necessary. I think your OC is good now anyway. :3
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misscrazel said:
Great improvement, good job! ♥♣☻☺
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E-Scope90 said:
Am I the only one that thought this was about Miley Cyrus?
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