I Know it Sucks Dx but What Do u Think?

Of these lyrics I wrote, obviously they aren't done yet but I just want to know if it's still good. I think it sucks because I cannot write lyrics for my life.

"It's time to face the destiny. just stand in time, release the flames. Every dag u just see the sights,


Chorus

Stand tall, stand now and see what we're fighting for. Die now, die trying. We all just live in big shame, incomplete history. Listen to those who care."



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BlondLionEzel said:
Nice :)
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THank u :)
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sieluvzsoul said:
Very good
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thanks! :)
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pokemonfan909 said:
Its nice. Why do u think it sucks?
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Because I never wrote a song before and I know I suck at it
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u don't....
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misscrazel said:
It's great, if u want any tips on songwriting message me. ^-^
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Alright will do ^^
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True-Finn-Fan said:
i can dig it... u know what's so weird? i wrote a song earlier today for a completely different reason and was just thinking "somebodies gonna post something and toon me up" XD

coincidences.
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*somebody's
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I want to hear your song! ^-^
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^ :)
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x-Yumi-x3 said:
Sounds like bvb.
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really??
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luv_warriorcatz said:
it sounds kinda preachy though idc much for lyrics anyways, i just listen for the actual song
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