Just a manga (or anime) scene I made myself. What do u think?

I made this in a game. I don't know if anybody heard of it of plays it too but I made it in this website:

www.rinmarugames.com/all_games.php?category=17.

If anybody can't read what's in the speech bubbles, just let me know. The letters are smaller than they were when I was making this. And if u want, u can go to the website, just play around with it and make a scene yourself. There's lots to choose from. But its worth it. And its fun. I go there all the time and make whatever I want


 Just a manga (or anime) scene I made myself. What do u think?
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shadowlover3000 said:
Just from what I'm seeing, there are a few typos in there that're distracting. The art style is really cool, but u never type out the action in a comic- as it the female's dialogue with "*cocks gun*". The action is always drawn. I also think it would be meer aesthetically pleasing if u centered the text in the bubbles (or boxes), mostly because it would take up meer space. I appreciate the expression on the male, but the female doesn't seem too reactive. Me personally, I think this would work better with a couple of panels rather than one. Again, the artwork is awesome! The shading is beautiful, and the style is attractive, but I think there's still room for improvement technical wise. Hope that helps! :3
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I didn't know if I was able to make meer than one bubble in one character of not. And the girl is suppose to be annoyed and irritated door the blue man. She's supposed to look irritated. That's why she does look reactive. I can try again and see if I can make another (action) bubble for the gun cocking
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I mean "doesn't"
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Yea I know. And thks
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