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poem i wrote:)

it sucks but oh well..ill take constructive criticism. plzz rate it between 1-10

here it goes:

shooting star( the title)

i look up at the sky at night
even when its dark its bright
and if i where to crinqe in fright
i know u would hold me, tonight
your kinda like my shooting star
your not near but your not far
i wait for u dag and night
i want u to say its allright
u are there
u arent far
u are my
shooting star

mm. i hope thats how it went. well..im not really into poetry and thts my first poem ever!

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peterslover said:
Well done! Very artistic, clever, poetic.


One thing though, this does NOT belong in the question. This is an article. fans will see that u geplaatst an article, that shows up in the updates just like questions, picks, etc!
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Well done! Very artistic, clever, poetic. One thing though, this does NOT belong in the question. This is an article. fans will see that u geplaatst an article, that shows up in the updates just like questions, picks, etc!
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oh..okay. i didnt know if anyone really answered artivles. lol. ill remember that
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And u can post afbeeldingen there too!
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Keep up with your poetry! Well done!
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volleyblue13 said:
I love it! so cute :)
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mikeguy said:
i think is awesome and better than mine
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nah! i like yours better! we should write one together one day. jk..im not really into poetry
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demon_wolf said:
I think its really good. Its sweet. I like it. =D. I would give it 5 stars if it was geplaatst in an article. ^^
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oh...ooops. i didnt know we could post those at the time.lol
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Its alright. =). All thats matters is that people like the poem. ^^
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clevercaoimhe said:
it sweet u should do meer poetry=)
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i may
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archiejake1991 said:
I love it.....awesome.i'll give 10/10.:)
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thanks!
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amethyst44 said:
so cute!! I love it!! Keep writing---it seems like u have a career ahead of you!!! :D
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lol..i wanna be a wrter but notwh poetry!
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rkrahu said:
I like that Your first attempt then it's very well
U just attaching someone who is special like special shooting star.
Shooting ster gives u expectation of wishes
and in poet someone like shooting star.
1-2 word I can't recognized but whole is superb
keep it up
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