Since I think this is meer of an opinion article, that's what it will be. I don't even know why I picked fan fiction in the first place.
Anyways, I know my first part was kinda suckish, so hopefully this one is better. Plus, I'll write this in past tense since present tense is too hard. Infact, however many parts there will be will be in past tense. I probably worded that incorrectly. Well, u know what I mean..right? Enjoy! :)
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Courtney said, "Where should we go?" m
Duncan said, "I'm suprised your first words weren't an insult." d
Courtney said, "I'm over whatever happened in TDWT."
Duncan said, "So u don't hate me of Gwen?" b
Courtney said, "Well, not anymore." Duncan smiled. They arrived at the submarines and got inside one.
After they closed the hatch, the submarine immeadiately started to fill with water. Courtney screamed, "Hey! What gives?" She looked at the water rising up to her ankles.
Duncan said, "What the?" The water was up to his knees.
Courtney said, "We've got to get out of here!" She rushes to open the hatch. "It won't budge!"
Duncan said, "Let me try." Courtney moves out the way so Duncan can open the hatch. The hatch barely moves. "Oh c'mon! This is just like 'Masters of Disasters' all over again."
Courtney said, "Well there must be a way out of here!"
"Right u are, Courtney." It was Star's voice.
"Are u doing this, Star", Courtney asked in a panicky voice. The water was already up to her waist.
"Maybe I am. Maybe I'm not."
"You better stop this right now, Star", Duncan zei in a threatening voice.
"I'm not afraid of u anymore, Duncan. Plus, what can u do to me? Your locked in a submarine about to drown in the uprising water. Besides, there nothing I can do to make it stop."
Courtney said, "Well, u can't leave us in here to drown!"
"Unfornately, you're right again Courtney. I can't leave u both in there. But, I can get one of u out of there."
The water was up to his chest. Duncan said, "What do u mean?"
"Well, u have to choose one person to stay and die. While the other person escapes with their life."
Courtney said, "Are u serious?"
"As a hart-, hart attack. Now choose, and I'd hurry. The water is getting higher and higher door the minute."
Duncan said, "I'll stay, u go Courtney."
Courtney said, "What? u choose me? I thought for sure-"
Duncan cut her off. "Look, I have no time to explain why I choose you. Just go before the water goes above your head." He realized that the water was up to Courtney's chin. "Star, I choose Courtney." Just then, they heard the hatch loosen.
Courtney grabbed it an opened the hatch. Before she got out completely, she said, "Thanks Duncan."
"No problem, Princess." Courtney closed the hatch and swam for the surface.
Once on shore, Courtney heard Star's voice say, "Return to the mess hall, Courtney." Courtney ran to it.
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I hope u liked this one. Sorry if it's a little short. I'm writing this at 2:15 in the morning and my brain isn't really functioning.
So, this is how everthing is going to go. Two people about to die and only one person is chosen to stay alive. Yeah, I'm pretty messed up in the head.
Anyways, please leave u vragen and commentaren below.
Also, u might be wondering why I put those letters at the beginning of the story. Well, I wrote that first part on my cell phone and when I typed it on the computer, the words went on another line. So I put those letters there to keep it all on the same line. There. One vraag answered.
So, like I zei before, leave your other vragen and commentaren below.
Anyways, I know my first part was kinda suckish, so hopefully this one is better. Plus, I'll write this in past tense since present tense is too hard. Infact, however many parts there will be will be in past tense. I probably worded that incorrectly. Well, u know what I mean..right? Enjoy! :)
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Courtney said, "Where should we go?" m
Duncan said, "I'm suprised your first words weren't an insult." d
Courtney said, "I'm over whatever happened in TDWT."
Duncan said, "So u don't hate me of Gwen?" b
Courtney said, "Well, not anymore." Duncan smiled. They arrived at the submarines and got inside one.
After they closed the hatch, the submarine immeadiately started to fill with water. Courtney screamed, "Hey! What gives?" She looked at the water rising up to her ankles.
Duncan said, "What the?" The water was up to his knees.
Courtney said, "We've got to get out of here!" She rushes to open the hatch. "It won't budge!"
Duncan said, "Let me try." Courtney moves out the way so Duncan can open the hatch. The hatch barely moves. "Oh c'mon! This is just like 'Masters of Disasters' all over again."
Courtney said, "Well there must be a way out of here!"
"Right u are, Courtney." It was Star's voice.
"Are u doing this, Star", Courtney asked in a panicky voice. The water was already up to her waist.
"Maybe I am. Maybe I'm not."
"You better stop this right now, Star", Duncan zei in a threatening voice.
"I'm not afraid of u anymore, Duncan. Plus, what can u do to me? Your locked in a submarine about to drown in the uprising water. Besides, there nothing I can do to make it stop."
Courtney said, "Well, u can't leave us in here to drown!"
"Unfornately, you're right again Courtney. I can't leave u both in there. But, I can get one of u out of there."
The water was up to his chest. Duncan said, "What do u mean?"
"Well, u have to choose one person to stay and die. While the other person escapes with their life."
Courtney said, "Are u serious?"
"As a hart-, hart attack. Now choose, and I'd hurry. The water is getting higher and higher door the minute."
Duncan said, "I'll stay, u go Courtney."
Courtney said, "What? u choose me? I thought for sure-"
Duncan cut her off. "Look, I have no time to explain why I choose you. Just go before the water goes above your head." He realized that the water was up to Courtney's chin. "Star, I choose Courtney." Just then, they heard the hatch loosen.
Courtney grabbed it an opened the hatch. Before she got out completely, she said, "Thanks Duncan."
"No problem, Princess." Courtney closed the hatch and swam for the surface.
Once on shore, Courtney heard Star's voice say, "Return to the mess hall, Courtney." Courtney ran to it.
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I hope u liked this one. Sorry if it's a little short. I'm writing this at 2:15 in the morning and my brain isn't really functioning.
So, this is how everthing is going to go. Two people about to die and only one person is chosen to stay alive. Yeah, I'm pretty messed up in the head.
Anyways, please leave u vragen and commentaren below.
Also, u might be wondering why I put those letters at the beginning of the story. Well, I wrote that first part on my cell phone and when I typed it on the computer, the words went on another line. So I put those letters there to keep it all on the same line. There. One vraag answered.
So, like I zei before, leave your other vragen and commentaren below.
before u read, i have something to say. if u don't like my opinion, DON'T SAY ANYTHING! people are entitled to thier opinions.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~Characters I LOVE!~~~~~~~~~~~
1.Courtney :D
2.Bridgette ;D
3.Lindsay :)
4.Cody <3
5.Trent
6.Gwen
7.Duncan
8.Izzy
9.Katie
10.Dj
11.Leshawna
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Characters i like!~~~~~~~~
12.Geoff
13.Tyler
14.Sierra
15.Owen
16.Beth
17.Sadie
18.Noah
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Characters i HATE!~~~~~~~
19.Eva
20.Ezekiel
21.Harold
22.Justin
23.Heather
24.Alejandro >:(
~~~~~~~~~~~~~Characters I LOVE!~~~~~~~~~~~
1.Courtney :D
2.Bridgette ;D
3.Lindsay :)
4.Cody <3
5.Trent
6.Gwen
7.Duncan
8.Izzy
9.Katie
10.Dj
11.Leshawna
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Characters i like!~~~~~~~~
12.Geoff
13.Tyler
14.Sierra
15.Owen
16.Beth
17.Sadie
18.Noah
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Characters i HATE!~~~~~~~
19.Eva
20.Ezekiel
21.Harold
22.Justin
23.Heather
24.Alejandro >:(
Katie:She is married to Noah and has one little baby girl names Maxine. She works with Lindsay as her assistant fshion designer. She makes a lot of money and is famous for her and Lindsay's designs.
Beth:She is married to her boyfriend from TDA Brady and they dont have a child yet. She is still vrienden with Lindsay and she gets discounts for all of Lindsay's designs. She works as a girls scout leader and gets payed door the school board for the work she does.
Lindsay:She works with Katie. She runs her own world wide fashion company that is doing GREAT! She is married to Tyler and has a baby boy named Jordan. She is famous all through out the world.
Izzy:She is married to Owen and they have a little girl named Sally. She works as a movie ster and gota little therapy for her craziness. She sometimes helps Owen run his meat shack which is the best place to get quality meat even he has vegetarian meat he sells for the vegetarians.
Beth:She is married to her boyfriend from TDA Brady and they dont have a child yet. She is still vrienden with Lindsay and she gets discounts for all of Lindsay's designs. She works as a girls scout leader and gets payed door the school board for the work she does.
Lindsay:She works with Katie. She runs her own world wide fashion company that is doing GREAT! She is married to Tyler and has a baby boy named Jordan. She is famous all through out the world.
Izzy:She is married to Owen and they have a little girl named Sally. She works as a movie ster and gota little therapy for her craziness. She sometimes helps Owen run his meat shack which is the best place to get quality meat even he has vegetarian meat he sells for the vegetarians.
Noah's P.O.V
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I remember the first dag at camp Wawanaka. I reconized Courtney right away. She's easy to remember. And besides, she's always giving me dirty looks in school. Why? Well it all started Freshaman year. It was pretty obious that she was the smartest girl and I was the smartest guy. We were both running for class president. I won. She was mad. Well, meer then mad. Everytime she saw me she'd eaither look away, try to trip me, of jut give me dirty looks. It wasnt just the election though. It was everything. We were in the same class since pre-school all the way to high-school. And we competed at EVERYTHING. Who wrote better, who had meer friends, who had the best birthday partys. Childish stuff. But for some reason she was acting so nice. To everyone. I needed to find out what was going on. And fast.
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I remember the first dag at camp Wawanaka. I reconized Courtney right away. She's easy to remember. And besides, she's always giving me dirty looks in school. Why? Well it all started Freshaman year. It was pretty obious that she was the smartest girl and I was the smartest guy. We were both running for class president. I won. She was mad. Well, meer then mad. Everytime she saw me she'd eaither look away, try to trip me, of jut give me dirty looks. It wasnt just the election though. It was everything. We were in the same class since pre-school all the way to high-school. And we competed at EVERYTHING. Who wrote better, who had meer friends, who had the best birthday partys. Childish stuff. But for some reason she was acting so nice. To everyone. I needed to find out what was going on. And fast.
Chris - Bradley Cooper
Chef - Djimon Hounsou
Ezikiel - vlaamse gaai, jay Baruchel
Eva - Emily Blunt
Noah - Mark Indelicato
Justin - Taylor Lautner
Katie - Nikki Reed
Tyler - Ben McKenzie
Cody - Michael Cera
Beth - America Ferrera
Sadie - Nikki Blonsky
Courtney - Lacey Chabert
Harold - Rupert Grint
Trent - Elijah Wood
Bridgette - Kate Moss
Lindsay - Anna Faris
DJ - Jamie Foxx
Izzy - Alyson Hannigan
Geoff - Matthew McConaughey
Leshawna - Queen Latifah
Duncan - Joaquin Phoenix
Heather - Satomi Ishihara
Gwen - Amy Lee (she isn't an actress, but what the hell)
Owen - Owen Wilson
Chef - Djimon Hounsou
Ezikiel - vlaamse gaai, jay Baruchel
Eva - Emily Blunt
Noah - Mark Indelicato
Justin - Taylor Lautner
Katie - Nikki Reed
Tyler - Ben McKenzie
Cody - Michael Cera
Beth - America Ferrera
Sadie - Nikki Blonsky
Courtney - Lacey Chabert
Harold - Rupert Grint
Trent - Elijah Wood
Bridgette - Kate Moss
Lindsay - Anna Faris
DJ - Jamie Foxx
Izzy - Alyson Hannigan
Geoff - Matthew McConaughey
Leshawna - Queen Latifah
Duncan - Joaquin Phoenix
Heather - Satomi Ishihara
Gwen - Amy Lee (she isn't an actress, but what the hell)
Owen - Owen Wilson
Courtney
Gwen
Heather
Izzy
Eva
Beth
Harold
Noah
Trent
Yurie
Yumi
Sumer
Brianna
Daisy
Andrea
Brooke
Donna
Anaciapari
Nelly
Lauren
Karen
Jacki
Brittnay
Geena
Rikki
Andi
Lisa
Ronnie (half)
JG
And more...
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To all the rest of us not on this list, we are thankful. Duncan has many loves, and fortunatley, we aren't any of them. And we are thankfull for that.
THIS artikel IS NOTHING OFFENDING THE DUNCAN FANGIRLS, I WAS JUST BORED SO I MADE IT
Gwen
Heather
Izzy
Eva
Beth
Harold
Noah
Trent
Yurie
Yumi
Sumer
Brianna
Daisy
Andrea
Brooke
Donna
Anaciapari
Nelly
Lauren
Karen
Jacki
Brittnay
Geena
Rikki
Andi
Lisa
Ronnie (half)
JG
And more...
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To all the rest of us not on this list, we are thankful. Duncan has many loves, and fortunatley, we aren't any of them. And we are thankfull for that.
THIS artikel IS NOTHING OFFENDING THE DUNCAN FANGIRLS, I WAS JUST BORED SO I MADE IT