My little sister (she's 10) had to make a story in class and it was about a land of treats. She made her favourite character (Lindsay) a lolli-pop and Beth, a chocolate bar and Owen an evil snake! So here's her story...
World Of Treats!
In the World of Treats, there lived two best friends, LindsayPop and BethChoc and they loved to play together.
One day, Lindsay and Beth were playing in the park, when Owen (aka the snake) jumped out of no-where and zei ‘I’m going to take over and eat u up!’ Then they both ran as fast as they could, when Lindsay fell over. Owen grabbed her and ran away with Lindsay! Lindsay screamed at the top, boven of her lungs and yelled ‘Help me! Help me!’ Beth zei back ‘I will save u Lindsay!’ She then thought ‘I have an idea!’
Later Beth went to the snake’s secret lair. ‘How did u know about my secret lair?!’ Owen zei as he appeared. ‘Well, outside it says “Secret Lair” Now give me my friend!’ yelled Beth. Owen replied ‘NO! I will not!’ Beth told him ‘Then I will eat u up!’ ‘You eat me up? u wish!’ Owen zei back. Beth zei ‘Oh, yeah?! I will toon you!’ Beth then started to eat Owen up. ‘Why do I feel a lot smaller? No, no! Tell my mum I love her, NO!’ yelled Owen when he was getting eaten up. ‘Thank you! Thank u so much Beth! Do u want to get something to eat?’ asked Lindsay. ‘No, I’m full!’ Beth replied.
So Owen the snake will never be seen again! Lindsay and Beth will never run into that again and everything was back to the where it was!
World Of Treats!
In the World of Treats, there lived two best friends, LindsayPop and BethChoc and they loved to play together.
One day, Lindsay and Beth were playing in the park, when Owen (aka the snake) jumped out of no-where and zei ‘I’m going to take over and eat u up!’ Then they both ran as fast as they could, when Lindsay fell over. Owen grabbed her and ran away with Lindsay! Lindsay screamed at the top, boven of her lungs and yelled ‘Help me! Help me!’ Beth zei back ‘I will save u Lindsay!’ She then thought ‘I have an idea!’
Later Beth went to the snake’s secret lair. ‘How did u know about my secret lair?!’ Owen zei as he appeared. ‘Well, outside it says “Secret Lair” Now give me my friend!’ yelled Beth. Owen replied ‘NO! I will not!’ Beth told him ‘Then I will eat u up!’ ‘You eat me up? u wish!’ Owen zei back. Beth zei ‘Oh, yeah?! I will toon you!’ Beth then started to eat Owen up. ‘Why do I feel a lot smaller? No, no! Tell my mum I love her, NO!’ yelled Owen when he was getting eaten up. ‘Thank you! Thank u so much Beth! Do u want to get something to eat?’ asked Lindsay. ‘No, I’m full!’ Beth replied.
So Owen the snake will never be seen again! Lindsay and Beth will never run into that again and everything was back to the where it was!
PD: Please dont hurt me....... PLEASE I DO ANY THING!
Guy: Any thing u say well a kiss would not hurt.
PD: Is that all I have to do?
Guy: Yes and play around a little bit.
PD: OK.
N:After a little bit they came to a little river and they kissed for a little bit.But a soon as they stopped the PD punched him in the kisser and took off.
PD:*I really hope he isnt following me*
N: Pretty soon the PD got to the police station and they captured the crimnal and put him in the stony lonsome then the PD stopped her job and is now working in a coffey koop and her name was Courtney.
TO BE CONTINUDE............
Guy: Any thing u say well a kiss would not hurt.
PD: Is that all I have to do?
Guy: Yes and play around a little bit.
PD: OK.
N:After a little bit they came to a little river and they kissed for a little bit.But a soon as they stopped the PD punched him in the kisser and took off.
PD:*I really hope he isnt following me*
N: Pretty soon the PD got to the police station and they captured the crimnal and put him in the stony lonsome then the PD stopped her job and is now working in a coffey koop and her name was Courtney.
TO BE CONTINUDE............
Chris: Hello everyone! Today we're going to Hollywood!
Lucas: Awesome!
Jake: Sweet!
Chris: Everyone get on the Plane!
*everyone gets on the plane*
*On the plane*
Zoey: So what do u think our Challange is going to be this time?
Annie: Hopefully not another sports challange!
Jordan: hallo guys who got voted off of your team?
Lexxi: Briony! Im so happy!
Zack: Yeah, she was bossy!
Chef: Attention everyone, the plane will be landin in 5...4..3..2...1!!!
*The plane lands*
*everyone gets off*
Jared: Ahh, Hollywood smells,good.
Izzy: It smells like Sex and Shoes!
Jake: Um. Okay Then?
Chris: Since we're in Hollywood, the Challange will be a sining contest!
Katy Perry: hallo everyone!
Annie&Lexxi: OMG ITS KATY PERRY!!!
30H!3: Sup
Lucas: Oh my god, u guys are AWESOME!
30H!3: Yeah we know
Chris: Your Challange will be to sing a song door Katy Perry and a song door 30H!3! Got it?
*STAY TUNED FOR PART 2!!*
Lucas: Awesome!
Jake: Sweet!
Chris: Everyone get on the Plane!
*everyone gets on the plane*
*On the plane*
Zoey: So what do u think our Challange is going to be this time?
Annie: Hopefully not another sports challange!
Jordan: hallo guys who got voted off of your team?
Lexxi: Briony! Im so happy!
Zack: Yeah, she was bossy!
Chef: Attention everyone, the plane will be landin in 5...4..3..2...1!!!
*The plane lands*
*everyone gets off*
Jared: Ahh, Hollywood smells,good.
Izzy: It smells like Sex and Shoes!
Jake: Um. Okay Then?
Chris: Since we're in Hollywood, the Challange will be a sining contest!
Katy Perry: hallo everyone!
Annie&Lexxi: OMG ITS KATY PERRY!!!
30H!3: Sup
Lucas: Oh my god, u guys are AWESOME!
30H!3: Yeah we know
Chris: Your Challange will be to sing a song door Katy Perry and a song door 30H!3! Got it?
*STAY TUNED FOR PART 2!!*
Lucas:YA!!!!!!
Martha Stewart:Blaine,and Zoey!
Blaine and Zoey:*hug eachother*OH SORRY!!!
Martha Stewart:LINDSAY IS veilig TOO!!!!!!
Lindsay:YAY!!!!!!
Martha Stewart:And Dani and Patrick is left
Dani:*crys*
Martha Stewart:And the last sweet hart-, hart goes to...DANI!!!!!!!!
Patrick:WHAT?!
Martha Steart:2 people voted off Dani,4 people voted off you!
Patrick:*eavs in the love boat*
Dani:WAIT!Who am I dating then?
Martha Stewart:NO one!You'll have to play the rest of the game alone!
Dani:*crys*PATRICK!!!!!!!!
Martha Stewart:Find out what happens volgende time on TOTAL,DRAMA,COUPLES!!!!!
(episode 2 coming soon!)
*votting gym*
chris:okay 1 vote to gwen
mike:gulp
chris:2 stemmen gwen
mike:no
gwen:like i zei behind the scenes your dead
chris:3 stemmen gwen
gwen:grrrr
chris:4 stemmen gwen... gwen i,m sorry but you,ve been elemanated
gwen:i wonder how *punches mike*
chef & tdr gaurd:come on *grabs gwen*
scout:can i see duncan now
chris:sure in the new behind the scenes show
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chris:okay 1 vote to gwen
mike:gulp
chris:2 stemmen gwen
mike:no
gwen:like i zei behind the scenes your dead
chris:3 stemmen gwen
gwen:grrrr
chris:4 stemmen gwen... gwen i,m sorry but you,ve been elemanated
gwen:i wonder how *punches mike*
chef & tdr gaurd:come on *grabs gwen*
scout:can i see duncan now
chris:sure in the new behind the scenes show
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