Twilight Series Club
kom bij
Fanpop
New Post
Explore Fanpop
New Moon came out the 20th. Since then, I've seen it 5 times. Each time, I noticed a few things I didn't catch the first time.

I'll start off with the things that were the same everytime I watched it.

-Taylor's Acting: I tried to give him the benefit of the doubt, but he did a terrible job. Not necessarily as Jacob, but as an actor. I may sound harsh, but he went over the top, boven in many scenes. I'm not saying Kristen of Rob's acting was extraordinary, but Taylor's was extremely blatant and noticeable. Scene in particular:
- the movie theatre scene: "Do u want me to put u in the hospital?!" I understand Jacob's character has dramatic changes, and he feels out of control all the time, spontaneous mood swings, but this was over the top.
- but what I did like: when Jacob went to Bella's room. Taylor's acting was still terrible. But his facial expression when he looked at the dream catcher on her headboard, it translated as sadness. I could feel his sadness that it wasn't the same as before. I thought he translated that well in that one look.

- Victoria. I felt Victoria's storyline wasn't closed in New Moon. In Twilight, at the end of the movie, we see her leaving their prom, with a rageful, plotting look. In New Moon, the last glimpse we see of Victoria is in the water. This ties in with the cliff hanger. I didn't have a problem with it, but I thought they could have done it differently. They could have stayed closer to the book. In the book, the proposal, Bella actually answered yes. In the movie, when it cuts off to before she answered, it can be interpretted as doubt and reluctance. That's not at all how it was in the book. She is shocked that he would ask that of her. She doesn't know if he's serious. I know the idea of a cliff hanger is to keep the audience guessing, but that particular cliff hanger strayed from the book. A different way to end it could have been Bella saying yes. Then the cliff hanger would be with Victoria. In the script draft, they had Victoria driving to Seattle in a taxi. There was a New Moon still with Rachelle as Victoria in a taxi driving. That means, they did shoot that scene. Chris Weitz, in a recent interview, zei it would be on the dvd. Why not have it in the movie? it would have nicely tied up Victoria's whereabouts.

If Summit wouldn't allow that to be in the movie because of Rachelle not being in Eclipse, therefore refusing to have Rachelle have meer screentime, then they need to suck it up. The fans all hate their douchebagish decision, but not doing the movie right because they don't want the fans to be too attatched to Rachelle as Victoria is wrong. I'm impartial to the ending, but I would have ended it with Victoria going to Seattle, just like they had it in the script. Leaving the cliffhanger to Bella and Edward's engagement, Eclipse should have romance. But, with the recent news about Eclipse, it doesn't sound that way, and now, I am very nervous for the third installment.

Little things I noticed that had an big impact:

- during Bella's depression, the 4 maand spin around of her in the chair, if u notice her room, with each passing month, her room becomes meer empty. The pictures on the uithangbord vanish.
- when Bella sets out to find their meadow, when she arrives, she falls on her knees. Like in the book, she clutches herself, trying to keep her insides from falling out.

As for the rest of the movie: I thought they stuck very close to the book. I particularly liked how they incorporated Bella's quotes from the book in emails [to Alice]. Even though that [the emails] didn't happen in the book, I thought it showed how much she missed the Cullens.

The Italy scene, even though I wished it were longer, particularly Edward and Bella's reunion kiss, it was still good. I liked how they had some of the quotes from Chapter 24: Truth in there.

Their post Italy talk was a little disappointing. I wished it were longer as well. Even though there were some great quotes in there such as "He won't forgive me so easily. Can you? Because honestly, I don't know how to live without you." I wish the famous "Before u Bella, my life was like a moonless night..." quote was in there.

But, I was very pleased with this movie. The always shirtless wolfpack was unnecessary though. My friend asked me why they were always shirtless and she thought it was unnecessary as well. Did I like it better than Twilight? I think so. It follows closely with the book, and the look and the feel of the movie is meer cinematical and professional. The middle of the movie without Edward was slow moving to me. But, maybe that's how it's supposed to be.

Hope u liked this review. It's not as complex as I thought it would be and it didn't go into very much detail. But please commentaar if you'd like :)
Chapter 6.

Ok I just wanted to say that since its a teef to highlight the colors and that on this computer (my) Everything is just going to be black from now on. Back to the story.

Emmett grabbed your hand a waked u inside, luckily Esme and Carlise where sitting back on the couch. Esme turned around because she heard u crying. "___, is everything ok?" u just started crying even harder. "umm, Carlisle, Esme, can I talk to u in the keuken-, keuken for a minute." "Absolutely Emmett." Carlisle says while him and Esme rush to the kitchen. Emmett follows behind. u just sit down on the divan, bank with...
continue reading...
posted by a-jforever
After fixing and eating thee I decided I was tired enough to go to bed. It was ten o’clock so I guess it was acceptable. I climbed under the cold sheets, quickly falling asleep, dreaming of my visit to Renesmee’s tomorrow.

I moaned as my alarm went off knowing it was six thirty and that I had to go to school. I switched on my giant stereo dancing around to some of my favourite songs while I was showering and getting dressed. door the time I had turned if off and got down stairs my parents had already left for work which ment I needed to hunt for my keys. There was a knock at the front door....
continue reading...
Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume Five
BuffyFaithfan1
________________________
[FOUR]
    "Let's see who we lost." I said, and we went over to the battle's remnants.
    "We won!" Shropee said, and I was happy to see her.
    "Yay! Haus is dead!" I zei and everyone cheered. "Where's Tabra?"
    "He's over there." Pattsy zei as she passed me to talk to Jerek.
    I walked over to Tabra as he pulled an arrow out of his leg. Ew. Ow. He saw me and we hugged. "Nice fighting." I zei and he smiled.
    "Thanks,...
continue reading...
Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume Three
BuffyFaithfan1
_______________________________
[EIGHTEEN]
    THE volgende DAY: Jerek and I woke up, ate breakfast, showered seperately, and got ready to train. I was ready for the training, but I didn't quite know what we were going to use to train with since the basement is already full with the bunkers, the kitchen, Shropee's hospital room, the little meeting room, and Jerek's room. Upstairs is full too, unless there is a HUGE room that lets us all train.
    "Jerek, where is the training room?" I asked and he told me...
continue reading...
posted by bluemc24
As I lay on the steps ,my head in Alice's lap,
I realised I love her meer thn my own life, and maybe Bella was right. I might be over protective, but if Alice''s life ended,
so would mine. I would not live without her. Before I knew her I thought me life was ok,
but now I've met her I would never dream of going back to my life before her.
just then, i imagined the image of her tiny body
fighting a newborn.
the thought made me shudder. maybe like wolves vampires could imprint, carlisle and esme, rosealie and emmet, me and alice. i woud of finished that thought if alice hadn't started talking to herself and mumbling about the pictures being striaght but not straight anough.....
( Some of u who have read my vorige chapters know that in Renn and Jake's Life Chapter 23, I mentioned events of Nessie's "17th" birthday. I decided to write a chapter on the story of that event. I hope u like it! )

I woke up and noticed that it was still dark outside, but I didn't care. Today I, and my family would officially consider me an adult. It felt so good, that I was just jumping with excitement.


I was tired of them making decisions for me. I wanted so bad to be free, and this was my chance.

I glanced towards the window, and could see just barely the reddish tint around the edges...
continue reading...
Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume Two
BuffyFaithfan1
__________________
[FOUR]
    I jumped up and whipped out my gun, aimed it for Haus' chest and fired twice. Haus went down in a second.
    "Let's go!" I zei and Rick jumped into the room, brandishing his knives.
    Tabra grabbed his arm, twisted it around and snapped it. Clean break, sounded like, if not, good! He deserved the suffering. Rick went down on one knee, and I shot at him, the bullet entered his skull. He's a goner.
    A chick walked in then, carrying a whip and slung it at Tabra. It wrapped around his neck and she started to pull.
    "Let him go!" I shouted and shot at her, she got hit in the leg.
    "You bitch!" She said, released Tabra and slashed her whip at me.
    It knocked the gun out of my hand.
    "Let's do this," She dropped her whip and walked towards me.
    "First class whore!" I spat and she gasped.
    "I'll kill u for that."
    Uh-oh!
"now i know" he mutted
"know what" i was curious.
"where u got u looks from" i smiled while he blushed.

we arived at the house it was a pretty house not something i was use too as it was a little small.
"what?" i hadnt realised that he was looking at me ontil he had spoken.
"you house. its its beautiful isnt it?"i didnt realise ontil i zei it that this was true his house was beautiful. i could see my self living in it.
"its allright nothing compared to your though" he smiled but i could see he felt emivious.
i didnt like the hurt in his eyes it somehow caused me pain.
"so are we just going...
continue reading...
posted by Tatti
So I've decided to continue, hope you'll like it. Please leave a commentaar and thanks for reading.

After 5 months

New York

I was exhausted. And I looked terrible. Of course I have many reasons to be happy : first, I've just arrested one of the biggest dealers in the state, second, I am alive and not even injured after that. I shouldn't worry about my appearance right now - I was working undercover. But few guys on the other side of the road whistled and I felt bad again. I wasn't used to walking on straat dressed like girl who probably sleeps at night clubs. I stopped to look at my reflection in...
continue reading...
posted by Tatti
Esme made me avondmaal and since Jake has already gone I was eating alone. It was good that no one bothered me - I had too many thoughts. Bella's vraag pulled out some dark memories I was struggling to forget. It was a bit like Nessie's touch, I could feel something pulsing in my head. Maybe they were right about the shield? of it was just another headache?
When I finnished I asked Esme if I can go sleep and she lead to the same bedroom. I lied on bed for a long uur trying to fall asleep but nothing. I sighed angrily and changed my position. I hated doing nothing. And then someone knocked on...
continue reading...
posted by LexisFaith
hallo guys! Since so many of u wanted teh volgende one so soon, I decided I would go ahead a do it.
As u can see this one is in Renesmee's point of view for those team edwards out there. Hope u enjoy!
__________________________________________________

Drive faster was not in order when Dad was driving. His speedometer needle couldn't go any further but Mom continued to tell him to hurry.
"Bella, I'm going as fast as I can. I quite frankly can't go any faster."
Mom sighed and pinched the bridge of her nose.

When we reach the hospital Jake carried me in with all the rest of my family behind me. We...
continue reading...
"Well the sent was easy enough to catch. door the way, your room reeks."
"I'll buy some air freshener." She replied.
I laughed and silence took over. Guess now is as good of a time as ever.
"Can I ask u something?" I asked taking the plate from her hand.
"That depends on what u want to know."
"I'm not trying to be a jerk of anything-I'm honestly curious." I assured her.
"Fine." She sighed. "Go ahead."
I stalled for a moment deciding if I really wanted to know of not. I finally asked anyway. "What's it like-having a vampire for a boyfried?"
She rolled her eyes. "It's the best."
"I'm serious. The idea...
continue reading...
As I removed the New moon-disc from my dvd-player, I thought to myself: Maybe I shouldn't see Eclipse in theaters?

Don't get me wrong, I absolutely love Twilight and want to see Eclipse as soon as possible. The thing is, when I was first introduced to the series, it was through the first film. I had rented it and didn't know what it was. I sat alone in my room with a glass of coke and watched it late at night. I was instantly hooked. I couldn't get over how incredibly interesting it all was; the story, the characters and above all the boeken i hadn't yet read. I quickly hurried to my computer...
continue reading...
posted by CarlislesLover
Sorry for the delay.
XXXX



I woke up on the plane with Jacob sat volgende to me. “Where are we going Jake?”

“Dubai”

“Wow. That must have been really expensive”

“I stal Carlisle’s wallet and somehow figured out his pin number”

“Is Carlisle the doctor?”

“Yes”

“I guess he has loads of money then”

“He defiantly does”

“What if the credit card gets tracked down?”

“Oh don’t worry we’re going to put the money on to a different credit card and then burn this one”

“Ok”

2 Years later


I’m twenty now and Jacob was eighteen. I’m married to him and we live in Dubai together,...
continue reading...
posted by Tatti
"Hey, I zei toon your hands!" I screamed but apparently my voice and gun didn't left them any impression - they didn't moved, they even didn't look scared. What if my gun is useless against them? "I zei HANDS! Don't make me shoot you" - again with no effect. Suddenly blond started moving towards so quickly that I hardly could see him. I had time only to make one step back before he appeared in front of me. For a seconde I was praying cause I was sure I will die but while I was looking at him Edward and Bella also moved and they were standing door me either.
"Jasper, calm down. We are not killers"...
continue reading...
"hulk mad" kevin bellowed "hulk...... SMASH!!!"
he leaped up to meet the car before it could brake grabbed the front bumper and flipped it over his head so that it struck the pavment upside down with a squreal of bending metal and shattering glass inside a women started screaming.

"oh man" diego zei shacking his head he was pretty with dark dense curly black hair big wide eyes and really full lips but then who wasnt pretty ? even kevin and raouls morons were pretty. "kevin were supose to be laying low riley said-"
"riley said" kevin mimicked in a harsh soprano "get a spine diego riley is not...
continue reading...
posted by smileyfaceddude
She turned and walked out gracefully. Once she was out the room, I counted to a hundred. With a hand trembling I touched the latest stinging bite and grimaced in pain. Blood was on my finger-tips.
I felt like crying! But will I really start blubbering like a lost child? Give Cornelia satisfaction of knowing how I took this? No! No! No, I won't!
But, WHY ME?! Tough I would be guilty I would see someone in my place, like this. Hm. Yet again, I sighed.
I can't take this frustration much longer! I felt like screaming! I, reluctantly, brought my eyes to the look of the "food". Sigh. I picked it...
continue reading...
 This is the dress Bella wore(don't worry-it'll be the same dare-she won't be wearing this for long)
This is the dress Bella wore(don't worry-it'll be the same dare-she won't be wearing this for long)
Rosalie’s P.O.V:
I was frickin’ mad. I could seduce Edward Cullen. It’s not really that hard. He’s a boy, for crying out loud. When I got home, Emmett was watching football screaming, “NO! YES! NO! YES! YES!!!!!” then he looked over at me, “Oh hey, heard u and Bella and Alice got in a fight.” “Yep.” I said. “But what do u care, u still like her.” “You will then, eventually.” He turned the TV off and put me on his lap. “Thanks,” I whispered. He smiled, “For what?” “Making me feel bet…” that’s when she walked in. Emmett looked over and took me...
continue reading...
posted by CarlislesLover
I'm sorry u had to wai a while for this one.
XXX




I stepped through looking around, it was pitch black and I couldn’t see anything. Then the door slammed behind me. I ran at it pulling the handle down but it wouldn’t open. I heard laughter echoing in the room of whatever it was I was in. I walked vooruit, voorwaarts putting my hands in front of me feeling around to see if anything was here. I found another door which I opened. It lead me into another pitch black room. I ran my hands up the walls searching for lights but I didn’t find anything. I found yet again a door which opened. Every door I opened...
continue reading...
posted by CarlislesLover
This isn't the end!
XXXXX




I stood there shocked no normal vampire was this skinny and I didn’t think that if a vampire didn’t have blood for a while that it would make them lose weight. He breathed in and turned around to face me. “WHAT DO u WANT u MONSTER?” I screamed at him. I was so angry that he had threatened to kill my friend and that he’d been following me and my daughter. “I want you” He whispered “WHO ARE YOU?” Alice put her hand on my shoulder wanting me to calm down. Renesmee was sat behind Hannah terrified and Hannah was just beyond shocked and scared. I could...
continue reading...