This is my new fanfiction. Its a little different to the others i had geleden at writing. But I hope thats a good thing.
Hell had just broken loose. “You can’t see Jacob for a while, u understand Renesmee?” What on earth was dad talking about why couldn’t I see Jacob.
“WHY?” I screeched
“BECAUSE IT’S GETTING IN THE WAY OF YOUR SCHOOL GRADES.” Dad shouted back.
This just wasn’t fair. Jacob had nothing to do with school. My school grades were my responsibilities and if I wasn’t doing as well as I could, then that was up to me to sort out, not Dad. And banning me from seeing Jacob defiantly wasn’t going to help. It would probably make things even worse than they were.
“RENESMEE ARE u LISTENING TO ME?” my dad shouted.
“YES!” I shouted back.
“Edward I don’t think that stopping Renesmee seeing Jac...” My mother started, trying to reason with dad. “Let me deal with this” Dad told her. Mum sighed, giving me a sympathetic look and heading out of the house.
“Are we clear, Renesmee?” Dad asked.
“Yes.” I whispered. Tears were staring to form in my eyes.
“Good.” He nodded.
“I HATE YOU!” I shouted running out of the house and into the woods, hot, angry tears flowing down both my cheeks.
Hell had just broken loose. “You can’t see Jacob for a while, u understand Renesmee?” What on earth was dad talking about why couldn’t I see Jacob.
“WHY?” I screeched
“BECAUSE IT’S GETTING IN THE WAY OF YOUR SCHOOL GRADES.” Dad shouted back.
This just wasn’t fair. Jacob had nothing to do with school. My school grades were my responsibilities and if I wasn’t doing as well as I could, then that was up to me to sort out, not Dad. And banning me from seeing Jacob defiantly wasn’t going to help. It would probably make things even worse than they were.
“RENESMEE ARE u LISTENING TO ME?” my dad shouted.
“YES!” I shouted back.
“Edward I don’t think that stopping Renesmee seeing Jac...” My mother started, trying to reason with dad. “Let me deal with this” Dad told her. Mum sighed, giving me a sympathetic look and heading out of the house.
“Are we clear, Renesmee?” Dad asked.
“Yes.” I whispered. Tears were staring to form in my eyes.
“Good.” He nodded.
“I HATE YOU!” I shouted running out of the house and into the woods, hot, angry tears flowing down both my cheeks.
ok so i am going to come out with this as i think it i love twilight it is brill but i hate edward i think he is to controling over bella and he doesn't want her to go and see jacob because jacob is way better looking than he is and he is afrad that he will get better and another thing is why do people think that he is good looking i think he is really ugly i can't see why people really fancy him i luv taylor launter and i am 100% a team jacob because at the end of the dag jacob is just way better than edward and that is the end of it!