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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. door no means am I forcing u to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless u truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before u start posting. It can be as little as a bio, of as big as an entire artikel series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no meer than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he of she is in, can pull out another trick out of his of her hat.
4. If u absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his of her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely random and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when u have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the volgende dag you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own of is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the recent outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, of claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If u must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, of so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if u do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot of stabbed in the heart, then pop up minuten later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull of flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to of dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to of dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created door you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing of potential character is a Mary Sue, of if u suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, u can take link. If u want, u can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case u were curious, which u probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all u want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, door no means do u have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
posted by SilverWings13
"Now they know what u are."

Not long after, a knock came at the young man's door. Marcus Antoni Rurik set down the jackets he had been trying to decide between to go to the door. He froze at the sight before him. The redhead had been forced to clean up nicely. Her red locks were straightened to a sheen, make-up smoothed over her features, and a well-fitted dress hugged her well-toned body. Aside from the chains around her wrists, Anastasia Romanov looked like she actually belonged in his family's castle.
"Miss Romanov, how can I help you?" Marcus asked, crossing his strong arms over his chest....
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posted by SilverWings13
 Anastasia Romanova II
Anastasia Romanova II
The sequel two-shot to link

"Why did u interfere?"

The air was stifling with so many people crammed into the room. The Ruriks lined one side of the room with their matching dark hair uniting them. Facing them stood dozen of strangers in colorful clothing. They were here for the spectacle. Ana felt a drop of sweat run a path down her spine as she stared at the man sitting at the head of the room. His dark hair mixed with grey the only separation between him and his sons. Grand robes pooled around his chair on the raised platform where he presided like a judge over the room.
With the rest, Ana's...
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Wind howled outside, shaking the shutters. Hailey fought the urge to reach for her soft silk robe. She wore a bright yellow dress, a proud color of the family she represented tonight. Not even the threat of cold could convince her to appear any less finessed.
The woman’s reveries was broken door the arrival of her visitors. She stood politely as the entourage of diplomats entered and bowed deeply. “Konichiwa, Your Highness.”
The Crown Prince of Japan returned a shallower bow. He was younger than Hailey had expected. “Your rebel king has chosen not to kom bij us?” he asked with barely hidden...
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posted by Robin_Love
Name: Lancelot Morgan
Nickname: Lance
Occupation: Knight
Ethnicity: Romanian
Race: Vampire
Story: Lance was born into an aristocratic family. He was raised in the royal court and befriended the young prince he was charged to protect. When tragedy struck, he brought the prince to safety. He took care of him for years until the prince grew into a man. He is now among those loyal to him and is a trusted friend.
Facts: Lance is door nature very bookish. He prefers words to fists even though he is trained in several different form of self defense and sword play. He is very close to his old charge now friend. He often finds himself caring for him when no one else will. The two share a close bond and he’d give his life for his friend.
posted by MafiaYJ
Notes: Guess its time to get on the bandwagon isn't it? and even though my account is Mafia- i totally favor Babs- so-
/im thinking pre-esther btw

LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: Babylon
Reason of meaning of name: I'm named after the biblical city of sin and false religioin due to my red eyes (the nuns really hated me-)
Eye Color: Red, I can change them to brown
Hair Style/Color: Black as night, very long, usually down
Height: 5'8.
Clothing Style: I like really professional clothes, well now adays, before it used to be really elaborate stuff that showed off my wealth, cause back then it was the only...
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posted by MafiaYJ
Notes: WELP its been a million years hasn't it? I started writing again for my blog and i ended up with this from a prompt and since it's about Babs, Nes, and Esther..

Use these three things somewhere in your story: An angel. A sword. A daycare.

“You have her lunch box?” Babylon zei quickly, jumping about in the keuken-, keuken as she tossed bag after bag into Nereus’ arms. Nereus stood there, little Esther giggling in his arms, he smiled fondly at the brunette woman, fussing over things.
“Babs, calm down, we’ll be fine, you’ll be gone for two days. It’s nothing we can’t handle,” Nereus...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Seraph grabbed onto Shane's wrist and strapped the watch on before speaking. "The datum is already set. The moment u get there, your guardian will immediately enroll u in their same school, and u will live with her." Shane's eyes went out of focus as Seraph continued to talk, his gaze focused on the ground. smaragd, emerald eyes were torn away only when their was a fist in his hair, jerking his head upwards. "Listen to me, u shit. I don't care what u feel about the situation, u are going to do this. I don't care how u get close, of how u get on that team. Do it." He hissed and hit a button...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Jessie Nasrin Bennett
Jessie Nasrin Bennett
LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: Jessie Nasrin Bennett
Reason of meaning of name:Jessie- God beholds; Nasrin- wild rose; Bennett- blessed
Eye Color: Green
Hair Style/Color: goud Wheat
Height: 5'4
Clothing Style: I dress for the weather
Best Physical Feature: Um...I've been told my smile is great

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Um...dark
Your Guilty Pleasure: bloem Crowns
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: Being Shoved Away
Your Ambition for the Future: To live?

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: Depends on the night before
What u Think About the Most: The herbs I need daily
What u Think About Before...
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posted by SilverWings13
She could hear a clicking of a keyboard in the kitchen. The noise had gegeven her dreams of her father, working on his typewriter at all hours of the night while she slept on the divan, bank in their tiny two-bedroom apartment in London. Waking to a pounding headache to find herself alone in the dark had sent shivers down her spine. Worse was the ache of thirst in her throat. So despite her reluctance to face the warlock after the drunken outburst she unfortunately remembered well, Ana padded out of the guest room to the kitchen.
At least she had her own clothes back on now, dried from the rain. It...
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posted by SilverWings13
Note: Happens simultaneously as link


Death in the Garden

The bullets ricocheted off the purple shield of pulsing power. They bounce off the stone walkway and into the green gras of the perennial garden. Stray projectiles ate away at the stone three-tier fontein and east courtyard wall. The rat-tat-tat of the machine gun should have been heard door any passing outside the walls of the garden, but the whole city seemed to be hidden away from the deafening noise. There was a click-click. A sudden silence. The young man crouched behind the shield lunged for the quickest route to safety, the round...
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posted by Robin_Love
LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: Becca. No need for more.
Reason of meaning of name: It's just a short version of my real name..
Eye Color: Brown. Like...dark almost black..
Hair Style/Color: Black. (Like her soul!) Hey!
Height: Um I'm about 5'9”
Clothing Style: Depends on the mood
Best Physical Feature: My what? (Her legs. She has dancer legs)

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Thunderstorms
Your Guilty Pleasure: Beating up the bad guys
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: Idiots. (Uhh...)
Your Ambition for the Future: To live?

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: Why am I up?
What u Think About the Most:...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: Shane Parker
Reason of meaning of name: I'm not sure, honestly.
Eye Color: My mother used to tell me that they were an smaragd, emerald green.
Hair Style/Color: It's blonde, and kind of shaggy.
Height: I'm right under 6'0, like 5'10, 5'11
Clothing Style: I like to be comfortable, in summer i'm always in cargo shorts and nike tennis shoes
Best Physical Feature: I- (His eyes)

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Uncertainty.
Your Guilty Pleasure: Oh god, u really don't wanna know.
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: When people chew obnoxiously, I swear I wanna stempel, punch Wally for it.
Your Ambition...
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posted by SilverWings13
 Octavia Rurik
Octavia Rurik
Name: Octavia Rurik
Age: approx 227; looks 22
Species: warlock (born of warlock parents)
Specialties: healing and defense spiritual magic
Weapon: none
Likes: swimming, singing, lanterns
Dislikes: disease, tyranny, spiders

Name: Dmitri Rurik
Age: approx 180; looks 18
Species: warlock (born of warlock parents)
Specialties: defense and elemental spiritual magic
Weapon: a long black scepter topped door a glowing crystal orb (colors shifts with type of magic used)
Likes: birds, playing the violin, headphones
Dislikes: a lot of things

Background: Dmitri and Octavia are the youngest children of Wilhelm Magnus and...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Sorry this took so long to get out, college is really kicking my behind with all the work I have to do. And I didn't realize how short it was...


"How do we know it's not a clone?" Tobias asked, tapping his fingers on his chin. "The scars on him are accurate, bruising around his face from the last fight.. but.." Chris muttered and walked, peeling off the monitors and lifted Fang up into a sitting position, his eyes going wide. "Wing has been replaced with an artificial one.." He zei and slowly unfurled the metal wing, looking over it before letting out a low whistle. "Man, that's some fine work.."...
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It helps if u sing along: link

Lexi, and her struggles of being a teenage girl, and her developing powers...

If u weren't born with it
You can buy a couple ornaments


Lexi stared into the full-length mirror, hands resting door her sides before she placed them on her hips, letting out an annoyed sigh, catching Jamie’s attention as he passed door her room. The teen backtracked and slid into his sister’s room. “What’s up?” He asked and sat at the edge of the bed, sipping from a straw. “Can’t decide.. Help meeeee!” Lexi whined out and pulled her uniform’s rok down, staring at her...
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posted by KatRox1
((BEFORE u READ THIS: Be warned that it is a lot of stuff in a little article. I found it while reading through some old documents, and realized I haven't really geplaatst anything on Bella before she joins The Team and becomes Mercy. So if u want meer on her pre-superhero life, let me know! KISSES!))

October 31st, 2011
Gotham, USA

There isn't much I remember about the accident. It all happened so quickly.
There was blood- a lot of blood. It was on the windows and the airbags and our clothes.
And there was screaming, but it wasn't coming from my mouth, of Gavin's. Gavin wasn't even moving. He just...
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So, like I was gonna wait to make this anoother time but, idk when I'll be able to get on again so yeah. Here's some meer boring shit. :p

"Hurry! I saw them go this way."Jake yells and they continue running.
"Not on my watch." Alek pops up out of nowhere.
"We don't have time for you." Khanna bubbles him and they keep running.
"Hey let me out of here!" he bangs on the bubble but, it won't pop.
"Bubbles, never knew u had that power."Jake says as they turn down the volgende hall.
"Yeah, that's cuz I don't usually use it." she says and they find Daniel.
"Hey guys. They have cookies." he says as he munches...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Ebonique
Ebonique
I apologize in advance for the background. Consider it a rough sketch of sorts till the holidays are over. I'll get it edited and cleaned up after then. Again, sorry.

Name: Ebonique
Alias: Eboni
Powers: agility, speed, manipulates light, night vision, voice that cause sleep.
Occupation: Not disclosed
Weakness/Limits: Not disclosed
History: Ebonique was an ancient Egyptian priestess of the Egyptian goddess Bastet. Her village was raided, and the people slaughtered. She was taken and sold as a slave. After years of torture and hard work, she was bought door another man. Her work was not as hard and...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Trystan kept a close tab on the fox, watching as people began to clear the streets. Within a few minuten he was greeted door Alex and Chris. The oldest of the three looked up at the sky and then back at Scotty who had stopped in his tracks. The vos, fox hybrid turned his head and stared down an alleyway, tilting his head back as bullets went whizzing door his head. Alex's eyes widened and she ran forward, standing in front of Scotty, holding his her hands straight out and then jerking them back, pulling guns from the perpetrators' hands. Chris and Trystan ran forward, looking down the alleyway. "That's...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: Scott "Scotty" Clancy.
Reason of meaning of name: I actually have no flipping idea, to be honest.
Eye Color: Blue!
Hair Style/Color: It's white and...... jagged?
Height: Uhhhhhhh, 6 foot something, not that much shorter than Fang. (You're 6'1, Scotty.) Oh! Okay, I'm 6'1 apparently.
Clothing Style: I really like flannels.
Best Physical Feature: My unusual hair.

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Losing people I'm close to.
Your Guilty Pleasure: ...I eat icing from a tube....
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: PEOPLE WHO TAKING FOREVER IN LINE LIKE JESUS CHRIST PEOPLE.
Your Ambition...
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