Our Little Army

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Do I still need work on my stories?

I getting kinda good comments. i want it to keep it that way. Is there something i need to change to make it better?
 nejiten2 posted een jaar geleden
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caseylovesgreek said:
u might want to try to pay meer attention on details and inner monologue too. try to describe what characters are doing as they talk. u have a great potential ;)
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agree
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Fair zei it all.
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but i like*
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