inner thoughts: *Dang I'm jealous. >-< It's so good* The hair is awesome and so are the eyes. Heck, it's a good drawing all together. Nice work! Keep it up. ^w^='
i do like the eyes, but the rest of it i do seem to have issues with. i like the hair, but at the same time i think that with the chin and facial structure u gave her, it seems lost to me. perhaps if u shaded the neck region it would make meer sense to me. I'm not sure I agree with where the kraag bones are either. They seem to be throwing me off. the shoulders aren't necessarily helping either. try to work on structure, then go to detail
they eyes are uneven and their shading isn't quite right. The chin is too pointy, the kraag bones are messed up, same with the shoulders. The hair is okay, it needs highlights to make it shine, the mouth is just there and needs some work. Over all it needs shading and detail.
