My songs lyrics :) Please read and commentaar what u think!

~Precious~
Once upon a fairytale
In a magical place
A boy loved a girl
The moment he saw her face

He was too shy
He didn't tell
But he never knew
She wanted him as well

He got lost in her eyes
Wondering if she feels the same
And as the time flies
He wasn't brave, and she never came
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So why don't u take a chance?
Grab her hand, start to dance
Like you're the prince and the princess
And that moment will be Precious
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They're waiting for each other
In that magical place
Now they're thinking that
There's no time to waste

He took a step closer
He took a chance
And he didn't know
She was waiting for that dance
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He finally took a chance
Grabbed her hand and learned to dance
They were the prince and the princess
These moments are precious
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//Bridge//
They're living in their kingdom
Far away from here
They're the prince and the princess
No meer regrets, no meer fears
Every moment they spent was precious
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So why don't u take a chance?
Grab her hand, start to dance
Like you're the prince and the princess
And that moment will be Precious

Finally, their story ends
That's when your story begins
Go tell your princess
How much she is precious
To you