Once upon a time there was a small village in Flordia called "Koekje". There lied a technophobic town of Cookian people. Cookian was a religion of people who believe the same things as Christians, but they believe God make koekjes, cookies without and oven and from scratch, so they should do so, too, and not use technology.
A single village mom, Erika, that divorced her husband recently was living with her 9-year-old daughter, Jenny, in a cabine that looked like all the rest of the houses. They were like every other person in the village, except Jenny. She wasn't as dull and technophobic as everyone else.
Jenny was tired of the villagers being afraid to be themselves, so she turned to her older sister, a creative artist that lives door herself in Mobius. Jenny decided to run away from home pagina and go to Mobius. She snuck out and found a teleportation device in a deep forest. She saw that "To Mobius" was carved at the top, boven of the device. She smiled widely and jumped into it. She was now off to Mobius.
Jenny fell out of the device and landed in a wooden house. "This must me Mobius.." she muttered to herself. Then a hedgefairy about Jenny's age walked into the room. She jumped a little and said, "What are u doing in my house?!"
"I took a portal here," Jenny explained. "This is Mobius, right?"
"Yes.." the hedgefairy replied. "Who are you?"
"Jenny," she answered.
"I'm Bloom," the hedgefairy said. "What brings u here?"
"I'm looking for my older sister," Jenny explained. "Speaking of that I better go! Bye!" Then the hedgehog was gone.
She looked around for her sister's small apartment. She wasn't going to rest until she found it.
Finally she found it. She eagerly knocked on the door. A tall, white hedgehog answered. Jenny smiled brightly and jumped into the young adult's arms. "AMOR!!" she cheered.
Amor was surprised that Jenny had gone a long way from Earth just to see her. "Where's mom?" Amor asked, looking out the door with Jenny still hugging her.
"Earth," Jenny said, smiling.
Amor's jaw dropped. "You came here door yourself?!"
"Yeah!" Jenny replied. "Those lame villagers are all the same. No creativity. That's why I came here! To live with a creative person way away from them!"
"Does mom know you're here?"
"Nope!"
Amor sighed. "Since I can't find any way to send u back I suppose u can live with me."
"Yay!"
"But I'll need a bigger house than this. I've been thinking of getting this townhouse around the rich people's house. It's pretty nice from the inside and surprisenly cheap. We can get it if no one has it."
Then Amor looked online and saw that the townhouse was still for sale. "Tomorrow we can go get it. u need some rest also. u can sleep in my bed if u want. I can sleep on the couch."
"Okay," Jenny replied. She then ran off and jumped into her sister's bed. She easily fell asleep.
Amor sighed and laid on the divan, bank and fell asleep.
The volgende dag Amor and Jenny went to buy the townhouse. Once they bought it Jenny was happy. She then jumped around in the house cheerfully. "Come on, Amor!" Jenny cheered.
Jenny then noticed Amor rubbing her head. "Amor?"
"I'm fine.." Amor answered, still rubbing her head.
Jenny frowned. She looked outside and then saw a cerulean hedgehog walking passed the house. Jenny squealed and ran outside to greet her. "Hi! I'm Jenny! I'm new here! I live with my older sister, Amor! I came for a village in Earth, though. They're technophobic, though. Me and all the villagers there a Cookian."
"Ummm.. Hi?" greeted the young hedgehog. "I'm Casey, short for Cassandra."
"Cool name!" Jenny complimented. "You're my best friend EVER!! Hey, u should wait at my house tomorrow to catch the bus with me!"
"Uhh.. Yeah.. I gotta go..." Casey stuttered.
"Okay! Bye, bestie!" Jenny said.
As Casey went off Jenny went back into the townhouse. There she saw her sister uncontious on the floor. Jenny gasped and called 911.
Instantly the ambulance was there. They took Amor to the hospital where she later died. Jenny then had to live on her own in the townhouse. She never went back to Mobius, though, since she got the support of her new friends, Casey and Bloom.
~The End~
A single village mom, Erika, that divorced her husband recently was living with her 9-year-old daughter, Jenny, in a cabine that looked like all the rest of the houses. They were like every other person in the village, except Jenny. She wasn't as dull and technophobic as everyone else.
Jenny was tired of the villagers being afraid to be themselves, so she turned to her older sister, a creative artist that lives door herself in Mobius. Jenny decided to run away from home pagina and go to Mobius. She snuck out and found a teleportation device in a deep forest. She saw that "To Mobius" was carved at the top, boven of the device. She smiled widely and jumped into it. She was now off to Mobius.
Jenny fell out of the device and landed in a wooden house. "This must me Mobius.." she muttered to herself. Then a hedgefairy about Jenny's age walked into the room. She jumped a little and said, "What are u doing in my house?!"
"I took a portal here," Jenny explained. "This is Mobius, right?"
"Yes.." the hedgefairy replied. "Who are you?"
"Jenny," she answered.
"I'm Bloom," the hedgefairy said. "What brings u here?"
"I'm looking for my older sister," Jenny explained. "Speaking of that I better go! Bye!" Then the hedgehog was gone.
She looked around for her sister's small apartment. She wasn't going to rest until she found it.
Finally she found it. She eagerly knocked on the door. A tall, white hedgehog answered. Jenny smiled brightly and jumped into the young adult's arms. "AMOR!!" she cheered.
Amor was surprised that Jenny had gone a long way from Earth just to see her. "Where's mom?" Amor asked, looking out the door with Jenny still hugging her.
"Earth," Jenny said, smiling.
Amor's jaw dropped. "You came here door yourself?!"
"Yeah!" Jenny replied. "Those lame villagers are all the same. No creativity. That's why I came here! To live with a creative person way away from them!"
"Does mom know you're here?"
"Nope!"
Amor sighed. "Since I can't find any way to send u back I suppose u can live with me."
"Yay!"
"But I'll need a bigger house than this. I've been thinking of getting this townhouse around the rich people's house. It's pretty nice from the inside and surprisenly cheap. We can get it if no one has it."
Then Amor looked online and saw that the townhouse was still for sale. "Tomorrow we can go get it. u need some rest also. u can sleep in my bed if u want. I can sleep on the couch."
"Okay," Jenny replied. She then ran off and jumped into her sister's bed. She easily fell asleep.
Amor sighed and laid on the divan, bank and fell asleep.
The volgende dag Amor and Jenny went to buy the townhouse. Once they bought it Jenny was happy. She then jumped around in the house cheerfully. "Come on, Amor!" Jenny cheered.
Jenny then noticed Amor rubbing her head. "Amor?"
"I'm fine.." Amor answered, still rubbing her head.
Jenny frowned. She looked outside and then saw a cerulean hedgehog walking passed the house. Jenny squealed and ran outside to greet her. "Hi! I'm Jenny! I'm new here! I live with my older sister, Amor! I came for a village in Earth, though. They're technophobic, though. Me and all the villagers there a Cookian."
"Ummm.. Hi?" greeted the young hedgehog. "I'm Casey, short for Cassandra."
"Cool name!" Jenny complimented. "You're my best friend EVER!! Hey, u should wait at my house tomorrow to catch the bus with me!"
"Uhh.. Yeah.. I gotta go..." Casey stuttered.
"Okay! Bye, bestie!" Jenny said.
As Casey went off Jenny went back into the townhouse. There she saw her sister uncontious on the floor. Jenny gasped and called 911.
Instantly the ambulance was there. They took Amor to the hospital where she later died. Jenny then had to live on her own in the townhouse. She never went back to Mobius, though, since she got the support of her new friends, Casey and Bloom.
~The End~
Okay, since it only got two viewable entrants, here are your winners everyone. ^^
3rd Place: THERE WEREN'T ENOUGH ENTRANTS FOR A 3rd PLACE PRIZE
2nd Place: blossom1111, I will draw u your request and give u a compliment later.
1st Place: TakTheFox, your image was (even though it was only out of two) the best, so I'll use it on every later RP with Eleina, give u a compliment for images, and draw u your request. ^^
For anyone wanting to see the afbeeldingen placed into this contest, click the linken below!
TakTheFox's Entry: link
blossom1111's Entry: link
I hope to see u all again in my volgende Drawing Contest!!! ^^
3rd Place: THERE WEREN'T ENOUGH ENTRANTS FOR A 3rd PLACE PRIZE
2nd Place: blossom1111, I will draw u your request and give u a compliment later.
1st Place: TakTheFox, your image was (even though it was only out of two) the best, so I'll use it on every later RP with Eleina, give u a compliment for images, and draw u your request. ^^
For anyone wanting to see the afbeeldingen placed into this contest, click the linken below!
TakTheFox's Entry: link
blossom1111's Entry: link
I hope to see u all again in my volgende Drawing Contest!!! ^^
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all of yall are wondering where i been.
pft some of yall care of don't care, i was wondering if i was suppose to put this on artikel of on forums but eh.
I been addicted to Deviantart xD Since im always there.
Yes im still working on the comic still. It got meer had to stay on it since i have college and that they want us to give us a holiday :/
im still going to be here but for fun :3
i total forgot i made a account here xD
so here's my deviantart user-----> LunarLuna94
Thank u for reading
all of yall are wondering where i been.
pft some of yall care of don't care, i was wondering if i was suppose to put this on artikel of on forums but eh.
I been addicted to Deviantart xD Since im always there.
Yes im still working on the comic still. It got meer had to stay on it since i have college and that they want us to give us a holiday :/
im still going to be here but for fun :3
i total forgot i made a account here xD
so here's my deviantart user-----> LunarLuna94
Thank u for reading