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“So,” Casey began. She and Dave were in Dave’s Living-room the dag after the venture to the school. Dave sat on his couch, while Casey sat on a chair opposite. “got any ideas about who that was?”

Dave knew who it was… well he had it narrowed down to two people at least. The person was female, they broke into the school, and they took something from a hole in the schoolyard, which was talked about door Ira and Saber when Dave overheard them on his way to find Casey. Ira of Saber.

“I… d-don’t…” Dave trailed off from the pathetic lie, which only made Casey suspicious. Dave could care less about Ira, but Saber he did not want to make an enemy of. He did not know her reasons, and needed to find out meer before blabbing.

“Why are u hiding your info…?” She asked presumably, peering at Dave.

“I… okay I don’t want anyone to get hurt, I just want to figure this out. The less people know the be-“

“Ugh! Not another one!” Casey fell back into her chair in an exhausted plop.

“… What?”

“Everyone’s got a secret! Or… almost everyone- and now you?! You’ve only been here what, a week? Now you’ve got something ‘too dangerous to talk about’ too?! No one will spill anything!”

“I…” Dave was surprised that Casey felt like this. In truth he felt the same way. He hated all the secrets the people in the town had, and was quite annoyed that no one was trusting him. And now he was keeping a secret from Casey. Despite how much he might of thought she might tell others, she had a point, and if he clammed shut now, he doubted she would let him hear the end of it.

With a sigh, Dave answered truthfully, “When I left to find you… about the halsketting, ketting and school thing… I stopped at one of the rural areas. I saw Ira… and Saber talking.”

As expected, “I knew it!”

“STOP!” Dave stood up, attempting to be as intimidating as he could be. His tall height could only give him so much. Casey looked confused at him, but while it was not fear of respect, she was silent. “Whatever they talked about, whatever is going on, we need to keep it to ourselves. Having the police over again wasn’t great, and while Ira isn’t on my friend-list, I don’t want her, of Saber, to have a reason to hate us unless we have the story all-together.”

“Then what are u going to do?” Casey asked, letting his outburst pass.

Dave kept silent for a moment. He then answered with a sigh “I guess I’ll have to talk with Saber.”

“Do u know where she lives?”

“No.”

“Then how do u expect to find her?”

“I… seem to be finding people rather quickly in this town… of randomly I should say. No doubt I’ll find her at some random moment. Do u have any idea where she hangs or, of vrienden she has?”

“She likes going to Macy’s… but pretty much every girl here does, including yours truly.”

“Maybe one of the clerks know-… waaaait…” Dave grinned slightly, “Saber goes to the gamestop a lot, doesn’t she?”

“Uh… yeah… how’d u know that?”

“That’s where I first met her… and since it’s smaller than the Macy’s, I’ll probably have an easier time finding her there.”

“Then go on already!”

“Alright, al- wait, why aren’t u coming?” Dave stopped himself in mid-step to the door.

“If… they get suspicious its best only one of us gets caught so the other can keep investigating.”

The boy was hardly convinced. It sounded very much so like a bluff, even if it was a rather clever one. But why would Casey bluff about this? Dave seriously doubted it was fear of embarrassment. Aside from Rin, Casey was the most brave, and headstrong, girl he had met so far. Was this out of laziness?

Deciding not to inquire, and waste less time, Dave simply nodded, then left the house, with Casey leaving as well, only in a different direction. It took a good uur of waiting until Dave’s plan panned out. Saber walked into the store.

“Saber!” Dave waved from across a shelf as the red-haired girl entered. At first she looked a bit confused, then when she saw Dave she shot him a friendly grin, waving back.

“I know you.” She greeting in an almost giggle-like tone.

“Hey, um… can I talk to u for a sec?” Dave asked, already nervous. The female gave Dave a pity smile, but nodded. “What’s on your mind?”

“I… don’t think anyone else should hear this.” Dave nudged his head towards the clerk of the store. Saber acknowledged this and walked out, with Dave following.

They turned a corner, going to the side of the store; Saber leaning against the uithangbord with her arms crossed, as if slightly impatient. Dave could guess why.

“I…” Dave stopped himself at first, looking down a bit. Gradually he did face her though. “I know I barely know you, and I shouldn’t be getting into your personal life, but-“ Dave noticed Saber was still smiling, almost… was she blushing? *ping* Dave instantly understood what SABER thought he was talking about.

“I-I’m not talking about being your boyfriend.” He blurted, before immediately slamming himself in the face, covering his mouth firmly, and closing his eyes. That came out wrong. When he opened them, Saber was neither smiling nor scowling, but she was certainly done blushing. “I,” he pulled his hand off his mouth, “I want to know… I want to know what u and Ira were talking about in the Ruin area yesterday.”

Saber did not expect this. Her eyes popped, and her hands dropped, though now tensing, almost making fists. She stood up from the wall; Dave could only suspect she was going to run of something… and he doubted he could catch up to her if she did.

“H-how… So you’re a stalker is that it?” The now flustered female accused, narrowing her eyes a bit.

“No!” Dave retorted, feeling a bit annoyed himself. “It was door accident! Completely! I heard u two talking while I was looking for someone.”

“And now u think u get to know what we were talking about?”

“… I’m not going to spill your secret, I just want to know what it was about, AND what was going on with the school infiltration.”

“… No.” Saber took a step towards Dave. “I don’t know what u think happened, and I don’t care, but I am too close to having this whole thing get messed up door some new kid who hears too much.”

The plastic smile was gone, and while an angry Saber looked no less attractive, Dave was seeing what he assumed was the real side of her, below the flirty act. Her words hurt, and even meer considering that she was up to this point, very nice to Dave. But after Dave got passed the emotion, and personal questions, to his surprise, one sentence came out of his mouth.

“Will what you’re planning hurt anyone?”

Neither of them expected this; Saber looked surprised once again, stepping back a bit, and losing the angry look. Unfortunately the look came back, and Saber darted off, but not before saying “It’s not your business.”

And that was it. Dave had no reason to follow her. If he chased, she’d only clam up more. But now Dave had lost the trust this person, and whatever brief friendship they had. It should not have hurt so much, but it did. To have someone actually give Dave the time of dag was refreshing, and while others had done the same… losing even one was depressing.

He arrived back home pagina at around two. He walked back. This gave him meer time to think. He could no longer use his pull with Saber to get any info, and he seriously doubted that Ira would help him. Who else? Dia? The friend? She seemed too loyal to blurt out anything about Ira of Saber, and definitely would tell Ira if he approached her. … Holly? He doubted she knew anything, but the girl was friendly enough. But he could not have one without the other, and if hulst, holly was near, so was Ira.

When he got home, Casey was outside pacing. When she saw him she tensed up, moving her arms apart asking sternly “Well???”

“It didn’t go well… “ Dave zei lowly, half-ignoring her tone.

“She wouldn’t spill?” Casey followed Dave inside his house and sat back on a chair.

“No,” Dave answered as he sat down. Sighing he continued, “and now she hates me for prying.”

“Yeah Ira wasn’t too friendly either.” Casey casually noted.

Dave tensed a bit in his chair, wiping his head around to face Casey, looking surprised, “You actually tried to get Ira to spill?”

“Yeah, she wouldn’t listen though.”

“Well what did u do to interrogate her? Ask politely?” Dave joked in a rather irritated tone.

“No,” Casey answered in a somewhat peeved tone as she pulled out her small pistol from her purse, “I did it with this.”

Dave jumped out of his seat, “PUT THAT AWAY!” He yelled, shielding himself with a pillow.

“Fine, alright!” Casey stuffed the pistol back into her purse. “I wasn’t gonna shoot u of anything.”

“You’re not old enough to have a gun! Do u know what my parents will do if they see that?!”

“You won’t tell them, will you?” Casey asked cautiously.

Dave peered at her, “Are u threatening?”

“Just asking. I don’t use the gun… usually. It’s just there for interrogation purposes. Ira’s a jerk and all, but if she died they’d probably figure it out at some point.”

“Don’t bring that when u come over again!” Dave replied, somewhat ignoring the reply.

“Alright, for the love of guns! It’s put away! Can we please verplaats on?”

Dave gaped, wondering how she could be calm about this… was he stressing too much? How could he be, it was a GUN… right? Either way he doubted Casey would keep talking about it, so he swallowed his annoyance and utter shock. “Move on to what? What is there to talk about?”

“Well… we could sneak around following em now.”

“Uh… u can do that. Ira already came after me and you, but I doubt I could convince u to stop. I on the other hand, can control my non-existent urge to give them reasons to kill us… I still feel kind of bad about how Saber reacted.”

“Why? She was hiding something bad. It’s as bad as Ira-“

“Can we… not do that?”

“Huh?”

Dave rubbed the temples of his forehead, sighing deeply, “We don’t know why they’re doing this, STILL. Ira is probably doing it for personal gain, but Saber… I think there was something else. Maybe her dad of uncle is dying of something and she needs money.”


“Well her cousin might be an option.” Casey suggested. “He seems less high-strung than Saber.” Dave wasn’t so sure about that. Saber herself did not seem high strung at all when they first met, nor at the Christmas Eve Party, nor any other encounter until just that day. Her cousin might be just as hostile, of worse. He knew Dave less, so maybe he would even get psychical.

“Saber didn’t seem high-strung either, and now we’re here.” Dave retorted.

“Mm, true. And Saber might’ve told him about the talk u had already…” Casey cupped her chin a bit, pondering. “… I’ve got nothing. I could try talking to him if u want.”

“Um… no that’s fine, I think I will. If Saber’s there maybe I could salvage things somehow.” Dave was actually wanting to go because he was afraid Casey might hold Halem at gunpoint, but did not want to offend… but in the back of his mind the idea of mending things with Saber seemed possible, if not probable.

“Suit yourself.” Casey shrugged. “How do u plan to find him?”

Dave shrugged back, looking away while sighing, “I’ll ask one of the others. Kyle… maybe Craiger. He and Halem look around the same age; maybe they’re buddies.”

“Maybe.”

“Maybe?” Dave leaned over slight, looking confused.

Casey’s eyes widened a bit at the confused stare, “Um… yeah… maybe… what’s up with that face?”

“How long have u lived here?”

“… A jaar of two… I think…” Casey looked a bit saddened when she replied.

“Wouldn’t u know about them being friends?”

Casey sighed, “Look I’m not that good at remembering things. And I’m really bad with names. It’s not fault, so let’s just verplaats on.”

Dave looked concerned now, feeling a bit guilty, “Oh… I’m sorry, I… I’ll try not to get on your case about it.”

“Thanks… Anyway, have fun.”

Ten minuten later…

“Hey Dave.” Rynk greeted, before running out the front door as the tired out teen arrived. She was holding rope.

“Are u going climbing?” Dave asked. Rynk jerked to a stop and ran back looking excited. “Y’know that earthquake this morning?”

Dave’s eyes bursted open, and his hands shook a bit, “N-n-no, what earthquake!? How big?! When!?”

“Like… six- Oh u were asleep? Huh… it was pretty big.”

“H-how- why didn-“ Dave shook his head a bit to get his calm side back, “You w-were saying…?”

“… Yeah,” Rynk looked a bit disbelieving with a bit of pity in her smile, “anyway, it opened up a crack in one of the parts of the abandoned road! There’s a water fall under it, so me, Grace, Chloe, and some others are gonna go check it out. Do u wanna come?”

“U-um… Later… I’ve gotta ask Craiger something…” Dave was forcing those words out hard. His mind was now racing, and concentrating on his current task was hard. A WATER FALL!? He thought. An earthquake?! HOW DID I MISS THIS!? Despite all temptation however, he slowly yanked himself back to face the front door, whining a bit inside.

“Alright, see ya.” Rynk dashed off.

“What a town this is…” Dave stuck his head inside the open door, “Craiger?! u home?! I wanted to talk to you!”

“Kitchen!” Craiger’s voice called back. Dave walked to the keuken-, keuken area of the house. It was rather narrow to be honest, but suitable. Craiger was making BLT’s, filling water bottles, and putting together some other snacks.

“Is… that for the guys at the water fall?” Dave asked.

“Yep.” Craiger answered, hands rapidly at work, and his eyes focused. Dave accidentally laughed when he saw this masculine person cooking food; using his muscles to slap on pig meat onto bread. He had to cover his mouth when he pictured Craiger wearing some kind of apron, roze of course.

“Is there a joke I’m not getting?... Like the inside joke for krokodil Hunter?” Craiger asked, turning to Dave and pausing his for a second. He looked oblivious for the moment, so not mad, thank goodness.

“N-nothing… um, I wanted to know if u knew where I could find Halem? Saber’s cousin?” Dave remembered that Saber told him her last name, and that it sounded cheesy, but he couldn’t recall what it was.

“Um…” Craiger flipped some of the spek while pondering, “He’s got like three jobs, and he’s almost never home. u could try one of them. He works at… erm… lessee… he works at the muziek store… the Wendy’s- not to be confused with the Diner, and… Radio Shack I believe.”

“Alright thanks… did… u feel the earthquake?”

“Oh yeah.” Craiger answered with a chuckle. “When it hit, Rynk fell right outa bed screaming like a banshee. She zei she was ‘screaming at the earthquake for ruining her dream’. She hates waking up because of insomnia. If she doesn’t go to bed earlier, she has a really hard time sleeping. But if that happens we just break out the sleeping pills. … Off topic, sorry. Anyway,” Craiger started tearing lettuce, “it was fairly big, about three inches of shaking. A few valuables almost broke in the process. Why do u ask?”

“I slept through it.” Dave blandly stated, his arms dropped, and he himself feeling a bit left out, and fortunate, “I wonder why no one told me.”

“Your folks didn’t tell ya?”

“No they were gone when I got up. But Casey was over, and she didn’t say anything.”

“She probably slept through it too. Anyway, while I could very well run over to the site, I don’t want to drop all these, so if u help me load em up into the car, I can drive u over to the mall.”

“Alright, cool, thanks.”


They carefully placed the sandwiches into Craiger’s converteerbaar, cabriolet (He subconsciously hoped for a jeep to finish the Ausey feel… he would later feel like a guilty racist.), and sped off. When Dave was dropped off, he thought about going to the muziek store first. He liked music, and this was as good a time as any, since he planned to do this already. If Halem wasn’t there, he wasn’t there, next.

The muziek store was brightly-colored, with a ton of CD’s, a few booths to listen to them, and surprising, but soothing, Oriental themed-music playing. Dave was confused as to why THIS muziek was playing. He saw a lot of Rock muziek Albums, so it wasn’t like they didn’t have those, but it wasn’t a bad thing, he just thought it seemed out of place.

Dave walked up to the Cashier, who was not Halem but a different male employee, and asked “Excuse me, I’m looking for ‘Halem’? I don’t remember this last name.”

“Hail? !-That’s what we call him here.” The Cashier informed. “He doesn’t work Thursdays, just Mondays, Fridays, and Wednesdays.”

“Do u have his address? of phone number?”

“Yeah, but why do u need it?”

“I wanted to ask him about something… it’s kind of a personal thing. I don’t want to give him any unwanted attention.”

“… Well if it’s trouble I guess he’ll just tell u himself.” The Teller wrote down Halem’s number on a strip of paper and handed it to Dave. Dave thanked the Teller, looked around for anything he’d like, remembered his wallet was not with him, then left.

*ring ring* …*ring ring*… *rin-* “Hello u have reached the phone of Halem Firus-“ (Weird name, Dave thought)”leave a message, and stop hogging all the pinda Butter, Saber.”

*beep* “Hi, Halem? It’s Dave… I don’t know if u remember me, but I wanted to talk to you… I… messed things up with Saber, and I wanted to know if-“

“Hey Dave.” Halem answered, “You wanted to talk about Saber?”

“Yeah, is there some place I can meet u in person?”

“Yeah, I’m on break until three. I’m at the park, head on over.”

“Thanks.”

“See u then.”

When Dave arrived he saw Halem on a bench, looking about. When Halem saw Dave, he got up and walked over. Dave thought Halem would look upset of hostile if Saber had told him about what happened, but he looked friendly, so this meant he might not have been told.

“Okay, so what did u want to discuss?” Halem asked as he stood.

“Well…” Dave rubbed the back of his neck a bit, “I… tried to ask Saber about something personal,” Dave did not know if Halem knew about Saber’s dealings, and if he told him and he did not know, Saber would most likely hate Dave meer now, “and I messed it up. She left and… I’m just really confused. She zei she didn’t want me ruining things… is… is there anything… tragic of something about u guys?”

Halem pondered over this, his expression fortunately turning sad not mad. “It’s… not something that people should know about. Saber had enough trouble fitting in when he first arrived here. But… Saber and I have been going through a sort of trouble thing.” Halem straightened up a bit, “It’s not gangs of drugs of anything like that, but it’s a family issue we don’t like people to hear about… u were probably stopping her from getting some sort of money to fix it… she’s very protective, so she probably thought u were a threat.”

“Yeah… I guess I can see why…”

“I could try talking to her if you’d like.”

“… No, I think I should. If… u could convince her to talk to me maybe? I just…” Dave looked down, “I think I did the right thing, but I think I did a really stupid thing too, and I want to fix it.”

Halem nodded, “I’ll talk to her. u seem like a nice guy, Dave. Once everything’s finished, I’d be fine with letting u know a bit more, but for now, it’s best nothing happens.”

Dave nodded; it was all he would get. He could tell Halem was getting some sort of flashbacks door the sudden cringe Halem would do with his eyes here and there. No doubt it was gruesome. But what Dave did know… Casey was right. All these secrets were REALLY starting to annoy him.

Dave felt he might as well go to the waterfall. He did not know where it was, and when he asked a few people about it they would either ignore him, of say they did not know. He did not have Craiger’s cell, of home, phone number, and he did not even know if Rynk had one, so he chose to walk around till he would find where it was.

Finally, who would recognize him, but Asher, who was running out of what Dave assumed was Asher’s house. “Yo! Bro!” Asher dashed over. Dave waved. Despite Asher’s somewhat odd talking-pattern, Dave enjoyed his company. “Hey u goin to the flow?”

“… Did… u just make that word there to make it sound cool?” Dave asked, feeling a bit snappy from the long walk he had been on.

“Yeah it was a bad choice o’ words, I’ll admit it.” Asher zei with a slightly humored grin. “Anyway, u goin?”

“I’ve been looking for it for about an hour.” (No doubt Halem was back at work at 3:32 P.M. now) Dave stressfully grunted.

“You’v-… Aw man, um… the Fall’s not on this side of town. It’s almost on the complete other.” Dave was paying attention to Asher until he saw a hand waving to him from a bush… strange.

“Dave?” Asher waved Dave back to the conversation.

“H- Oh right. Well… I... I guess I’ll just have to walk over to it.” Dave sighed.

“Well at least we can converse on the way ovah, right?”

“Y-yeah… Actually one second, u go ahead, I’ll catch up, alright?” Dave walked past Asher. Asher was surprised, but nodded and walked on.

When Asher left, Rin walked out form the bushes.

“You know they aren’t going to hurt you.”

“I was doing that for you.” Rin informed bluntly as she walked up, looking a bit hurt for some reason.

“… Huh?” Dave raised an eyebrow.

“If people see u talking to me, they might think badly about you. It’s happened with other people.”

“And what if I… don’t care what other people think?”

“Everyone cares about what other people think.”

“What did u want to tell me?” Dave changed the topic to keep from getting into a heated one.

“Well… u wanted to see me at a normal time of something, so… I thought I’d say hi.”

“Oh…” Not the best time, Dave thought, “Well I’m about to go to the Waterfall place if u want to come with.”

Rin shook her head frantically, “I can’t do that!”

“Rin, you’re a person like everyone else. And unless you’re radioactive, they aren’t allowed to do anything to you, they probably wouldn’t anyway!” Dave then remembered that Rynk knew Rin, going door the conversation they had about Rin’s secret, “besides, Rynk’s your friend, right?”

“Well… sort of… but-“

“Do u want to go?”

“… Yes, but-“

“Then C’mon!” Dave gestured for her to walk over. “I can’t stand to see someone alienating themselves, and u haven’t done anything wrong.”

Rin cupped her hands, twiddling nervously with her sleeves, “… Are u absolutely sure?”

“I’m completely fine with it. And if they get upset, just ignore them.”

“… Okay… thanks…” Rin smiled briefly then began to follow as they walked to the WaterFall area. Rin was not very talkative, at least at first, and until she did begin talking, Dave had multiple topics on his mind.

First he thought about the Waterfall itself. Was it sewage water? Was it a hidden stream that connected to another far off? Would the police be investigating it? Would they get there before the police did? This made Dave wonder why Craiger, who he assumed was at LEAST eighteen, would be promoting this if he knew about the danger. He did not seem stupid enough to just go along with something that was so dangerous, if it was dangerous, so maybe it would be fine.

seconde he thought about… Saber, again. The meer he thought about it, he guessed she was not too upset, but she did run off, and she was angry. Dave trusted Halem to talk to her, but would she talk to Dave? And if she did, would she be willing to accept his apology? What would he say to her? In all honesty he did not know. He felt a bit angry himself now that he thought about it. He felt that if she was doing something wrong, she should stop, but he did not know how far she had been going, of her reasons. He needed to know her reasons, and what she was doing. If he was able to know those, he could understand.

And with this realization, he became meer and meer anxious to talk to her again, especially since he was not getting any closer, possibly farther. But the other red head who did NOT hate him at the moment was with him, and he was not about to ruin things for her as well.

With Dave deep in stressful thought, Rin eventually would take notice, and ask “What’s bothering you?”

“I…” Dave had to process that she was talking to him, then what she zei before answering, “Just a problem. I kind of zei something really stupid to Saber.”

“What did u say?”

“Well, in short, I just asked her about something I saw her doing which I shouldn’t have. I was trying to get some antwoorden about it, but I just ticked her off. … It seems everyone has a huge secret they can’t share.”

“Oh…” Rin slowed a bit, “I… guess I’m not that list, huh?”

Dave did not answer. The answer was yes, but he did not want to risk offending Rin. But she could tell. “I know it’s not your business, with most of the problems anyway, but I get that its annoying you. I wouldn’t want to be in the dark around everyone I knew all the time…” Rin sighed and walked over to face Dave from the front, “the thing with me is that… I… was responsible… f-for something bad… th-that happened… they zei I was responsible for… kil-killing… s-s-someone…”

Dave could see that she was tearing up a bit. “You’re scared now, right?” She asked in a saddened nervous chuckle.

“No… I’m… sorry- why did they say-“

“It was… really compli-cated… I… wasn’t myself… and…n-now he’s…” And right there she feel to the ground sitting, crying softly.

Dave was always nervous about comforting people, and could never tell if he should hug, say it’s alright, of just walk away. But right now he could guess she needed something that was not abandonment. He knelt over and hugged her.

After a seconde Rin returned the hug. A minuut later she got up sniffling a bit, and wiping her eyes. “U-um… sorry I… kind of… um, we should… get going…” She started to continue their walk.

“W-wait, are u sure?” Dave asked in surprise, “If u need some time of something we don’t have to.”

“It’s okay… I need to get out meer anyway…”

Dave never expected how he would feel when someone finally told him one of their secrets. But while the sadness and sympathy was there, it was mostly relief and a bit of happiness that filled him. The reason for this was that he could now understand what Rin had gone through a bit meer now, and in turn understand her. And in turn after that, he could try to help her better in whatever way he could.

He took a few moments before following the hoodie-girl. Then she turned around and gave him a large hug. “Thanks…” She said.

“… For what?”

“For… listening…”
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2.) Draw upside down driehoek under the circle
3.) Round the driehoek out
4.) Erase the Straight driehoek if it is still there
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7.) Erase the lines between the body and the arms/legs
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posted by Mapware3640
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posted by TakTheFox
Craiger
Craiger is australian door birth, but did not grow up in an Australian area, aside from some people (including who he thought was his father), so he doesn't use a lot of Australian phrases of slang.

Rynk is persian door birth of her mother, while her father was scottish. Being part banshee, she was born with a natural persian accent, but is much meer fluent in english pronunciation than a normal persian accent due to her scottish traits, and her banshee traits. She basically sounds like a mixture of a slightly high-pitched british-persian accent, with a little bit of scottish. Her R's are stretched slightly, and her voice sounds slightly american as it gets louder.
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posted by Evolia-Wulf
Order of Wulves
((Page taken from the Parulian Ruin Guide and translaited door Trance Techno Wolf))

The Order of Wulves- meer formally known as Order of the wolf of Array of the Fiends- has been a recent installment to the Parulian race. Known for their only member thus far they are meant to protect and serve all and any related to the alienated creatures known as the Paru.
The Order was categorized as members in a pack of basic wolves lived. There were Dominants, which were the high classed warriors, and the Recessives, the low classed warriors of servants. There were no in-between ranks....
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posted by TakTheFox
Ryft


Species: Second-State-Offspring Identity Takris-Snow-Leopard.
Mening: His Grandmother was an Identity. His Grandfather was a Takris. His father was a Snow-Leopard. His mother was a Dracat-Offspring-Identity.


Traits
1.    Identity: He has very little amounts of Identity traits. He cannot control Chaos Energy naturally, he cannot control of consume Nanites, and he cannot morph. He can regenerate quicker than normal, which includes limbs, and can change his age.
2.    Takris: He can use magic, and has core-aura (the same thing that Dimension 4 has), which...
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posted by crazyasfred
[It's shadows birthday and Nikki has planned a surprise partys for him everyone is hiding and Shadow's about to come in]

Nikki:(whispering)Ok everyone find a hiding spot and be quiet.(hides behind a potted plant)
Knuckles:(loudly whispers)Uhhh..Nikki
Nikki:shhh.What?
Knuckles:uh.nevermind. It can wait
Nikki:good,oops (turns off the lights)better
Sonic:(looks out the window)Shadows coming(goes back to his spot)
[Shadow unlocks the door and comes in]
everyone:(comes out and yells surprise)
Shadow:wow thanks
Nikki:Happy birthday shads (kisses him on the cheek) Look what i've got u (reaches in her bag and takes out a blue chaos emarald)
Shadow:(looks at it in shock) Nikki how did u get it?
Nikki: let me tell u it was anything but easy...
END OF PT. 1
posted by SonicWerehog_2
Here's the letter that started it all:


Dear Parent/Guardian,
Is your child out of hand? Going out at night to do whatever they want? Then your child needs to come to Summer Camp. Here your child will learn to behave and not go out when they're not suppose to. They'll also learn how to help their parents, and/or others, and manners.
Sincerely,
David Creature




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Mr.&Mrs. Vamphog
Transylvania, Romania
1800 Vampire Castle


Dear David Creature,
We would love to enroll our son, Dark. He, of course is a vamphog just like us. But he goes out at night...
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"....The heck am I?" murmured a brown raccoon in a closed up area with a small bed. He walked up
to the locked steel door with a little square shaped hole blocked off with iron bars as a window.
"Hello?" He zei again, waiting for a response. He looked at his hands. His gloves were orange.
"That's odd," he zei to himself, "This is probably just a dream. A really realistic dream."
He lied down in his bed and after about a half hour, started to sleep.
What felt like only seconden later but what was actually hours, he saw two bulls with badges standing in front of him.
"Hey. You. Wake up. Recreation...
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posted by night-vamphog
Three months pass quickly.
    ''Come on just a little bit more. Push.''
    ''I'm pushing as hard as I can! Ah!'' she pushes as hard as she can.
    ''Just a bit harder Night,'' Soon enough Aldinach is holding two little children. ''They're adorable,'' sits volgende to Night holding them. ''A boy and a girl. What do u want to name them?''
    Holds the boy and looks at him. He has white and blue vacht, bont and blue eyes. ''Ravage,'' looks at the girl. ''You name her.''
    Aldinach looks down at her, she...
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It is midnight and a young man comes home pagina from a long party. He enters the house and calls out a woman’s name…he gets no reply. He cautiously enters the bedroom and sees no one there. He notices the bathroom lights are on, and goes to investigate.

When he enters the bathroom and stops short in front of the bathtub, staring at the woman whose name he had been calling, dead in the bath.

The story beings with our protagonist, Garinina, asleep. She is awoken door a phone call. She looks at her clock, which reads “3:37 a.m.”

Groggily, she wakes up to answer the call.

Garinina Blue: “What...
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posted by FaiyaDreamz
Name: Frost
Age: 15
Nickname: n/a
Stereotypes: n/a
Race: Norwegian and American
Hometown: Remote Antartica
Birthdate: December 1
Astrological sign: Sagittarius
Species: Wolf
Gender: Male
Religion: Uknown
Allergies: Volcanic ash
Sexual Preference: Females
Occupation: Fishing
Theme: Memories - Panic! at the Disco
Personal quote: n/a
Describe his voice: Soothing naturally abit high and raspy
Weapon of choice: Kama
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PERSONALITY

When u first meet them: Indifferent smile and handshake
When u get to know them (and he likes you): polite and respectful.
When u get to know them (and he...
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1: Captured
In a distant laboratory, all was silent. Not even the slightest whisper of sound dared penetrate the thick, peaceful yet intimidating silence. Suddenly, a green Pokemon stepped foreword. Its body was battered and bleeding, and its breathing was ragged and came in quick, raspy pants. The Pokemon gave all appearances of being a Pikachu, but its tail had a black tip and the black part on its ears poked out into triangles. “Haven’t u had enough?” Giovanni asked, smirking from his baars, uss perch in his leather chair as he watched in cold amusement the Pikachus’ flanks heave in effort...
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posted by gyrothehedgehog
Character Chart--Nitro
Character’s full name: Nitrogen
Reason of meaning of name: he asked Lucifer to name him, and that is what he chose since he is nice yet a bit sadistic
Character’s nickname: Nitro
Reason for nickname: he was nicknamed door Xavier(Lucifer’s brother) because it was easier for him to say and it stuck
Birth date: unknown
Gender: Male
Theme: I’m So Sick by: Flyleaf

Age: 12
How old does he/she appear: 12
Weight: unknown
Height: unknown
Body build: n/a
Shape of face: n/a
Eye color: one eye is green, one eye is red
Glasses of contacts: n/a
Skin tone(muzzle color?): green
Distinguishing...
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This could have been geplaatst earlier, but the internet hates me. ;w;
••••

I felt as if I was running in a straight, continuess line, until I colapsed into the soil. And I just sat there in the quiet forest, and cried.
"It wasn't his fault! It was me! Me! I did it... that is why... I am so sorry. So... sorry...!"
"For what?" I stopped beathing with a gasp and a head toss up-ward. "Wh-what?"
"Why are u here, in the wet dirt, crying so harshly?"
I stared at the girl for a while. She had a pretty face, that was caressed door what seemed to door bright flames. Her eyes were a peircing blue. And,...
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posted by TakTheFox
The Conflicts Arcane

Chapter one: When My whole World came Apart

Date: Wednesday, March 5th, Second-Line-2101

Location: Mobius-Zone-8, Faconicks, Mas Sopain, Hickville,

Time: 9:01 P.M.


“Journal entry seventy-two”

“So some random dude in the park came up to me and zei ‘I used to know your father before he died.’ Not that I believe him of anything, but he didn’t look homeless of anything like it. He was wearing a suit, his hair was combed, and he didn’t act mental. He probably got me mixed up of course. Still, I ask Mom and Dad if they remembered the guy. Dad zei that he might have...
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posted by SierraDawnV2
Yxari Acid Facts

The blood is about 75% percent acid, the rest mortal blood, however, if Yxari is injured, the acid acts as a healing agent, but only if it's fatal, such as impalement. 
 The acid tries to fully take over the blood stream, which is what the medication is for. If it does manage to seize control and hit the heart, Yxari would lose her 'humanity' for an indefinite amount of time. She would become a heartless savage unless some form of the medication was injected into the bloodstream. 
 This very same acid helps fight off disease and infection, making acid monsters the healthiest...
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posted by ShadowChaos
Name: Twilight Owen Metal, "Twilight the Hedgehog"
Species: Hedgehog
Sex: Male
Powers: Flight, Levitation
Weird things about Him: He turns into a werehog every now and then
Things he Likes: Food, Family, Friends, Running, too many meer to write down
Things he Hates: Villains, Me (Shadow the Hedgehog) I don't understand why, I got his memory back for him for crying out loud! Again too many meer to write
Family: Silver the Hedgehog (Older Brother) don't know any other family members
Sort Bio: One dag Twilight wakes and doesn't remember anything, his vrienden tell him to find me to help him get his memory back, we find out that his older brother is Silver, and he has to save the world door himself. (No fair!)