Sonic fan Characters Article: Her Poem

posted by NoctusLynx

So, I read Virus' theme, and I was actually inspired door that. Mind, I'm not using the same style; I hate obvious redundancy. I wrote it as a medolic rap. But I will say I censored two words. Now, before u get your week's worth of exercise door jumping to conclusions, allow me to splain. I censored those because they were spoilers. See? I don't curse in this song (at least not in any way I noticed.) So then, here goes "Her Poem". It's fairly obvious to those educated in my characters, but may prove otherwise for those who aren't. And for those whom read this, please commentaar below. u musn't fan this if u wish against it, but I simply ask of your opinions on this theme song. Thank you.

Now, without further delay, "Her Poem".

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(*spoilers*), I know u miss your mom and I know u miss u dad
But I'm trying to give u a life that I just could never have.
My family was lost in war, and I won't see them again.
I was alone, like you, as if through punishment for our sin.
Family is all we've got, even if we aren't of blood,
but we don't have to be, u see, all we need is our love
Just stiffen your lip because there is no need to weep.
We might just one dag realize its not as bad as it seems.

I'm sorry that I'm gone
And I can't be with you
But to keep u safe
I must fight for you
But even when I leave
Just before we cry
We mistake the truth
For those solemn lies

I wish I didn't have to but I stand the best odds
To fend off our invaders that attack us from all across
I lost my family once, and I don't want to lose them again
So I'll protect u as much as I can, even if it's my end.
I can't imagine life if anyone who would try to harm you
Slitting their throat would be nice, bit what good would that do?
I guess all this fighting is now getting to head
Because now only (*spoilerz*), in my mind, let's me know I'm far from dead.

I'm sorry that I'm gone
And I can't be with you
But to keep u safe
I must fight for you
But even when I leave
I just before we cry
We mistake the truth
For those solemn lies

I feel their forces thinning, I think we're winnng.
I start singing at the thought, and begin reminiscing
Back to when I found u in the city, filled me with pity
And I took u under my wing so u could live in peace with me.
u were so innocent back then, and that shouldn't be changed.
"Look, Papa, look here and see what I just now made!"
"I'm sorry, (*spoilerz*), but I've got to leave," and kiss u on the head.
Now u too let me know that I'm dimensions away from dead.

I'm sorry that I'm gone
And I can't be with you
But to keep u safe
I must fight for you
But even when I leave
I just before we cry
We mistake the truth
For those solemn lies
And on those hard days
When the going's thick
Life eats at me
Like a hungry tick
But I keep on going
With one sole drive
My family and friends
Are who keep me alive.

NoctusLynx Gratz. Soon enough, you'll find out who is talking to who. I'll start writing out my explanation. Thanks, again.

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Boreas Force

posted by Yosuki-Hiroshi

Allignment:Opponent to Ally
Power:Ice,Snow,Wind and Hail
Weapons Used:Bows and Arrows,Claw,Sword,Rapier,Blade,Mace,Ankh,Piece,Naginata and Scythe.
Battle Difficulty:Extremely Very Hard.
Battle Describes:Tricky,Fast,Strength,Powerful and Very,Very hard to trap and/or to defeat.
Power get on Frozen Hydro(Ice,Snow and Hail.) and Cold North(Wind).
Utilities:Condense,Frost,Cold Snap.
Pet:Ice Dragon,Hail Dragon and Snow Dragon.
Pet Description:Tricky,Fast,Powerful,Very hard to kill,large,hard,sharp.
Boreas Attack:Snow Coat,Avalances,ColdCombat,Tornado,IceScissor.Iceberg Shower,Ice Missle,Snow Punch,Hailstorm,Blizzard,Glacier,Tundra,Hail Slash,Cold Swing,IcebergMeteor.Create Snow Monsters.Gel Surf.Comet Ball.Comet Ball Duo.Infinity Comet,Super Counter Attack(Counters Range and Melee atacks)Death Sythe.

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Weeding out Gary Sue's- taco Test I

posted by thetacoman

Tell me if u see MS qualities in this new character.
Name-Festus Pyre
Age-28
Birth date-796 6CE*(1996)
*aging increased due to interdimensional travel*
Birthplace- San Fransisco, California
Eyes- brown
Hair- red
FATAL FLAWS-
is considered an outcast. Has ADHD and can rarely focus, and has shattered personalities due to a car crash when he was young.
Talents-
none of relevance to society. Can smith metal, but is mediocre at best.
Friends-
his only friend died in the car crash aforementioned.
Enemies-
most of the school. Most notable are the snooty twins "Maryland and Danithan Suella" the two have supposedly nothing wrong with their life.
Family- adoptive parent Robyn Nera. Did I mention the car crash? It was bad.
Other Notes- has created a fantasy world called "Nimea", often wishes it was true. Has suspicions, but cannot prove it. Robyn is very lazy and forces him to do everything for her. His old family was abusive too.

DID taco MAKE GARY SUE?
TELL MEEEE!

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Haze the Hedgehog Chapter 3 Prt 1 EVEZ Rampage.

posted by marksmen456

Damayz,Sitting at his troon like he was a king,Requested EVEZ to come in his troon room,Where Xiz and Dezray sat beside him.

"EVEZ,I request that u go attack a city,And bring me meer souls,I thirst for them." He zei to EVEZ.

"But sir,I'm just a lonely Demon,I can't just ATTACK a city BLINDLEY without any help." EVEZ Responded.

"That's Why I'm bringing an Army of Demons to help you,Fool,Now go,And bring me meer souls." He said.

EVEZ nodded and ran off.

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"Dang,I can't Believe that Caboose is gone." Typhoon sighed.

"Well,At least he's in android...

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.:Then came the death of Kalla:. ~Anaya

posted by PhoenixRoyale

It was winter.

I was walking through thick, clear white snow. It was chilly, of course. I knew about Kalla Potter.

She was a nice girl. Never talked back. Made peoples' hearts skip a beat. She always brightened up their days like butterflies and rainbows filling the clear blue sky.

But of course--Then came the death of Kalla. People felt...lost. Depressed. Not their true self without her.

All thanks to Zak. That sniveling little director. Sending out all his assassins on missions that don't even make any sense.

Kalla's death was a complete joke. When I heard the news, I thought it was a joke. But...

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Frostmourne - Book 1, Prologue

posted by skoish

Ifuen leaned over the table, keeping himself up door propping his arms on the table. He stared at the holoscreen, formulating a secret plan in his head. Now usually, he wasn’t this quiet; whenever he had some life-threatening, daring plan of action, he would usually require a little help to think it up, but now he couldn’t trust anyone. He wanted to trust his best friend Jace, who had been at his side since they were little. He wanted to trust Anya, who he had always loved from the bottom of his heart. But letting someone in on the plan would be dangerous; not to him, but to everyone else....

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Jacob sad :(

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RQ- Dominique for Silveranime122

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Source: Me.

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request 4 SaraTheDog

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Source: me & SaraTheDog

Super Duper Jackie (Super Duper are his own words)

added by CyberEchidna

Source: Myself

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Zouge The Bat (NOT MINE!!!)

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Source: Me, photobucket,Zougethebat1

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Mermaide Crystal

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Source: Crystal~~Me Base~~Lennythehedgon On DA~~

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Origins Countdown #8 (The Conflicts Arcane)

posted by TakTheFox

So for those who have no idea what the Conflicts Arcane is, here is a brief summary.

On Mobius-Zone-8, an identity crash-lands onto the planet and vanishes. Years later another one crashes on the same Mobius. This identity is found door a teenager named Nick Falon, nicknamed Talon. He is vrienden with a girl named Kal, and a boy named Jesse. They find out about a terrorist group called “Arma-9” supposedly run door the government, and ally with the identity, later named Rin, to stop them.

So let’s start with the origins of the entire idea.

So while writing halfway into the V Saga in Lizzy Eventide:...

Rachel Savaya's Character Bio (her NEW Character design!)

posted by Rachel_Savaya

This is Rachel in her ordinary human form. she always wore attire that would suit an adventure, just incase her life took an exciting turn.

I had quite a bit of help from Evolia-Wulf on this, so i gotta give her a TON of credit! Rachel's had a lot of critics in the past about her being "Mary-sueish" so Evolia-wulf and i worked together, brainstormed (and brainhurricaned XD Evolia would be the only one to get this joke), put our ideas together, and came up with an AWSOME storyline that i think EVERYONE will agree, is A LOT better than her last! so here it is! Enjoy!

Personality:

Rachel is very timid and shy. she often lacks self confidence in herself, leading her to battles that are made meer difficult than they really need to be...

SISSY RP SERIES HEADS-UP artikel

posted by TakTheFox

So yeah it’s almost here, but there’s a few things to get across before we can start.

To take part in this free-world rp series, your character(s) must have met the character Sissy in at least one of these rps
~Bleeding Moon (link)
~Intruder In the House Yo! (link)
~OYO (link)
If u have met Sissy in a different rp somehow that will count as well.

If u have finished one of those roleplays, and not signed up yet, sign up here (link )*

The forum will begin the events, but it will not restrict the events to this rp’s forum only. Any and all roleplays that I answer of create in the future will...

"A Darkening World" Chapter 1: The Warning

posted by CyberEchidna

(Author's Notes: "Quotations"=Someone talking.
Underlined words shows the focused upon character's thoughts. italicized words are used for notes and other aside voices, such as the one in Cyber's Nightmare.)

Zone: Green heuvel Zone
Countdown: 295 Days until Darkness
POV: Cyber the Echidna 3rd Person

Time: 2:01:50 AM (2:01 AM EST)
Date: 2/27/14

" Come to me, Cyber...come to me....come...and give me...YOUR SOUL!!!! "

Cyber awoke from this horrid nightmare, drenched in a cold sweat.

What...what WAS that...? That...that wasn't... he sat up slowly, rubbing his eyes. He then looked around his room,...

Identity Facts: The Nanites and the Chaos Energy

posted by TakTheFox

So as many know, Identities are composed two simple things, Nanites and Chaos Energy (Captain Obvious is I). The Nanites act as the body structure, while the chaos energy is… the energy, of stamina if u will.

I’ll be explaining some stuff (some meaning a lot) about the Nanites and chaos energy as they interact with each other, but it won’t be a lijst like I normally do, it will mostly be me just moving from topic to topic, as I segway from point to point.

So to start it off, what are the Nanites?

The Nanites are an almost metallic element which is twenty percent core energy, fifty percent...

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LGIaS Pt;8 Rose's Tattured Petals (Black Rose's Story)

posted by zutaradragon

Where 2 start...? The beginning...fine then. Well, I was not born with nine tails. I'm a Bake Furry...meaning each tail is a soul...basicly meaning I've got 9 other people in my head that each have control over 1 tail and could try 2 take over my body any time they want. I've also got access 2 everything they kno and anything they can do. That's perhaps not the best wording...everything they COULD do...b4 they died and then ended up with me...
Needless 2 say, each of them has their own story as well...all 9 of them were criminals of some type....all of them male...Vincent...

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Offspring sequence 4

posted by TakTheFox

Sequence Four

2 Years Later…

Reesa was now pregnant with her first child. This made Melik’s job much harder, as he had to not only take care of her, but he now had to work twice as hard in the labs. Still though, they were no longer living in their little apartments, but they were making very good pay. Nothing went unattended. And yet, Reesa still felt as if her life was horrible, but when u have another living person getting larger inside your body, one would have a good reason for being miserable.

Melik opened the door to their quaint, yet plentiful house, tossed his jas at a stand, missed,...

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LGIaS Pt.2; Flame Blizzard's “Tattoos”

posted by zutaradragon

I told u I'd make this another article...so here goes. I'll start here door saying this....i don't want ur fake ezel sympathy. 2 the dag my life ends I promised myself a few things and I've learned some things as well. Here's my list.
1) I will not lie unless I have 2
2) I will not cry (at least, not in front of people)
3) I will not be ignored
4) Even the good guys get burned
5) All....all supposedly evil people have some sort of motive....whether that motive is good of bad
6) meer then 99% of all pitty is fake of 4 1's self. I will not feel pitty 4 myself
7) The bad will always toon 1st, but the good...