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DISCLAIM-seriously? y'all get it door now. Don Belisarrio and I are TWO DIFFERENT PEOPLE! Therefore, i own NOTHING to do with NCIS except DVD s. of anything else i mention in this article. so yeah, stop reading this and get down to what u actually clicked for.

don't get confused, the beginning is the same. this just has the middle and end of it :)


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PROLOGUE: An older gray haired man entered, and immediately all eyes went on him. He was almost never here, but he was the most famous man in the building. Everybody knew he was here for one thing, and would never stop until he got it. He was a dangerous man, and there was only one force strong enough to stop him alone.


PART TWO:

The elevator dings, and immediately Eli starts for his daughter. Unfortunately, 7 of her best vrienden form an invisible bubble of manpower around her, deflecting his advance toward MTAC.

"Sorry, Eli. You're needed elsewhere," McGee says, rather bravely, considering he was a probie still.

"It seems that your country actually needs to know u got here, although i don't see why they would care," Tony informed, not able to resist the sarcasm that is his trademark.

"I guess it COULD turn into an international incident if we didn't let u go," Gibbs reasoned,

"And i might brand him for it." Vance concluded.

"Oh, but wait. The fun doesn't stop there!" Abby cheered. "After that, I get to test all of your clothes for any chemical i deem necessary. And my case load right now is really light, and i'm really bored and lonely down in Abbyville.. So, it'll probably be every chemical known to man!!!" Abby beamed.

"And I will be lending u some scrubs. Then, I will need a full body exam, internal and external. Those trans-continental flights are just filled with germs. I shudder at the thought." Ducky said.

"And since I'm still new, and I've never participated in one of these," Palmer lied, "I need to take long, detailed notes. And maybe even participate. Right, doctor?"

"Yes, Mr. Palmer. That would be best for your experience."

"So u won't be able to talk to Ms. David until the hearing." Vance said.

"Or, ever. Unless she wants to," McGee said.

"So, never." Gibbs and DiNozzo zei in unison.

Before he could even get a word in edgewise, McGee, Vance, DiNozzo, and Gibbs wisked him away up to MTAC. Ziva just sat there, an indescribable pride and love filled her, and she knew she had made the right decision.

"Don't worry, Z! We've got your back," Abby reassured her.

"But wait, I want to interrogate him. Off the record," Ziva stated.

"Well, i guess i can make an acception, based on the family ties, but it'll have to be later. We need to get a real interrogation done and find out why he's targeting you," Vance compromised.

"You're seriously wasting an interrogation room on the bastard? I could tell u that. I have, as a matter of fact. He's a brokenhearted old fool who would rather make a public scene than apologize to his daughter. Simple as that." Ziva ranted.

"Listen to her, Vance. u might actually get this one right," Gibbs smirks.

"Where is he?" Ziva inquired.

"Tony's preping him for interrogation," McGee says with a smile.

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Eli is sitting there, somber as a priest during a funeral, bracing himself for what's to come. He's assuming Gibbs will want many pieces of him, but he is praying Ziva will come, he needs a chance to explain.

"Hey, Eli! Long time no chit-chat!"

Oh, crap. It's the arrogant child DiNozzo.

"I am aware," Eli shrugs.

"You don't look very happy to see me." DiNozzo observes.

"That is because i am not." Eli retorts.

"Now I see where Ziva gets her anti-contractions from. Now, that's a shame. Anyway, this reminds me of a movie."

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"New action flick, it's Angelina Jolie, it's called Salt! Ever heard of it? It's about a girl who's convicted of betraying her country? Yeah. Her "father" ends up dying in the end. He vaguely looked like you, too! Strange coincidence, isn't it?" Tony wonders.

------------------REAL TIME NOW-------------------

"Do I have to remind u how i feel about those, DiNozzo?" Gibbs storms.

"Awh, boss! Time's up already?!" Tony said.

"Just get up!" Gibbs demands.

"Well, I can't say it's been fun," Tony mumbles as he leaves.

"At least, we agree on that," Eli considers.

"DiNozzo, out. Now!" Gibbs barks.

DiNozzo slams the door, and heads straight to observation.

"Intimidating does not suite you," Ziva comments.

"Hey, at least i try. A for effort, right?" Tony tries.

"Why would they give u an A when the word starts with an E?" Ziva inquires.

"Never mind," Tony backtracks. "Hey, look. Gibbs has your dad's mouth twitching already. How long's he been in there, like 2 minutes? That's a record!" Tony exclaims.

"I think he's ready for me," Ziva says, eyes shooting poison at the gray eyes staring back at her through the double-sided glass.

"My turn," Ziva whispers, her voice like an icy chill sending shivers down the men's spine, moving like a cat out to kill over to the steel table.

"Be my guest," Gibbs growls, slamming the door behind him.

"Why?" Ziva shouts.

"You know full well. u signed the contract. There was NO WAY u should even have a QUESTIONED why I am here. u signed on for TEN YEARS. u were to be an Isreali citizen, operating for Mossad through NCIS, for TEN WHOLE YEARS," Eli shouts, his voice rising and pounding on the table.

"Yes. I was. But, the contract ALSO states that i am only to be a citizen for FIVE years. After which I can make the choice," Ziva counters, her voice calm, steady, and eerily foreboding as the man towers over her, his shadow engulfing her.

"You lie." Eli states.

----------------OBSERVATION-----------------------

DiNozzo, who's enjoying this toon all too much, turns to Gibbs.

"Hey, boss? Ever imagine Ziva as a teenager? I wonder if she ever snuck out, partied, all that kinda stuff. Probably, since she WAS human. She also could have been like a female, isreali, kung-fu kid kinda chick, which....," he was cut off door a sharp, upward blow to his head.

"DiNozzo. Filter yourself," Gibbs reminded him.

"Of course, boss," Tony says, rather sheepishly.

--------------INTERROGATION ROOM------------------

"Face it. u have not been able to verplaats on and get over last summer. u have become soft. Weak. Spineless," Eli spits the words out like vermin.

"Soft? I was raped, beaten, and burned. Everywhere i turned in that place there was a man wanting to kill me. u didn't send help," Ziva pointed out with a level of ferocity that would make the joker curl up and cry.

"I thought u were dead," Eli countered.

"Yet u didn't feel the need to avenge for your only daughter?" Ziva questioned with a voice that mixed a level of grief that would have melted the tin man's hart-, hart and shock that would have electrified glass.

They were face to face, the chairs long since forgotten about.

"A waste of resources that would have been better spent trying to finish what u and Michael started," Eli tried.

"Go fry," Ziva spat. She turned on her heel, swung open the door and left without a backwards glace. She made a bee-line for the elevator, and walked out of the building.

Eli wasn't to be defeated door a few measly walls. He immediately whipped out his cell phone, had a hurried conversation in Arabic, and then got a self-satisfied smirk.

Ziva was running door now. Running from Eli. Running from the past. Running for no reason at all. Just, running. She knew Eli had a backup plan. He wouldn't travel all the US with just bodyguards. He would have hit teams. Sleepers. Anything. The moment she got her car, she popped the trunk. There, in the open space, were 25 packs of C4, and a timer that was dangerously flirting with 0:00.

ughh, mental block! 'night!

---comments = a happy me!
#4 wow i realy like this one i hope u do to but if not tell me why not so i can make u like it and also if u like black riem vs assassin read my other ones they are called sister sister ,but i need help to get past the 2 chapter so please help me
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Megan’s pov
She had never been so insulted
This girl just stud there withstanding her sneer like it was the most hilarious thing in the world don’t get her wrong she had seen people laugh at her before but never while she had this look on and don’t think her conceded but she had also never...
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posted by NCISCHIK
Ok please, please don't judge me to harsh on this. I was up till 3 am writing this and then my little brother deleted it all, and I am in troubles for screaming at him, so this was better until I had to re-write it. And don't bother reading this if bad spelling and punctuation bothers, u because I am not going to check this over and over again, just to get it right. I did that once and it got deleted, so oh well. This is my first fan fic so i hope u like it
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It was almost mid-night and Aiva was ready for a night at home pagina with a good book, when...
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Hope u like it!

NCIS x NCIS x TIVA x TIVA x

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Chapter One - I Can Hear the Sirens

Police sirens blaring. A cordoned off alleyway and paramedics jumping out of ambulances. Tony DiNozzo was just about to take a vacancy. With a shotgun wound to the stomach and multiple bruises to the head, chest and leg areas, it didn't look good. He had survived, against the odds, to live long enough for the ambulance to get there.

"Will I live through this?" he choked. He could barely breathe with all the tubes going down his throat. His paramedic was a dirty blonde called Ellexis, according to her...
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yay seconde capter hope u like it please coment :)
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present time ziva’s pov
“I cannot believe that he would do this to me this is crazy” ziva thought as she retreated from the scene it had been perfect the last 3 months of has it he would not be stupid enough to cheat on an assassin right
About that time she heard someone calling her name but it was too late if she turned around now she would kill someone for sure so she just kept running toward her apartment hoping he would not follow her
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posted by iheartwheaterly
Disclaimer-I am not affiliated with NCIS of CBS.
I do not have any part in creating in these characters, nor do I own them.
Rating-T
Enjoy!
Anthony entered the building with less swagger and less spring in his step. Mondays were basically torture for him, it ended his weekend that was filled with bier and rommel, ongewenste food. As soon as he placed down his gear, Ziva started to snicker.
"What?" he snapped.
She looked up from her computer screen.
"None of your business." she retorted hatefully.
McGee watched the bicker and realized the intensity in the bullpen. Tony stared intently at Ziva, and she ignored him....
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A/N: A bit of a small chapter, sorry. Ah... Enemies Foreign is airing in less then 48 hours! :)
Disclaimer: I do not own NCIS.
Song: Say When door The Fray.

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"I think I'll take that coffee now."

Tony and Ziva walked along the streets just outside NCIS with the sun hanging low in the sky - among the dark grey clouds, both having half-filled coffee cups at hand. The growls of thunder became meer dominant as...
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posted by Ms_Montana
A/N: Just a short one-shot inspired door “False Witness”. I own nothing.


From hands and hearts


With another snowy evening in D.C, another dag ended for Tony. But it was the first time in the last few days that he felt actually pretty good. Not the sort of good his was used – DiNozzo-good – but it was still a huge improvement. Unintentional Brenda Bittner had puzzled him; making him think about his entire life, the past years and all the One-Night-Stands he had had. Midlife crazy.
He was about to switch on TV, when someone knocked at his door. DiNozzo wondered; he hadn’t expected visitors...
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posted by MYK79
Ziva is happy they skipped the movie, even though she knows it only confirms what he fears. Tony was right! Since they moved back here, she had only left the house to visit her former employer, once, and to go with him to bring her daughter to school where she sat in the car, four out of the five times. Her anxiety was rebuilding with the growing of her belly. The first week she hadn’t let Tali out of her sight, of even out of the house. Occasionally both of them had companied Tony to visit his father in the nursing home. Now that Senior had recovered and Tali would soon be starting first...
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posted by earane
FanFiction everyone on this sitepage must off read/write them. A lot of u will also know about fanfiction.net
Now what my plan is, to make a lijst with reall good tiva fanfictions so that u do not have to search, because mostly fellow readers can point the best stories at you.
The idea is this, name the story+ the auteur in your commentaar and I'll put it on the list, but please don't put your own in the comments, let's stay objective.

List:
My girl - Angel-death-dealer
The mes - Broadway007
Blank - Prissy and Bregan
Captives - DiNUTZzo
Just One meer - Aldea0402
Motherhood - Sophie Ranier
Me, My fake husband, and my crazy aunt - broken piece of the puzzle
added by Tivaforever487
Source: Meee
added by Tivaforever487
Source: Meeee
i got a really good idea when i was riting this so here it is insted of making a long ending i decided for this to be the end of the first of the vs series yay dont hate me for the ending sorry
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Ziva’s pov
Once we got the girl to the hospital the girl had stopped crying I thought that she had gone numb door that time so would I
Tony was feeling better and I was sitting in the back with him and the girl that I had found out was named magan is in the front with abby driving
I was in the back with tony and we are all forgiven
When we got out of...
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At the sight of Tony she hurled herself into his arms. He gladly took he in and started shhing and rubbing her back when she started to cry again. He picked her up bridal style and walked to his bed laid her gently down and held her and he could've swore she was whispering "Tony, how could you?"

Ziva's pov

I woke up in his arms. The man I love. The man I won't dare datum because I am too afraid of what my father of Gibbs will do to him. The man who risked his life saving me in Somalia. The man who I had just had a nightmare about dieing in my arms. I woke up in the arms of Special Agent Tony...
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posted by NCISCHIK
Hope u like I spent meer time on this with less interruption well except a texting war with my friend I hope I win that
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Tony being Tony let the girl in, even though Ziva was on his divan, bank asleep. Once the girl was inside Tony led her to the kitchen. They introduced themselves. About this time Ziva woke up at the sound of Tony dropping a bier bottle. She ran in the kitchen, gun in hand and screaming. At that, the guest, Lizzy, screamed and Tony yelled for every body to calm down. That's when Ziva finally noticed Lizzy, but all Lizzy seemed to...
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Tony gets off the elevator and sees her. She still didn't look good. It's been a week after Samalia and she still is being withdrawn, acting like someone is going to pop out of no where and drag her back there. Back to all the pain and torture. Tony knows that that is imposible but even if it wasn't it wouldn't happen. He wouldn't let it. He would not loose her again. He sighs as he gets to his bureau and sinks in his chair. They had just finished a case and now it was time for paperwork. To his surprise his computer made a dinging sound signaling that he hd a new instant message. He opened up...
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When I spend time with my sis heather she always gives me ideas not all good but u know what this one was really good like so good that I had to write it so here I go
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ziva’s pov (the italicized part is thoughts)
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I should not be here

I should just be home

what was I thinking of course someone will recognize me I mean the probe giving the tore wont but that is besides the point

Abby will of course will ahhh I am so so incredibly stupid

And tony no I refuse to think of him and what he zei when...
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posted by NCISCHIK
this is just something that popped into my head while I was reading a fanfiction but it is not a repeat at all it is completely different it is just something that they had ziva say so remember I don’t own ncis of the characters that play in it I just took them out to play
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Ziva’s pov
She had to admit the past 3 months had been the best of her life she did not think that she could ever been unhappy again.
She was going on a run before she meet her boyfriend for lunch that is right an ex-assassin just zei boy friend do not look so shocked...
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posted by NCIS_Addict_87
Sorry for the oh so long break & oh so short chapter, but I think my muse in back. The volgende chapter is already in the works. Enjoy & don't be mad!

Disclaimer: I do not own NCIS, the characters of any of the lyrics used.




Having phone sex? Laila Tov. Nesiah Tovah. I’m tired of pretending. I was just going to tussle your hair, sometimes it makes u smile. For you. Why are u here, Tony? I couldn’t live without you…

Tony groggily tried to open his eyes but was unable to. He was confused and in pain. What happened? he wondered. He turned his head to the side searching for his McGee,...
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posted by NCISCHIK
ok heads up this is written from my I pod touch so it we be a little rough so be gentle I just had to write it before it was out of my head forever
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All of a sudden when she thought that it was an all clear she heard a single shot Followed door hearing her partners agonizing cry
She had never been so scared in her entire life ... of so she thought seeing him being carried off on a gurney was way way worse
Upone her arrival to the hospital she ran in flashed her badge and zei DiNozzo
The woman didn’t even bother to look up she had dealt with NCIS...
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I am absolutely confident that there are lots of medical mistakes and the like. I am also fully aware that the police would’ve taken Tony’s phone at the crime scene, but for the sake of the story, I’m asking u to overlook it.

WARNING! Characters VERY OOC.

CHAPTER TWO
When the World Falls Down

This chapter takes place a very short while after the first.

Gibbs liked to work on his boot late at night. It gave him time to reflect on the latest case, remind himself that he made a difference in the world and why he did what he did.

As the scent of sawdust filled his nostrils, he registered another...
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