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 Commando Mike
Commando Mike
This story was inspired door a fan who sent me art work on my Facebook Page, Zoey Total Drama Revenge of the Island. Check it out if u have a Facebook. I hope u like this story. I might me rusty because I haven't written a story in so long, so enjoy. I also want to say about this story that Mike and Zoey are in college, but it's during the summer. Also, It's in short chapters
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Chapter 1
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It was just another dag at the psychiatrist. Zoey was waiting for Mike to come out through the doors of the office. There was a part of her that was always worried, but another part of her that wasn't. Mike finally came out. Zoey stood up hoping for good news. "Hey, Zoey.". "Hey, Mike. I'm hoping for some good news,"Zoey replied. "You don't have to be worried my dear. Mike is fine, like always. I want to thank u again, Zoey. Ever since that toon u and Mike were in, Mike's MPD has gotten a lot better," Lisa said. "Your welcome, doctor," Zoey responded.

The two of them walked out of the psychiatrists and went to hang out. They got into Zoey's red converteerbaar, cabriolet and drove off to the ice cream parlor. They headed in and got the town's best ice cream. They talked for about half an hour. That's when everything went berserk.

The doors slammed open and the room went quiet. A gang of guys, tall and sleek, walked in and over to Mike and Zoey. Of course, it was the one guy who got on both of their nerves. The same guy who turned the sweet, innocent girl into a choragus, wild chick, AKA Commando
Zoey."Well if it isn't the two loser, love birds,". It was Scott. Zoey almost got riled up, but Mike stopped her before she could.

"What do u want, Scott?" Mike asked angrily. "I just wanted to see my two best vrienden in the world," Scott replied. Zoey was just about to say something when Scott dumped Mike's ice cream all over her. "Oh, I'm so sorry, Zoey. Let me help u clean off," Scott zei as he dumped her water all over her. Him and his gang were laughing hard. At that point Zoey was soaking wet and super angry. She wanted to break Scott in half, but she needed Commando Zoey to do that. She hasn't been out since the show. She still wanted to know how he recovered from the haai attack, but that wasn't important right
now.

Zoey got up and looked Scott right in the eyes. To him, it looked like flames were shooting out from them, but he kept his cool. He insulted both of them any walked out. Everyone, then, just stared at Mike and Zoey. "I'll be right back," Zoey zei and walked off to the bathroom to clean off. Mike sat there feeling hatred at Scott. for the both of them, and then felt the need to go do something. Mike stood up and out of the parlor. There, he saw Scott and his gang. Mike walked straight up to Scott and punched him right in the noes. He didn't know what he just did, but now he was afraid. All he knew at that point was Scott's nose was bleeding and he should run.

He started to run away, but one of Scott's guys caught him door the collar. He stared to pray and hope for help, but nothing happened. Mike was just about to be pulverized when a miracle happened. Zoey saw Mike in trouble and that's when she snapped. Commando Zoey appeared and beat them down. "NO ONE HURTS MIKE!!!!!" exclaimed Zoey. She then punched them all hard enough to where they black out. Zoey got up, brushed herself off and turned to Mike.

"You ok?", she asked as she helped Mike up. "Yeah, I'm fine,". Mike just looked down at the group of guys then looked at his hand that turned to a fist. "Why did I do that? I've never punched a guy in my life," Mike thought.

The rest of the day, until that night, Mike's vraag rang in his head. He wanted to know why he punched Scott. He was so confused. He laid in his bed with his hands over his stomach, breathing at a steady pace. His quiet surroundings caused him to drift off to sleep.

Chapter 2
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Weeks passed. Mike gradually started
acting meer rambunctious and crazier that ever. It was as if he couldn't control it. He was like Robin kap of the Lone Ranger, only meer
dangerous. Zoey was worried and knew he
had to go to his psychiatrist. Lucky for them, today was the day.

Zoey walked over to Mike's house and rang the door bell. His roommate, Cameron answered the door. "Hey, Cameron. Is Mike here? We have to go,". Cameron responded," Yeah, he's here. Come on in". The two walked down the hall. "He's in here, but be careful. He hasn't been himself lately," Cameron informed. "Trust me. I know," Zoey replied. She walked in. "Hey, Mike. It's time to go,". "Oh. Hey, Zoey," he stood up a kissed her on the cheek. "OK. Let's go," Mike replied to her. They zei bye to Cameron as they walked out.

10 minuten later, they pulled up to Mike's physiatrist's office. They walked in and the two of them were in for a surprise. Lisa was sitting in the waiting room, seeming very worried. When she saw Mike and Zoey, she immediately stood up and walked to them. "Mike, please follow me. Zoey, your welcome to come too," zei Lisa. They started walking down the hall when Mike asked," What's the matter?". Lisa just kept walking until they stopped at a room Mike hasn't seen before. They all walked inside and saw a bunch of sciency gadgets. Zoey was instructed to walk into the room volgende to the room they were currently in. So she did.

In the middle of the room was a tafel, tabel and they sat down. "What the matter, Lisa? And, where am I," asked Mike. "Mike, I found some startling news," responded Mike's doctor. "What is it,". "Mike," started Lisa," u have a fifth personality,".

Chapter 3
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"What?! How is this possible?" exclaimed Mike. "We're not sure how it happened, but we can tell u about him," zei Lisa, "his name is Commando Mike. He tough like Vito, agile like Svetlana, and sourceful like Manitoba. I think he came to be, because of something u either saw of did. Now we don't know how to trigger him, but we think it might be anger. But because we don't want trouble, u have to go in your subconscious. Can u do that for us?" asked Lisa.

"Yeah. I guess. Where should I lay down?" Mike asked. "Well u can lay anywhere, but I recommend the bed over there," she replied as she pointed to a nearby bed.

Mike walked over to the soft bed and laid there. He closed his eyes until he fell asleep. Lisa and her assistant Gwen (Yes. The Gwen from Total drama) walked over and stood around the bed. They took notes on what was
happening.

Zoey was very worried. She knew this room and she didn't want the same thing that happened to her, to happen to Mike.
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Flashback
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It was the before the Freshman jaar of high school started. Zoey was one of the most quiet kids at the orientation for the entire freshman class. Luckily she was with one of her best friends, Dawn. They walked around to classes together with Zoey's parents. After all of that Zoey went home pagina with them. As soon as they got into her car, Zoey instantly felt terrible. It was because of her parents. They were telling her that she was so quiet when they met her teachers and she should of been meer outgoing. She felt even meer terrible when they got home pagina and mom told her that she needs to think about her future and all that crap. What turned her is when Scott insulted her. She went crazy after that. She was never the same. That's how Commando Zoey came to be.
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Reality
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Zoey looked at herself in discomfort and sadness. Then she looked at Mike in worry. Mike was her best friend and she loved him very much. "If only I knew what was happening in his head," Zoey thought.

Chapter 4
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Back in Mike's subconscious, he was sneaking around looking for anything
suspicious. It was really quiet and really dark. Just then he saw a small light, up ahead. He grew closer and closer hoping it was one of his other personalities. He was closer than ever to the light, when it hit him. A green, slimy ball of goo hit Mike right in the back. It was pretty big about half the height of Mike and twice the width of him. He cried for help. He heard foot steps running up to him.

"I got him. This is a big one, mate. hallo guys come help me with this," exclaimed Manitoba. Two meer pairs of feet came running up to Mike and the green ball of goo. "Don't worry, Mike. We'll get u out of there," Vito told him calmly. He grabbed his wrists and pulled him out of the goo ball. "Why didn't u tell us that u were gonna get a new personality?!" exclaimed Svetlana as she struggled to hold on to the ball of goo. "I didn't know! Just like I didn't know that u would be here either!" replied Mike. "Fair," Vito said. The ball broke free and everyone backed up. The ball was right in front of them. They were terrified of what was going to
happen.

That moment the goo ball started to break open like a chick breaking from an egg. It opened, and a great light broke free along with smoke. At first they couldn't tell what the personality looked like, but once the smoke died down they could see the figure that stood before them. It looked like Mike ,only he had war paint just below his eyes and the bottom of his overhemd, shirt was ripped off an wrapped around his head. Mike walked up to him and just stared at him.

Chapter 5
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They all started to have a deep conversation and got to know Commando Mike. "So," Mike started," do u know how your triggered?". "Hm. Let me think," zei CM, "I'm pretty sure it might be anger of something based around that,". Mike replied," Well thanks. I will see u guys later. And CM...." zei Mike. "Yes?" he replied. There's someone I might be able to introduce u to,". 'Who," asked CM suspiciously. "You'll see. Well bye guys," Mike said.

Mike woke up from his sleep to see Lisa and Gwen standing near him. "So, what happened in there?," Gwen asked. Mike, still confused about what happened, said," Whoa! That was crazy. There was a ball of goo, and light, and smoke, and and and,". "Mike. Calm down," zei Lisa, "Now, can u tell me what Commando Mike's trigger is?,". He finally calmed down and told her the trigger. "But the only problem is, is that I'm not sure how to get angry. The only time I've ever felt angry is when.....". Mike stopped and remembered the one person who started all of this. "What is it Mike?", asked Gwen. He slowly looked up at them and responded,
"Scott,".

"Scott?!" replied Gwen. "Yes. Scott,". "Scott!" Zoey zei over the intercom. Mike put a thumbs up. "Who's Scott?" Lisa asked. That's when Zoey finally walked into the room where everyone was. "Who is Scott? I'll tell u who Scott is. He is the one caused all of this. He's the one that turned me. He has gotten on my nerves since 9th grade. Because of him I'll never be the same," she zei as she slammed her fist on a tafel, tabel nearby. Mike got up, walked over to her and put his hand on her back to calm her down.

"Then we have to go and find him. Where ever he is," Gwen responded. "But we don't know where he is. He could be anywhere. He could be in France for all we know," Mike said. *beep* *beep* Mike's phone got a text. He looked at his phone and realized it was Cameron. Mike open the message. "Oh no," cried Mike. "What is it?" everyone asked in unison. "I know where Scott is,".

Chapter 6
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They all drove off to where Scott was. "What did the text say again," asked Zoey. "It zei *MIKE. HELP!!!!!!!!!!! Scott is at our house. I'm hiding in a closet so he can't find me. Please come soon,". "We better hurry then," zei Gwen.

10 minuten later, they arrived at the house. They all walked in and there, stood Scott. "Why are u here, Scott?" Mike asked. "I like to walk in to people's homes and terrorize them. u guys are next," replied Scott. "How? There's two of us and one of you," responded Zoey. "Wrong,". Scott snapped his fingers and three of his gang members appeared. "Come on Mike. We can take him," Zoey told him. "Yeah. Sure u can. Face it Zoey your boyfriend is a weakling. He couldn't fight if his life depended on it,". Scott laughed. Zoey snapped. Once she turned back into Commando Zoey, she tried to get Mike to fight. "I-I can't." Mike zei in shame. "That's right. u cant fight, because your a weakling. Just like that Cameron guy who I have tied up over in your very ugly living room. I mean come on. Get some paint on your walls of something," Scott said.

Mike got angry. Like really angry. "No one can tie up Cameron. And no one make's fun of my living room," Mike responded angrily. Mike turned into Commando Mike. He ripped his clothes and had war paint. Everything got graphic all of a sudden. Everyone was bloody and Scott and his gang were knocked out on the floor. Gwen called an ambulance and got the blood cleaned up.

After the ambulance came and picked up Scott and the others, Lisa and Gwen left. CM and CZ were left alone in the house,other than Cameron who was still tied up. The two of them just stood there staring at each other. "So, u must be the one Mike wanted to introduce to me," zei CM. "So. What are u gonna do about it," CZ zei with a smirk on her face. "This,". CM kissed her. They both turned back into their regular selves. They looked at each other. Mike then said," I should probably go and untie Cameron," Mike zei quietly.

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1 jaar later
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Everything was back to normal. Mike and Zoey didn't get any meer trouble from Scott. They decided to protect anyone who was in trouble (not like super heroes). They lived happily ever after.

The End
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Finally finished!!!!!!!!!! I really hope u guys enjoy it. I'll have another story out soon. Peace out, guys (and gals).
 Commando Zoey and Commando Mike
Commando Zoey and Commando Mike
posted by gotdroti45
This is basically a listing of ways i'm like the tdroti cast.OK so lets get this over with---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Anne Maria:I love fashion,and make-up
B:I rarely ever talk
Brick:I'm very Patriotic to the U.S.A
Cameron:I'm practically a nerd,but also very sweet
Dakota:I wanna be famous someday
Dawn:I take care of the earth,and love animals
Jo:I like to beat boys
Lightning:I'm very competitive
Mike:I'm crazy,but also very kind-hearted
Sam:I like video games(but not as much as sam does)
Scott:I can be mean at times for good reasons
Staci:I like to find out about my family's past(but I believe staci is a psycho liar,which I'm not)
Zoey:I'm very easy going,and sometime's I can lose my temper
------------------------------------------------------------------And that's pretty much it for this one.Thanks for reading.
TDBB5

Tear drops on my balance beam Chapter 5

-Moving mistake-

It didn't take long for the trio to pack up their things. Manitoba and Vito managed to pack most of their old items and important things. Some others they left in their old rooms. 
They zei good bye to their saluting father and crying mother just as they drove off into the distance. 

Svetlana was doing the same. She had packed her things into a moving van. Penelope hopped into the car and drove her to the comlex.

With only an uur of traveling, the graduates end up at the giant apartment complex. It was a shade of peach, with red roofs...
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Mike meets Jimmy: Chapter 1

I do not own Total drama revenge if the island of Jimmy two shoes cartoon.

Slight Mike/Heloise 
A tiny bit of Cameron/Heloise
Slight Jimmy/Zoey, 
Jo/Brick
Dawn/Scott
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"Finished!" Cameron exclaimed as he screwed the last bolt into his machine.

The small bubble boy had been secretly working on a teleportation device since he first arrived at the camp. Just in case if he missed his mother too much. 
  It took a while, but with patience and a very skilled mind, the teenage boy was able to make the small device in only days.
   
     Cameron hid his tools under the...
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posted by Tkomastersay
hallo guys, me again and am writing this new story after seeing many storys that was all almost the same about mike and zoey :p, i was thinkin about makin one about sam.
So.... enjoy :D thx to all my fans.
It was a busy morning everyone was eating their food, but sam wasn't there to eat.
Sam was runing to the cablin with a video game on his hands. And he slam the door.
'' Oh yes pass level 16 hahaha yes'' Sam zei loudly.
As he keeps on playing with his eyes on the game.
Camron comes in with a papersheet on his hand.
''hey bro what u writing down'' Sam said.
'' Just about u playing your cool video...
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Scott: Scott is a jerk. He uses and manipulates people. What he did to Mike and what he did to Dawn was just awful. And he fails at being an antagonist and his plans don't even make any sense. I mean I,m going to loose on purpose and eliminate my own team to give the other team a false sense of security. How does that make any sense. I'm honestly surprised he made it as far as he did.

Staci: She was so annoying!! And her character was pointless. I,m glad she got eliminated when she did.

Lightning: I can't believe he made it into the finale two. His personality is horrible.He is stupid, mean,...
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 Mike
Mike
volgende chapter. I have a headache and I'm tired, but yet I still write my story. Why? Someone answer why I continue to write. JK. See what happens when Mike find out about his MPD. Now......on this story.......right now....................BANANA!!!
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"What is it, doctor? I want my little boy to be OK," zei Mike's mom. "I'm not sure. I need Mike to stay over night for further testing. I will need u back around 2:30 tomorrow," replied Emma. "OK," zei Mike's mom. She kneeled volgende to her son and hugged him hard, "It'll be OK, Mike. Emma here will...
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posted by emmab13
I just decided to write this because it's almost Halloween. Also in this artikel Mike doesn't have MPD. I'm sorry if u wanted him to have it, but he doesn't and I think you'll really enjoy this article.
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It was a windy, fall day. Halloween was in a couple days. Five teens walked through the halls of the school. Their names were Mike, Zoey, Vito, Svetlana, and Manitoba. Of course these teens had friends, but they had no idea who each other were. They barley paid attention to each other. It was time for lunch, and...
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 TDROTI
TDROTI
I realized that I have at least one thing in common with every TDROTI character. So i decided to share them with you.
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Zoey- I'm sweet and I really hate jocks.

Mike- I'm crazy, but I'm also really cool and a nice person.

Dawn- I really connect with nature and animals.

Cameron- I'm kinda a nerd.

Brick- I'm tough, but i have a good heart.

Dakota- I like having my picture taken.

B(Beverly)- I don't talk a lot.

Sam- I play a lot of video games.

Jo- I like exercising and to beat boys.

Lightning- I'm a sports person. I like to be captain.

Anne Maria- I like fashion and messing with my hair.

Staci- I lie to make my life better.

Scott- I can be mean when I want to.
 Teams
Teams
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TDBB14

"Tear drops on my balance beam"
         Chapter 14

14 chapters already?! Dang! Anyway, I love doing these! And I love all of the people who continuously review and give me confidence (you know who u are :D) now I only have 9 oneshots left until we get to the good parts! If u think that's too much, then just tell me and I'll cut it down! On with the story!

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-Babies-

Svetlana loved babies.

It was an unspeakable love. She loved their chubby cheeks. Their toothless smiles, and the way they squeak and coo is just too cute to pass by.

Whenever her an Manitoba watched TV,...
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Please don't complain this is the best I could find..
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