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Ok hi im not goood at peoms but im not sure if this one is any good can u plz tell me??

im here
im there
im everywere
everywere but your heart
wich is the place
i want
and need to be
u smile
i smile
and that almost makes my day
but when u look at me
it makes my week great
but if u told me u loved me?
that will make my life brilliant
but now ill just watch you
as i wait for my lifes dream come true...

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lol thanks so much
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vampirefreak_26 said:
u are great, I hope u will put meer peoms.
gose I totelly loved this one.
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ScottishChic said:
For someone who isnt good at poems tht was gr8 but u did kind of lose the magic at the end... sorry honestly im no good at poems either but jst work on the end bit a little, i think its from "it makes my week great" u shud try n improve.
Sorry, didnt mean to sound rude but the rest of it was brilliant!!!!!!
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thanks so much
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um... is tht a sracastic thanks???
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countrygirl2008 said:
that was great.
u seems to have the gift to write naturally.
it had a few miss spellings but it was great!
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Abilei said:
I agree with the first person to comment.
I can write poems and to me it was pretty good.

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MrsRadcliffe said:
That was great, although i think at the end it was a little off, but 4 a person like me who is good at littleture, i dont think i could write a poem like this :]
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Robertmanyac said:
Thats a really good peom better then what i've heard witch is only a few but still
sorry not a really good speller
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lilmisstwilight said:
its mint how long have u been writing poems lol
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Elzybells said:
honestly that was brill. i love writing poems 2! uv got guts 2 toon it on this website! but ye well done :) i find bella and edwards relationship magical and i love writing things about it 2 i love writing songs about it i cant get enough twilight!!! :D is it ok if i add u
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honestly that was brill. i love writing poems 2! uv got guts 2 toon it on this website! but ye well done :) i find bella and edwards relationship magical and i love writing things about it 2 i love writing songs about it i cant get enough twilight!!! :D is it ok if i add u
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i love your picture
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thx
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