what do u think of this drawing of my OC?

please be honest. i've been so objective of my drawings lately i think everything looks horrible. thanks (:

Here's Milly's profiel info just for kicks:

Milly is 24 in wolf years her vacht, bont is Gray and Black, half her face is black and half is gray, her eyes are ice blue.
Milly's parent's were from enemy packs. when it was discovered they were together, both were shunned from their respective packs.