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posted by greenstergirl
 if this girl was wearing modern clothing do u think she would suit Janie better than my drawing? (No duh!!)
if this girl was wearing modern clothing do u think she would suit Janie better than my drawing? (No duh!!)
Danny:

I grabbed my roze and green duffel bag off the wooden shelf beside my green bed.

I was inside the earth elemental boom house where all the earth elementals sleep if they are staying in the BOES over night. Marcus, Brenna, and I were supposed to be sleeping but we all weren't. We were running out to go find Janie. We weren't supposed to leave.

After pulling on skinny jeans and a green Nike overhemd, shirt I was ready. I woke up Marcus after I had pulled on my brown converse and jacket.

"wha....what is it Danny?" He asked impatiently while rubbing his eyes. I ruffled his black hair.

"Get up meat head we're going. And be quiet. u don't want Trixi waking up and hearing us." I pointed at the bed door the window where Trixi snored.

He nodded and got up to change in the boy's room. I went to wake up Brenna where I found her already out on the ground with her bag strapped over one shoulder.

"Hurry up slow pokes!!" She whispered. Yea she's an early riser. She wakes up the minuut the sun begins to rise. It's her element. Still the sun wasn't all the way up yet.

I giggled and went back in for Marcus. We slowly climbed down the ladder and saw Brenna and her red curls.

After we jumped over boundary between the real world and the valley Marcus pushed us into a tree.

"Marcus!!" I zei frustrated. "The boom says that pushing us into it isn't a very good wake up call."

"Sorry.." He whispered. "I sensed someone close by, like someone is following us."

"Did the earth tell you?" I zei jokingly.

He gave me an annoyed look. "Yes, it did for your information. Any way u just talked to the tree."

I stared back.

After about 5 seconden Marcus let go of me and Brenna. We began walking again until Marcus pushed us into a green bush.

"What was that for?!" Brenna yelled at him. Marcus put a finger to her lips to shush her.

"I heard him again."

I sighed. "Are u sure it's a 'him'?" I asked.

"Yes. He's hot."

"Ugh....." awkward. Brenna and I stared at each other. Marcus DID NOT get the memo.

"OH!!!!! No no no I didn't mean it that way I meant like he is burning as in hot! Like his aura is like a fire!"

"Okay that explains it. Now will u get off of me?" I cried. I freeked and jumped up.

"Wait we may have to-" But we already knew what he was going to say.

A tall boy with blond hair and a tan muscular body of about 14 chucked a brand ball at Marcus. The boy looked like he was a volleybal player from California. u know that kind.

He jumped up and sent a path of burning flame towards Marcus's bare feet. (you know, earth elemental)

I screamed and sent a twig to et the burn. Marcus winked at me and sent a charging rock at the boy.

Brenna couldn't do anything, there was no sunlight. Frantically, I sent her up to the top, boven of the boom and ran behind the boy.

As I slid behind him I turned and found my self a raging grizzly bear. My animal.

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Janie:

A small tear slid down my cheek. I couldn't believe I did that. I had left my family. I knew being there was the key to my survival. Why wouldn't I want to be with them? Learn their ancient secret?

Honestly, I had a feeling this wasn't going to happen to anyone. Finding out you're half wolf half human. of that u can control one of the elements.

I remembered the times when Danny and I were little. The times when In the summer I would come to her house and play in the water. I could stay in there for hours and never get cold. Danny and I would pretend to be princesses in distress. We would pretend to drown while Danny's dad would play and come save us.

I remembered the dag we bought Daisy. That cute little puppy. I remember how we would make limonade stands so we could go to build-a-bear and buy an animal. I bought a white wolf.

I turned off the iced road and walked through a dark ally. My house is in that kind of area of town. The one where all the robbery happen. I was a block away from my house now. Several times I heard a whisper in my head to turn back and go to Danny. To say I loved her and that I was sorry. I didn't.

I heard a dog bark behind me. I heard a woman scream. I even seemed to hear a woman water her plants in the middle of winter. Ever since I enter through that kasteel back at BOES I had gotten better senses. Better strength. I seemed to have better reflexes as well.

I kicked a bier bottle away from my path into the snow. It was late. I had been walking for hours. It was probably 3 a.m. door now.

Suddenly I heard footsteps behind me. I turned around...but no one was there. Ignoring it I flipped my brown hair out of my face and kept walking. I heard it again. Turning I found no one. But I did see tracks in the snow. And they weren't mine. They were a goat's hoof prints.

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Danny:

After we had tied up the boy with my vines and I was back to human form we had a meeting. WE dragged the boy out to the main rode and decided to ask him who he was.

"who are?" Brenna asked with her hand on her hip.

"What's it to you? I probably shouldn't tell you, besides, u did attack me." He seemed strong. But I noticed a hint of fear in his voice.

Marcus laughed. "Us attack you? You're the one who chucked a brand ball at me!"

"Ahhh....true."

I laughed. "I don't think you're dangerous. I'm Danny Brown, Daniella Brown actually." Brenna slapped my hand. I rolled my eyes.

"I'm Marcus Lee, and I see your a brand elemental. I'm earth elemental." Marcus zei while eying me.

He smiled. "You guys are like me. I already knew though. I'm Kyle Shivoni. I'm looking for my Dad."

"We're looking for our friend. She's...." But I stopped Marcus. We couldn't trust this guy. He could be a follower of Laman. If we told him there was now a ice wolf shape shifter...we would be in deep doodoo.

"We are looking for our friend. She is....a..." I had to make an excuse. "She is a water elemental."

Marcus nodded at me. Good excuse was what his face said.

"That's cool. Do u think u could let me go?" He asked with eagerness in his eyes.

I looked at Brenna. "I don't think we can still trust you." she said. "But we will let u travel with us. And we will unbind you." She walked over to him and untied his vine binds.

"WHAT!!!???" I zei in astonishment. I thought we WEREN'T going to trust him!! So u unbind him and let him travel with us?

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Janie:

I screamed at the touch of his ice cold hands. And I don't get cold. They were raspy and weird. the touch of them on my shoulder made me jump and scream. I turned around to see who he was. No one was there. After I turned around again I-


"AAAAAAHHHHH!!!" I screamed. I was face to face with a man with dark red eyes, long black hair, a scrunched up face, a long freaky scar draped across his cheek, and a long pointed nose.

I knew who he was. As he spoke his toung was a Snake's slithered strip of flesh that always scares me. I don't think u can really call it a snake's toung though.

"Who....are...you?" I whispered in a scared voice. His hot breathe smelled of gasoline which was odd.

After a moment of his red eyes glaring into mine he answered. "I'm Laman. u should know that door now."

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Becoming An Adult: How To See The World Differently - John Bucher via FilmCourage.com.
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Why 99% Of Stories Are Meaningless - Alan Watt [Founder of L.A. Writers' Lab] via FilmCourage.com.
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Kate: Unique, Gorgeous
Katy: Amazing, Great
Ivana: Beautiful, Nice
Sasha: Cool, Adorable
Amy: Sweet, Kind
Karis: Friendly, Lovely
Kayley: Smart, Charming
Kim: Determined, Fun
Chloe: Talented, Extraordinary
Kourtney: Dedicated, Loyal
Jess: Generous, Hilarious
Louis:Funny, Childish
Liam: Nice, Kind
Harry: H-O-T
Aarron: Funny, Cool
Joe: Loyal, unique
Shelby: Strongly Determined, Pretty

I KNOW THERE ISN'T A LOT OF NAMES, BUT THE WHOLE POINT OF THIS IS FOR u GUYSS TO GIVE ME YOUR NAMES AND I ADD THEM TO THIS artikel AND THE lijst WILL GET BIGGER AND BIGGER...X
I think that the most important lesson I learned from my mentor, auteur Arline Chase, concerned foreshadowing. Here is the Random House Webster’s definition of foreshadow: to toon of indicate beforehand. In other words, to provide some hint, clue, of indication of something that is going to happen.

Why is foreshadowing important? I learned this lesson the hard way. In many of my first short stories—which I recommend as a medium to anyone testing the waters to see if they want to write fiction—I thought that I was being so crafty with my endings. I wrapped up the crime (or whatever) with...
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posted by Rae-Ash
Have u felt this before?
How I feel so desperate?
Do u know what it’s like?
To be surrounded
By those who hate you
Did u know so long ago?
That it would end that way
Did u see my love for you?
Did u know u killed my dreams?
I trusted you
As any girl does her daddy
But u broke it
You looked into my eyes
And told me those lies
Did u know I would figure it out?
Or do u still see me as that little girl?
You used to be my hero
But not anymore
I always thought that u loved me
But all u do is use me
I was still a babe
When u figured it out
That u could use me for your gain
It only took me 11...
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Emmanuel Ray, winner of Fashions Finest’s Fashion icoon of the jaar award (2011), has been asked to officially open Gibraltar Fashion Week commencing on 19th April 2012.
Emmanuel will meet with fashion designers, press and a selection of important members of the Gibraltarian government.
Reene Weston, designer and organiser had the following to say about why she chose Emmanuel to officially open the event.
“Some people have to be taught to be fashionable…Emmanuel straal, ray was born fashionable. Gibraltar is about real people and real lives. Emmanuel straal, ray mirrors that!”
This exciting new event has...
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 What Kat, A.K.A. Kuro Neko, looks like in her human form.
What Kat, A.K.A. Kuro Neko, looks like in her human form.
Wow, I haven't been on here for a longgg while. Well, anyways, during that long time I was gone, I managed to write another story, this time it's influenced door my weeaboo-ness!

Anyways, this story is about a shinigami (grim reaper) that, for her final reaper test, is to spy on a boy for a jaar to decide whether of not he is to die.

ANYWAYYYYS

Now, to introduce the main main main characters, which is only 2 people!

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Name- Human name: Kat Chi ("chi" means blood in Jap.)
Shinigami name: Kuro Neko (black cat)

Age- Human years: 16
Shinigami years: 123

Death Sickle: A spear

Personality:...
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posted by lama2426
Dialogue: so this movie is based on Zagr and Dagr. Zim and Gaz just had sex on zim's couch, Then dib and gir just had sex on the floor. But Dib is madly in love with Zim. oh almost forgot this is the dag the armada comes but the risisty has something to do to the irkens. Hope u enjoy!
After a long night "doing it" with gir, Dib woke up, right after he woke up he noticed zim naked BELOW Gaz, when he flipped over Gaz he almost barfed, but when he flipped over zim, he got a boner. After that he went back to sleep door gir. An uur later Gaz woke up but ONLY put on her tights, when she walked out...
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posted by para-scence
One day, I was watching the news. The stories presented on there were terrible. Death, crime, death, tragedy, death, hardship, death... It almost literally broke my heart.

"Oh, that's terrible," Mrs. Stueck sighed. I bit my lip. One vraag was still boiling in my mind. I took a deep breath.

"What happened," I squeaked. She stopped and looked at me.

"Excuse me?" she asked, confused. I took a deep breath.

"Averil," I said. She paused for a moment, and sighed sadly.

"She had a brain tumor. She died two years ago."

"Oh," I said. "S-s-sorry," I zei awkwardly. I didn't know what else to say.

"That's...
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 Suspect 3: Mystery Woman (ya random pic none would uploaden except this)
Suspect 3: Mystery Woman (ya random pic none would upload except this)
MEETING DANNY


lila pedaled her way to town. She thought really hard about which Pokemon would be right for her. Well, Cyndaquil evolves into Quilave which evolves into Typhlosion. Imagine what i could do with it's power!. She then thought about having a water type. Well, Totodile is a very populair Pokemon. Lots of people love water types, and if I chose it, I would be a really populair trainer! But then she remembered Chikorita. If I get a Chikorita, then I would be able to explore faraway places. I could climb up it's vine whip and explore many high up places! Plus, it's really cute!
Lilac...
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posted by Cutebutcrazy--
I.    Book Title.
A.    Alice unknown
II.    Do u plan on writing meer books?
A.    Yes. I would like to write a sequel to Alice Unknown.
B.    I wanted Alice Unknown to be longer too.
C.    Also I would like my volgende to be meer dramatic.
D.    I have a 35 chapter book online too.
E.    And some anime.
III.    Any advice to anyone who wants to do something like this?
A.    Follow your dreams.
B.    Don’t...
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posted by twilight_23
This is a pesonal narrative I had to write for my English class. I love feedback, anything u have to say is appreciated. Also, if I made any mistakes (i.e. spelling, grammar, punctuation), please tell me so I can fix them, thanks:D


As I was thinking of experienes that changed my life, my mind automatically went back to my time at St. Anthony. I skimmed throught the years starting with eigth grade, thinking that was where I would find a significant event since it was where I have my most recent memories. To my surprise, I found nothing. I moved on to younger grade levels, still finding little....
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posted by joe-edwardfan
 i was just bored and i thought thats the same way edward feels towards bella so i just uploaded it! hope u like it!
i was just bored and i thought thats the same way edward feels towards bella so i just uploaded it! hope u like it!
hallo guys!
first of all i wanted to thank u all for the support over the 21 chaps.
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second of all some of u asked me if edward and bella got back together? thats a yes too.
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and i wanted to tell u that im gonna start a new story!(yay im so happy! im really getting addicted to fanpop)
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so im gonna give u some names u should pick one!(each name has a different story there not the same)
and im going to write my new story (the name most of u picked)
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so dont forget to tell me this really is important to me
so here are the names:

1.broken heart...
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Darkest light, brightest sight
Midnight sky, Nyx's day
That navy ribbon shall lead the way
Full moon, Selene's sun
It soon shall be the only one...

heres another one

No red,
No yellow,
No blue,
No white,
Nature is gone,
The flowers are dead,
There be no meer light,
Black!
Everywhere around.
Scream!
There is no other sound.
All is lost.

And then another:

Fly,
So high,
HIgh as the sky,
Into seeping blackness.
No light is upon us,
And nothing is ever clear.
Diamond bright,
Beauty in there eyes,
The stars are alive.

AND THEN ANOTHER!!!!

Midnight sky,
Burning ice,
No more, no more, no more,
Say it thrice.
Light will be engulfed in a black haze.
We have gone through the Council's faze.

BLOODY HELL!!!!!!
what yu think it means?
yu think its a prophesy?
idk! HELP!!!! i sometimes write poems in my sleep!! i dont memba riting them but they in my handwriting!! TELL ME WHAT IS HAPPENING!!!!
posted by BellaSwan636
Shaun

Four months. Four agonizing months since I had seen her in the park. Four agonizing months of starting to dial her number, and then stopping myself.

I am listening to the middle aged woman complain about her life. She doesn't even need a therapist.

I will the clock to verplaats faster. My office is dark, modern, and devoid of warmth. Ironically, it fits me.

Thankfully, the session is over. I tell Amamda that she's made progress, volgende week, and it's been a pleasure. Notice the lie. I glance down at the bureau calender, and look up 2:30.

I don't get a chance to see who is scheduled next, because...
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posted by Slinkywaffle
Tides
The sky was a canvas painted with pastels. Just before the sun truly zei goodbye, it hung in the sky. Her eyes sparkled and her hair shinned with the last light of day. Salt water filled her lungs as she took a deep breath. Sand began to cave in on her feet when she tried to verplaats them from where they were. She stared once meer at the now deserted strand and thought, maybe a little longer? But no, she couldn’t. She was too good to break her parent’s curfew, and with the first dag of school nearing, she knew she needed a good nights sleep. She slowly brought herself to her feet and grabbed...
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posted by -SilverFey-
I found my bond early.

Not exceptionally early. In eighth grade. I was thirteen; he was barely fourteen. And a matching mark appeared on our skin, meaning that he was my bond. He is my bond.

Our mark is made up of three dark black stars, charcoal black, pure black. The first one, the biggest star, is on both of our left breastbones, the seconde largest just under it and slightly to the left, and the smallest just a little lower down, directly under the first.

This year, tenth grade, I showed my mark to my teacher, Ms. Satari. She zei since it depicts something that exists only out of this world,...
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posted by liviabutterfly
Chapter [#1]

Number one description:

Okay so I'm this chapter it will be talking about the lives of the characters. So u can get a bit of background before I get to the true part of the story!!!! 😊

Love,

Liviabutterfly
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Olivia jones:

Olivia is a girl that lives with 5 other siblings, she's the youngest. Olivia is 16 and has 5 older brothers, Oliver, Owen, Oscar, Olly, and Omar. They live in a happy home pagina down near the beach, so they Jones family's favoriete thing to do is go on a boardwalk, swimming, laying out in the sun, collecting...
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posted by zanhar1
u hear a lonesome bird call as u wander out of the forest. It is dull and misty. The sky is concrete, u can taste rain in the air.

Fell it on the breeze.

But u don't care, u keep waking. Walking into the opening where the trees grow ever meer sparse. Where the woodland meets the grassland and all that remains are the twigs and trunks the forest had coughed out. Your bate feet slide over the greenest dewy grass. And here u arrive with a sense of peace despite the chilly drizzle that has just begun to fall. A few meer steps have u standing in the center of an earthy ring. u are...
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