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posted by greenstergirl
 if this girl was wearing modern clothing do u think she would suit Janie better than my drawing? (No duh!!)
if this girl was wearing modern clothing do u think she would suit Janie better than my drawing? (No duh!!)
Danny:

I grabbed my roze and green duffel bag off the wooden shelf beside my green bed.

I was inside the earth elemental boom house where all the earth elementals sleep if they are staying in the BOES over night. Marcus, Brenna, and I were supposed to be sleeping but we all weren't. We were running out to go find Janie. We weren't supposed to leave.

After pulling on skinny jeans and a green Nike overhemd, shirt I was ready. I woke up Marcus after I had pulled on my brown converse and jacket.

"wha....what is it Danny?" He asked impatiently while rubbing his eyes. I ruffled his black hair.

"Get up meat head we're going. And be quiet. u don't want Trixi waking up and hearing us." I pointed at the bed door the window where Trixi snored.

He nodded and got up to change in the boy's room. I went to wake up Brenna where I found her already out on the ground with her bag strapped over one shoulder.

"Hurry up slow pokes!!" She whispered. Yea she's an early riser. She wakes up the minuut the sun begins to rise. It's her element. Still the sun wasn't all the way up yet.

I giggled and went back in for Marcus. We slowly climbed down the ladder and saw Brenna and her red curls.

After we jumped over boundary between the real world and the valley Marcus pushed us into a tree.

"Marcus!!" I zei frustrated. "The boom says that pushing us into it isn't a very good wake up call."

"Sorry.." He whispered. "I sensed someone close by, like someone is following us."

"Did the earth tell you?" I zei jokingly.

He gave me an annoyed look. "Yes, it did for your information. Any way u just talked to the tree."

I stared back.

After about 5 seconden Marcus let go of me and Brenna. We began walking again until Marcus pushed us into a green bush.

"What was that for?!" Brenna yelled at him. Marcus put a finger to her lips to shush her.

"I heard him again."

I sighed. "Are u sure it's a 'him'?" I asked.

"Yes. He's hot."

"Ugh....." awkward. Brenna and I stared at each other. Marcus DID NOT get the memo.

"OH!!!!! No no no I didn't mean it that way I meant like he is burning as in hot! Like his aura is like a fire!"

"Okay that explains it. Now will u get off of me?" I cried. I freeked and jumped up.

"Wait we may have to-" But we already knew what he was going to say.

A tall boy with blond hair and a tan muscular body of about 14 chucked a brand ball at Marcus. The boy looked like he was a volleybal player from California. u know that kind.

He jumped up and sent a path of burning flame towards Marcus's bare feet. (you know, earth elemental)

I screamed and sent a twig to et the burn. Marcus winked at me and sent a charging rock at the boy.

Brenna couldn't do anything, there was no sunlight. Frantically, I sent her up to the top, boven of the boom and ran behind the boy.

As I slid behind him I turned and found my self a raging grizzly bear. My animal.

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Janie:

A small tear slid down my cheek. I couldn't believe I did that. I had left my family. I knew being there was the key to my survival. Why wouldn't I want to be with them? Learn their ancient secret?

Honestly, I had a feeling this wasn't going to happen to anyone. Finding out you're half wolf half human. of that u can control one of the elements.

I remembered the times when Danny and I were little. The times when In the summer I would come to her house and play in the water. I could stay in there for hours and never get cold. Danny and I would pretend to be princesses in distress. We would pretend to drown while Danny's dad would play and come save us.

I remembered the dag we bought Daisy. That cute little puppy. I remember how we would make limonade stands so we could go to build-a-bear and buy an animal. I bought a white wolf.

I turned off the iced road and walked through a dark ally. My house is in that kind of area of town. The one where all the robbery happen. I was a block away from my house now. Several times I heard a whisper in my head to turn back and go to Danny. To say I loved her and that I was sorry. I didn't.

I heard a dog bark behind me. I heard a woman scream. I even seemed to hear a woman water her plants in the middle of winter. Ever since I enter through that kasteel back at BOES I had gotten better senses. Better strength. I seemed to have better reflexes as well.

I kicked a bier bottle away from my path into the snow. It was late. I had been walking for hours. It was probably 3 a.m. door now.

Suddenly I heard footsteps behind me. I turned around...but no one was there. Ignoring it I flipped my brown hair out of my face and kept walking. I heard it again. Turning I found no one. But I did see tracks in the snow. And they weren't mine. They were a goat's hoof prints.

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Danny:

After we had tied up the boy with my vines and I was back to human form we had a meeting. WE dragged the boy out to the main rode and decided to ask him who he was.

"who are?" Brenna asked with her hand on her hip.

"What's it to you? I probably shouldn't tell you, besides, u did attack me." He seemed strong. But I noticed a hint of fear in his voice.

Marcus laughed. "Us attack you? You're the one who chucked a brand ball at me!"

"Ahhh....true."

I laughed. "I don't think you're dangerous. I'm Danny Brown, Daniella Brown actually." Brenna slapped my hand. I rolled my eyes.

"I'm Marcus Lee, and I see your a brand elemental. I'm earth elemental." Marcus zei while eying me.

He smiled. "You guys are like me. I already knew though. I'm Kyle Shivoni. I'm looking for my Dad."

"We're looking for our friend. She's...." But I stopped Marcus. We couldn't trust this guy. He could be a follower of Laman. If we told him there was now a ice wolf shape shifter...we would be in deep doodoo.

"We are looking for our friend. She is....a..." I had to make an excuse. "She is a water elemental."

Marcus nodded at me. Good excuse was what his face said.

"That's cool. Do u think u could let me go?" He asked with eagerness in his eyes.

I looked at Brenna. "I don't think we can still trust you." she said. "But we will let u travel with us. And we will unbind you." She walked over to him and untied his vine binds.

"WHAT!!!???" I zei in astonishment. I thought we WEREN'T going to trust him!! So u unbind him and let him travel with us?

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Janie:

I screamed at the touch of his ice cold hands. And I don't get cold. They were raspy and weird. the touch of them on my shoulder made me jump and scream. I turned around to see who he was. No one was there. After I turned around again I-


"AAAAAAHHHHH!!!" I screamed. I was face to face with a man with dark red eyes, long black hair, a scrunched up face, a long freaky scar draped across his cheek, and a long pointed nose.

I knew who he was. As he spoke his toung was a Snake's slithered strip of flesh that always scares me. I don't think u can really call it a snake's toung though.

"Who....are...you?" I whispered in a scared voice. His hot breathe smelled of gasoline which was odd.

After a moment of his red eyes glaring into mine he answered. "I'm Laman. u should know that door now."

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posted by malmcd
Millions of Miles Apart

From the moment your born somewhere out there u have a true love. At less that’s what they say? They say there’s one person who has the same hart-, hart strings as u and they complete you. And there’s nothing that can keep u apart from one another...But what if my one true love isn’t here? I mean what if I never find him of her if that’s the case which I hope it’s not. I don’t know what to say but I’m different from the rest...What if there’s no one out there for me?
My name is Sunflower I was born on the first dag of spring, March 20, 1998. And was born...
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Water
My only escape
Where for once my arms that are too pale and scrawny bend perfectly
Where I feel perfect
This is where my spirit will stay
When my body turns grey and dies away

Water
Where my legs that are too chubby of fat kick so strong
I feel perfect
This is the place my spirit will stay
When my body turns grey and dies away

Water
Where pain only makes me only go faster
Better
Prettier
Perfectly

Water
Where my face that's not pretty in never seen
Hidden in waves that make me feel free
This is the place my spirit will stay
When my body turns grey and dies away

Water
When I used to stab myself with needles
And let the blood bleed out
Suddenly is the last thing on my mind
And when I do spill blood
It's only on the days my mom says I can't go
To the water
Where my spirit will stay
When my body grows old and dies away
posted by alliXcobber
Chapter Two
Jessica lounged on top, boven of the Walgreen’s cash register counter.
    “So, do u even know what your’e going to do about your dad thing?”
    “Obviously, I’m doing just fine. I can live door myself until I turn 18,” Samantha told her, agitated that she was asking that stupid vraag again
    “You do know thats, like, illegal right?” Jessica countered in her annoying teenage girl accent.
    “Since when do people here care what’s legal of not?”
Jessica merely shrugged in response, they...
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posted by thetscfan121
"We're going camping!" Solimar zei to her friends. Everybody cheered and were very excited...well, everyone, except Pamela and Sergio. "We're leaving in two days to MonteNegro, and we're staying there for at least a week. Any questions?" Pamela raised her hand. "Are we living together for a whole week?" "Yes, Pamela, we are. My parents are going to borrow us a trailer, so whoever doesn't like to sleep in a tent can go sleep there. Anyone else?" No one else raised their hand. "Good. See ya'll on Sunday!" Solimar got up from the BK tafel, tabel and left., like everyone else except Edgardo, who had...
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posted by Insight357
Revealed when called upon
Permitting the dagger to
Deliver steely truths
Who does it hurt the most,
The victim of the killer?
Sacrificed knowledge comes with damnation
You’ll be in hell before knowing this
Blessed door curiosity
Cursed with wicked hate

Speaking words shaper than glass
Not cushions to lay upon
Take the cruelty and use it for your benefit
Or shun the blinded wisdom
Refuse to accept any of the words
Too much experience for fifteen
Too much madness from simply looking
Deny this as u always have
Repetition will be my death
In a vain attempt
Prayer for an ear
A privilege of being a friend
Staying...
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posted by LovingLucy
I sit and wonder…
Whatever happened to the days?
Watching BSG and Lost with Charles,
Playing ster Wars with him,
And Shortys?
Whatever happened to the days?
Of Josh helping me through the grief of my father’s death.
Whatever happened to the days?
Of chicken and egg salade sandwiches at the SUB and take-out Chinese for dinner?
Whatever happened to the days?
Of GIRLS NIGHT OUT!
Whatever happened to the days?
Of spring at KU?
Whatever happened to the days?
Of KU’s waterfall and walks at midnight…
Whatever happened to the days?
Of all my vrienden at KU, and what great vrienden they were.
Whatever happened to the days?
posted by noahnstar1616
I felt like I was under a hypnotic spell. I couldn't control anything. I stopped when the water got a little past my waist. I then heard myself start to chant. I didn't know what I was saying, but like I zei before I had no will power. As I was chanting, the waters started to fizz. The meer I chanted, the meer the waters fizzed. Then a strong head wind came. Thunder clouds formed in the sky out of nowhere. I stopped chanting and the water settled down.

As it began to rain, I walked back towards the strand shore. When I stepped onto the beach, I instantly turned back to normal. I ran back home...
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posted by WildCherryWolf
Newborn

I've been with the Cullens for about a week. It's not so we'd to adapt to a vegan lifestyle. In fact, I rather enjoy it.

My name is Elle. I don't exactly recall my last name. It's Cullen now. A week ago, I was mauled door a wolf, and left to die. Luckily, the Cullens found me.

It was a warmish afternoon. The Cullens and Bella were in the forest, playing a casual game of baseball. When Emmett was running to catch the ball, he came across me, curled into my tight little ball. "CARLISLE!!" he bellowed as I remember. The rest came running. I was writhing, the pain from the attack hurt me so...
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posted by flabaloobalah
I suddenly feel extremely sad and miserable. I realize that my Coca-Cola is gushing on the floor. I quickly clean up the bubbly mess.
The phone beside me rings. "Hello?" I say.
"This is-" a man starts, but I immediately hang up because I know it's some weirdo asking for money of whatever.
Cautiously I turn the TV back on, desperately hoping that something sane appears on the screen. For extra measures I change to a random channel.
It turns out I stand corrected, because I have the best of timing to turn on the TV just when Wyatt Starmount gets a sword in his neck. I shriek and try to shield myself...
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posted by para-scence
Grandma felt extremely guilty. She thought it was all her fault; she'd tried to set me up with Foster in the first place. I tried to convince her it was my own choice; my own mistake, but she still blamed herself.

But I had other things to worry about.

One dag at school, Echo wasn't there. I wouldn't have been so worried, if people weren't freaking out about it. I kept hearing Echo's name zei in the hallways, along with "did u hear?" The teachers in some classes even told kids to stop talking about it; it was none of their business. But it was mine. She was my best friend, and I didn't even...
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posted by para-scence
"You likehim?!" Echo said, somewhat surprised and disgusted. "Why?!"

"I don't know..." I whimpered. I hung my head. This was all so confusing. Echo took a bite of her sandwich, and watched me for a while. She swallowed.

"Well, iff u do... That's fine. I mean, just because I think he's a jerk doesn't mean..." she didn't finish. That was my problem as well. He did seem kind of a jerk. I still didn't understand why I like him. I put my hands to my face and groaned. Echo chuckled. "Love sucks..." I nodded.

***

I was walking home pagina from school, a couple weeks later, when Foster showed up door my side...
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posted by para-scence
"Irina?" he shouted over the blaring music. I was stunned into silence. "What're u doing here?!" he smiled. I opened my mouth to speak, but then Mateo butted in.

"Dude! What're y-- oh. Hi, Irina," he zei unenthusiastically. I waved. Blake looked back at me, still waiting for an answer. I couldn't give him one; what was I going to say? He looked at the drinks spilled all over me.

"Oh, I'm sorry! Did I spill your drinks? Want me to buy u some meer coke? of was it Pepsi?" he offered. Coke? That was better than what I was coming up with.

"Uh, no! It's fine!" I shouted loud enough for him to hear....
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posted by GabbyRaptor
There I am... Gabby Raptor.... " I miss him" I say to myself standing on a montain... alone. Then I hear a voice..." Mike...?" I say.... Nothing there... Mike was an old family friend... He was like a father to me.... The father that left me when I was five... My mother she went after him and eventuly died... I found that out 3 years later after the acedent.... Mike was a good friend.... All I have left of him is his horse "Boxer". It was my fault the killer got to Mike... It always is my fault.... I'm nothing but trouble... But what sadens me meer is that I'm rejected...My 3 brothers and my...
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posted by sawfan13
The happy cherished life of Amanda and Karietta Love were to be shortened. Amanda was only eleven, when she found out that she had to play the role of "Mother Figure". Mandy and Karrie's mother had died of a rare disease that was very uncommon in this dag of age. It wasn't long before that their grandparents from both sides had died and a horrible tragedy had happened to most of their aunts, uncles, and cousins. Their father called it,"The Love Family Curse." Their father was with them, until Mandy turned eighteen and Karrie turned five. No one knows whether he died of disappeared, but he was...
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posted by Insight357
    It was around one when I left the house. I couldn’t walk far, for it was dark. I hailed a cab. I told the cabbie to drive to a cathedral, near a small suburb, just outside New York City.
    I didn’t dare close my eyes during the taxi ride. I did not need any afbeeldingen to play behind my eyelids. The dream had been all too real.
    After a ride down streets I could not name, we arrived at a tall, brick cathedral. I paid the cabbie, and got out of the car. He drove away. I walked up a few steps to the wooden door. I pulled on the...
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posted by r260897
“well I got the notice we will have no class today.. everyone is busy in preparation of the function. They should declare it as a holiday.. oh yeah…. Hello are u listening… hallo wake up… its irritating” my friend was saying this to me of it should be zei that this was speech of substitute class leader to leader. “ yp.. I got that no class today and everyone is…” I zei this to her to toon that I was attentive to what she was saying but what I got was harsh dialog “ shut up… I am not asking to repeat my words… I am the best leader… I am the best there is none like me…....
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posted by Insight357
    Wyatt watched as the faerie girl smacked Xavier across the face. He chuckled inwardly, wondering what the poor bastard had zei to her. He became at unease when he saw Elizabeth try to turn around to run. Wyatt was ready to follow her when Lucifer pulled her over.
    Wyatt stopped in his tracks when Elizabeth followed Lucifer to the Privacy Room. It was actually a storage room, but it wasn’t used for storage. He watched as they went in. Lucifer shut the door behind them.
    Wyatt watched as the fight between the faerie, and...
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posted by Insight357
    Elizabeth woke-up, and looked around the room. She sat up, and pushed her hair back groggily. She looked over beside her-Wyatt was missing. She looked all around the room, and still couldn’t find him. Then, she heard voices on the other side of the door.
    The door opened, and Wyatt walked in, with Xavier behind him.
    “Oh, did I wake you?” asked Wyatt. Xavier stood behind him, staring at her.
    “No, I just got up a minuut ago,” zei Elizabeth.
    “Okay, good. Well, we need...
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posted by sawfan13
Howl helped me navigate to my campsite. We didn't see a single soul there. I was relieved that they were gone, since I didn't want to swoop down there with Howl, and start gawking at him all the time. I got out a first aid kit, and untied the cloth from my overhemd, shirt from his body. Good thing the wild animal didn't slash him that deeply. All I really need to put on Howl for him to heal is Poroxcide, Neosporin, and a gauze bandage to inpakken, wrap around his upper waist around the upper ab area. I doctored him and ordered him to rest on my sleeping bag/bed. I'm pretty sure he heals pretty quickly for a man...
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posted by magicgirl123
Alex paced her room, bored. It was just another summer Thursday in the city of Verona, Italy. Her mom was in her home pagina office, reviewing a book for publishing, and Alex's little brother Sam was at the park with his friends. Alex would do the same, but she didn't have many friends, and her best friend was in Paris for the summer. Alex stopped pacing, stomped her foot and quietly cursed her bordom in Italian. Then she slipped on her ballet flats, appartementen and bonded out into the hall.

"Mom! I'm going to check the mail! Be right back!" She shouted in American English into the apartment and grabbed the keys....
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