Creative Outlet Here's a random poem i wrote just tell me if u like it ok?

jacob4ever57 posted on Feb 21, 2009 at 08:36PM
Ok i'm kinda new to writing poetry so this might not be the best...


Dreams

A dream is something that can't be seen
A dream is something that may not have meaning
But a dream is magic all the same
No matter how horrible or tame

A dream is enchanting to all
A dream can be about anything at all
Love, play, fights, or fears
A dream is something to keep close and near

So keep your dreams close to your heart
And don't let anyone tear them apart.


hehe yea kinda new just tell me whatcha think.

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een jaar geleden raknaff said…
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I thought it was really cute! I love it!
een jaar geleden Ovybo said…
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I loved it! I don't think you should rhyme all with all in the 2nd paragragh though. Maybe you could put "A dream can stand tall" if you wan't to listen to me.
een jaar geleden RaineChild said…
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Cool. I'm new to the poetry thing too, so your not alone.
But for the beginners start that was great.
een jaar geleden sweet_n_silly said…
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oooo, that was fantabulous! great job!
een jaar geleden _Blackhearts_xx said…
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I Love It <3
een jaar geleden whitelion said…
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great
een jaar geleden Myf_1992 said…
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Aww that was sweet <3
een jaar geleden KristinaDawn said…
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i thought it was really good :D
can you reply to my songs?
een jaar geleden 876tyuh said…
Good job!