IS MY PEACE AND UNITY GOOD ENOUGH TO BE POPULAR?

I definitely see potential for a good story here. But you're going to have to work on your grammar. Also, there are a few typos here and there, so I'm guessing this is your first draft. Also, you're moving a little too fast. Domestic violence is a pretty angsty subject, and if u do it right, u can take this story pretty far. That is, if u have it in you.