It was a cold icey november night when rachels family was coming back from there so called famliy trip to the mountains. That is when it happened rachels life was taken away from her right before her eyes. One seconde she was laughing and having a good time with her mom, dad, and little brother chance and the volgende secound there all screaming sliding down the road on pure ice. The only thing rachel could get across her mind was protect her family.
She screamed "GET DOWN" but no one was listening
there was one spleet, split secound to register what was happening before her car ran into the ditch.
Rachel felt a gut renching pain in her arm and screamed out
"HElP ME"
When the car finally stoped she lay there for one spleet, split secound before she tried calling out for her family
"MOM DAD CHANCE u guys ok"
the only thing she heard was a weak reply from her mother
"rachel"
rachel felt her stomach dropp because her mom sounded terribly hurt.
"MOM its me are u ok"
"No" zei rachels mom
"im coming to get you"
With one big push rachel opened her door and staggred out to help her mother.
She opened the door and almost cryed out her mother fell out bleeding and said
"rachel help the others"
rachel fell to her knees and pulled her mother up she had closed her eyes and wasnt anwsering rachel
"mom"
"MOM!!!! rachel screamed
She wasn't anwsering and rachel started panicing because she wasnt breathing.
"Mommy wake up please dont leave me MOM!!!!" rachel screamed. rachel felt a helpless panic and she just bent over her crying and crying she couldnt stop. She knew that there was no way her dad and chance could have lived deep down. She felt an urge to go to them. But couldnt verplaats she was so scared and numb. Rachel felt resonsuble some how for this car crash and she didnt know why. That was when she heard the sirens and looked up and there were police cars coming down the street. rachel lay back over her mothers body defeated and refused to belive anything.
please commentaar on the storie and tell me what u think. This is just the first chapter and will be meer if your interested. thankyou!!!!!
She screamed "GET DOWN" but no one was listening
there was one spleet, split secound to register what was happening before her car ran into the ditch.
Rachel felt a gut renching pain in her arm and screamed out
"HElP ME"
When the car finally stoped she lay there for one spleet, split secound before she tried calling out for her family
"MOM DAD CHANCE u guys ok"
the only thing she heard was a weak reply from her mother
"rachel"
rachel felt her stomach dropp because her mom sounded terribly hurt.
"MOM its me are u ok"
"No" zei rachels mom
"im coming to get you"
With one big push rachel opened her door and staggred out to help her mother.
She opened the door and almost cryed out her mother fell out bleeding and said
"rachel help the others"
rachel fell to her knees and pulled her mother up she had closed her eyes and wasnt anwsering rachel
"mom"
"MOM!!!! rachel screamed
She wasn't anwsering and rachel started panicing because she wasnt breathing.
"Mommy wake up please dont leave me MOM!!!!" rachel screamed. rachel felt a helpless panic and she just bent over her crying and crying she couldnt stop. She knew that there was no way her dad and chance could have lived deep down. She felt an urge to go to them. But couldnt verplaats she was so scared and numb. Rachel felt resonsuble some how for this car crash and she didnt know why. That was when she heard the sirens and looked up and there were police cars coming down the street. rachel lay back over her mothers body defeated and refused to belive anything.
please commentaar on the storie and tell me what u think. This is just the first chapter and will be meer if your interested. thankyou!!!!!
It was a cold icey november night when rachels family was coming back from there so called famliy trip to the mountains. That is when it happened rachels life was taken away from her right before her eyes. One seconde she was laughing and having a good time with her mom, dad, and little brother chance and the volgende secound there all screaming sliding down the road on pure ice. The only thing rachel could get across her mind was protect her family.
She screamed "GET DOWN" but no one was listening
there was one spleet, split secound to register what was happening before her car ran into the ditch.
Rachel felt a gut renching pain in her arm and screamed out
"HElP ME"
When the car finally stoped she lay there for one spleet, split secound before she tried calling out for her family
"MOM DAD CHANCE u guys ok"
the only thing she heard was a weak reply from her mother
"rachel"
rachel felt her stomach dropp because her mom sounded terribly hurt.
"MOM its me are u ok"
"No" zei rachels mom
"im coming to get you"
With one big push rachel opened her door and staggred out to help her mother.
She opened the door and almost cryed out her mother fell out bleeding and said
"rachel help the others"
rachel fell to her knees and pulled her mother up she had closed her eyes and wasnt anwsering rachel
"mom"
"MOM!!!! rachel screamed
She wasn't anwsering and rachel started panicing because she wasnt breathing.
"Mommy wake up please dont leave me MOM!!!!" rachel screamed. rachel felt a helpless panic and she just bent over her crying and crying she couldnt stop. She knew that there was no way her dad and chance could have lived deep down. She felt an urge to go to them. But couldnt verplaats she was so scared and numb. Rachel felt resonsuble some how for this car crash and she didnt know why. That was when she heard the sirens and looked up and there were police cars coming down the street. rachel lay back over her mothers body defeated and refused to belive anything.
please commentaar on the storie and tell me what u think. This is just the first chapter and will be meer if your interested. thankyou!!!!!
She screamed "GET DOWN" but no one was listening
there was one spleet, split secound to register what was happening before her car ran into the ditch.
Rachel felt a gut renching pain in her arm and screamed out
"HElP ME"
When the car finally stoped she lay there for one spleet, split secound before she tried calling out for her family
"MOM DAD CHANCE u guys ok"
the only thing she heard was a weak reply from her mother
"rachel"
rachel felt her stomach dropp because her mom sounded terribly hurt.
"MOM its me are u ok"
"No" zei rachels mom
"im coming to get you"
With one big push rachel opened her door and staggred out to help her mother.
She opened the door and almost cryed out her mother fell out bleeding and said
"rachel help the others"
rachel fell to her knees and pulled her mother up she had closed her eyes and wasnt anwsering rachel
"mom"
"MOM!!!! rachel screamed
She wasn't anwsering and rachel started panicing because she wasnt breathing.
"Mommy wake up please dont leave me MOM!!!!" rachel screamed. rachel felt a helpless panic and she just bent over her crying and crying she couldnt stop. She knew that there was no way her dad and chance could have lived deep down. She felt an urge to go to them. But couldnt verplaats she was so scared and numb. Rachel felt resonsuble some how for this car crash and she didnt know why. That was when she heard the sirens and looked up and there were police cars coming down the street. rachel lay back over her mothers body defeated and refused to belive anything.
please commentaar on the storie and tell me what u think. This is just the first chapter and will be meer if your interested. thankyou!!!!!