My first Niall Horan poem, "Love Divided" - Tell me what u think? :)

Going somewhere,
Ending nowhere,
Where am I to go?
Wanting solitude,
Finding opposite,
Am I to walk alone?
You, there,
Across the field,
Of fantasy and fame.
Where did u come from?
How do I get to you,
Without crossing the flame?
u appeared out of nowhere,
A ster suddenly born,
And I am drawn to your light.
But u can't see mine,
Its too dim to shine,
Never seen in the night.
u go on in life,
With it displayed to the world,
And mine displayed elsewhere.
u go on without knowing,
That I am here, waiting for you,
That I am always there.
And wait I do,
For u to see,
The imaginary girl who is always door your side.
The one with the smile,
The one with the voice,
That you'll never seem to recognize.
So u go on,
dag after day,
With your lively life.
While I am stuck here,
Never near,
The one who seems to be my light.
Yes, that's right, u are my light,
And shine bright, u do.
Edges illuminated,
Flames engulfed,
For the one u never knew.
When I am down,
And I listen to your soft melodic words,
Of carefully chosen wisdom.
I know that someday,
Deep in my heart,
My dag will surely come.
u bring me to my senses,
But u drive me insane,
You, the boy who's on the edge.
But I am on the verge,
And u bring me back from it,
Saving me from darkness.
u make me feel free,
Like I am surely alive,
Like u love me with a burning passion.
But I am still a nobody,
Blending with the sea,
And I should just push past it.
But something about you,
Something I've never seen before,
Draws me to you.
And I smile in delight,
But frown in fright,
From how much I've fallen for you.
Though, why am I still nowhere?
Why am I alone?
Without you, I am lost.
Without you, I am unknown.


Sorry its so long xD Tell me what u think, please ^.^