Is this good for a tweve jaar old? Its a song called " i miss you" written door a twelve jaar old.

The pain is too deep to handle. your all i wish for when i blow that candle. even in my sleep you're all i think of. i'll always wonder if u do the same, while u look at the stars up above.every tear that falls from my eyes represents how much i miss you. i picked u out of all the guys. now will u do the same for me? I've tried so hard not to cry but it hurts so much i'd rather die. i think of u dag and night. if someone interferes i put up a fight. I miss you. Do u miss me too? is it possible to hurt so much? i miss u and your gentle touch. i wish that u were here with me; holading hands on a branch of a tree. i wish that u could pull me close. i think i took and overdose.... of you. i cant stand it. help me up. ill start a riot. be my love. i'll cry and cry till u reach me... and wait for u to kiss me.
 Monicaluv posted een jaar geleden
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MattxAliceNine said:
for a 12 jaar old really good but there holding is misspelled
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Vixie79 said:
That is really good. I imagine door the time she is 17 of so she'll be mind blowing with her own style of course. This writing isn't particularly my favorite, but it's still good writing wise.
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irena83 said:
Cute! ;)
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skillet_luvr said:
Very good for a twelve jaar old. :)
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