Dose anyone have a tile sugestion and is this any good?

Have u ever been hurt door the one u love
Have u ever wanteed to change
Who u were, who u are, who u will be
Feeling as though your life is all laid out
Wondering why u have the life u have
u have it for a reason
Figure it out!

Have youo ever been hurt door the one one u love
Have u ever felt so betrayed
That u wanted to die
Don't give up
Things will change...for the best

Have yoou ever tired to change the world
With just a song
Try to change a hart-, hart just door saying "hello"

Have u ever though u had true love
Then found it in a total stranger
Have u ever had so much hate
Then saved a soul that was dying alone

All of us have in one way of another
Live life your way
The futures always changing








 MattxAliceNine posted een jaar geleden
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BittenGirl said:
wooow!that is amazing!you should write meer poems because u are really good!
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irena83 said:
It's a nice poem, emotional, partly dark but filled with a hope.
Suggestions for the tittle could be:
- Eternal struggle
- Pieces of living hope
- Wondering mind
;)
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