sorry my last one suckd major...hope this can make up for it!~!
2 guards stood at the door,both soul reapers.the first wore dark colors except a layer of blue in her hair. the other had blue hair and sun-set eyes.both had their zanpaku-to at their sides.they were as sereious as they were alert.
"unaci...on guard someone approches..." the one with the dark side zei standing as still as a statue.they both turnd to the door as sora entered.she twirled a bunch of keys slung with her finger.
"miss atasunta what're you--"
sora silenced her.
"ican see the marks on her...and i know before she was put i this cell she was healed...have u been abuseing her?" sora asked coldly.
the 2 guards looked crushed.
"n-no ma'am.the only person who's been in here without us is captain tosen of squad 9" the blued hair girl zei she had a perfect country accent.
sora unlocked the cell and took me door the hand.
"zukisaru u look like you've been whips with the metal end of a belt...what happend to--"
"i was...kaname tosen found one and started sencelessly abuseing me.each and every single dag sora!! IT HURT SORA!!!" i cried."he would pick me up door my head and shake me until i lost consisnis sora!!!"
sora crouched and looked really sereious.
"zukisaru listen to me....i promise if he so much as spits withing 10 miles of u ill do what he did to u X a million ok" sora said.
i drew in a deep breath and half crying i nodded.
we walked home pagina and even though regulus was there all night i couldnt sleep.but knowing i was finally home pagina away from danger knowing sora was around i felt better...much much better....
hope this was better then the last!!if not please be honest and just tell me to redo it.
2 guards stood at the door,both soul reapers.the first wore dark colors except a layer of blue in her hair. the other had blue hair and sun-set eyes.both had their zanpaku-to at their sides.they were as sereious as they were alert.
"unaci...on guard someone approches..." the one with the dark side zei standing as still as a statue.they both turnd to the door as sora entered.she twirled a bunch of keys slung with her finger.
"miss atasunta what're you--"
sora silenced her.
"ican see the marks on her...and i know before she was put i this cell she was healed...have u been abuseing her?" sora asked coldly.
the 2 guards looked crushed.
"n-no ma'am.the only person who's been in here without us is captain tosen of squad 9" the blued hair girl zei she had a perfect country accent.
sora unlocked the cell and took me door the hand.
"zukisaru u look like you've been whips with the metal end of a belt...what happend to--"
"i was...kaname tosen found one and started sencelessly abuseing me.each and every single dag sora!! IT HURT SORA!!!" i cried."he would pick me up door my head and shake me until i lost consisnis sora!!!"
sora crouched and looked really sereious.
"zukisaru listen to me....i promise if he so much as spits withing 10 miles of u ill do what he did to u X a million ok" sora said.
i drew in a deep breath and half crying i nodded.
we walked home pagina and even though regulus was there all night i couldnt sleep.but knowing i was finally home pagina away from danger knowing sora was around i felt better...much much better....
hope this was better then the last!!if not please be honest and just tell me to redo it.