This is only a rough draft. We are going to make any changes of fixes in the comments.
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Jenna is walking in the park with her best friend, Vironica. A black busje, van halted in front of them and a man aggressively grabs Jenna. She was shoved in the back of the busje, van and Vironica threatens, "If u don't my best friend back -"
The man drove off, interrupting her. She runs to Nary's house. When Nary opens the door, Vironica told her everything that happened and broke down crying. Nary was in shocked. She knew Jenna as long as she can remember. They weren't the closest of friends, but they were in a okay friendship.
Nary asked, "Did u see his face?"
"No! He wore a mask that covered half! It was so hard to tell."
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I am going to leave it there and see what u guys think before I go on.
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Jenna is walking in the park with her best friend, Vironica. A black busje, van halted in front of them and a man aggressively grabs Jenna. She was shoved in the back of the busje, van and Vironica threatens, "If u don't my best friend back -"
The man drove off, interrupting her. She runs to Nary's house. When Nary opens the door, Vironica told her everything that happened and broke down crying. Nary was in shocked. She knew Jenna as long as she can remember. They weren't the closest of friends, but they were in a okay friendship.
Nary asked, "Did u see his face?"
"No! He wore a mask that covered half! It was so hard to tell."
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I am going to leave it there and see what u guys think before I go on.