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PART 20: STELLA'S POV

Online Diary: User:StellBell 6/13/11
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Dear Diary,
Everything has been so crazy lately! It feels like i'm trapped in a nightmare, but no matter how loud I scream of how hard I pinch myself...I won't wake up. I just can't believe it! He zei he loved me, and then I see a picture of him kissing Piper! Will is such a bastard! When I confronted him about it, he tried to lie and say it was a fake picture! Hello?! I am not stupid! It's...

its in early ages..
a young girl stand s bythesea..
loks into the watr..
with eyes filled of heartbounded and felt tears..
of pure love..
a love she aren`t bale to have..
or Is she??
the younggirl dont realy know..
she grabs her necklase- a beautifull and REAR
as a mermaid si spotted of humans golden mermaidtailfigurine with a ruby trianglled in shape ta the end-- sthraght of her..
the poor and sad young girl looks at it a lats time
leting the wind cary her wisper: my hesitaes are worthless and my hart-, hart are achin SO much.. al because out of THIS and its SOCALLED good curse..
but was it to me? no! NOHOHO?!...

hallo guys! Could u help me out door telling your vrienden about this spot? Please & Thank you!

PART 21: STELLA'S POV

"No way! u guys actually kissed!?" Claire nearly shouted as we walked down to the bus stop.
"Yep." I answered simply. I smiled when I could see David waving from a distance. "Ohmygosh! What does this mean? Are u guys like a couple?!"
She skipped beside me, excited, unable to walk like a normal human being.Well...HALF human being. "Claire, calm down! I..i don't really know yet. It all just happened so fast." We hushed up once we reached the stop. "Hi." I zei shyly. He kissed...

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PART 11: DAVID'S POV

I waved as Macy drove away, quicker than she should. Then I went to take a douche and clear my head. Idly, I wondered about Stella and Claire. How could it be possible for them to be mermaids? Just thinking it made me feel crazy. I was half expecting to wake up from this whole nightmare...or maybe I didn't want to. In truth, I was now in on there secret. Will, was not. So did that mean I had a better chance with Stella? Probably not. I sighed when the hot water ran out and...

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PART 15: STELLA'S POV

"Stella hurry up! Were going to be late!"
Caire yelled at me. "I'm coming!" I crimped the last piece of my hair, grabbed my bag and ran out the door, nearly into Claire. She sighed. "Let's go!" We ran down to the bus stop as fast as we could. David was already there. "Late, much?" He asked, smiling when we joined him. "Hey." I huffed. "Woke up late." Claire explined. We were out of breath. He laughed. "Thought so." Before I could defend myself...

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PART 13: STELLA'S POV

I lay awake on my bed, unmoving. The tears had stopped, but left mascara running down my face. What if my mom didn't toon up before teh deadline? Would I accept the fact that she was dead? Could I? No. She has to be out there somewhere! I had to believe that! Thinking about my mom left a lump in my throat and an uneasy feeling in my stomache. Some days, it was unbearable without her. This was one of those days. I sent a quick txt message to Claire and told her that I was sick and to tell the others I wouldn't be at school. I knew what I was going...

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PART 21: STELLA'S POV

"So.." David zei as we walked hand-in-hand along the beach. "So..what?" I asked, smiling as he kissed me on top, boven if the head. "I was thinking. Prom's coming up and it's not really my style, but I know it's yours. Would u go with me?" I stopped walking and turned to face him. I'd completely forgotten about prom! "Really?" I zei lamely. He laughed. "It couldn't hurt." I thought about it for a second...

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PART 12: STELLA'S POV

My alarm clock buzzed loudly in my ear. I lazily grabbed it and through it across the room. It beeped a few meer times and then stopped. Welp, I was sure I would pay for that later. I took my time getting dressed. I wore a black t-shirt with a converstaion heart(<3)symbol printed on the front. Then I put on my favoriete capris and blue flip flops. I pulled my hair into a messy bun with a bump and headband. Outfit? Check. Makeup? Check. I grabbed my new touch screen camera and through it in my bag. I needed new...

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PART 14: STELLA'S POV.

I stood silently on the strand and let the waves wash over my feet. Then I ran and duif into the water. It was warmer than usual today. I still couldn't believe that Claire had to stay home pagina to watch her brothers. She never missed our little swims. The water felt almost lonely without her. I decided after an uur that it was time to get out. I pulled myself onto the strand and began searching for my towel. Suddenly I noticed something was blocking my sun. A shadow. I gasped and looked up. David threw the towel at...

sumah are looking at her wathc and seems like a blend of a big? and a scare as out of *** one as sherlah is just a liiiil late as usual!
sumah grinshes: oh ! that sherlah!! allways late so i could get GRAY o it!!

sumah looks at her and sherlahs other best - best friend as they are 3: trisha..!
and right now traisha is hahvin her BOYs net out in full width AND legnht
in THAT superMAYOUR flirt with the new boy in their raegular as a persons baouls
are whne its .. u know.

and she say like: hiii u georugeosuen !!
can i get y`ah a stoll delieisoues?? u seem to need it as yore about to fell forme??...

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PART 23: STELLA'S POV

"Oh my god, look at Stella Johnson!"
"Is it real?"
"She's a FISH!"
My tail flopped around helplessly under my punch-stained dress. "See, I told u all she was a freak!" Piper announced, sounded victorious.
"What did u do!?" David demanded as he rushed in on the scene. "STELLA!" Claire screamed and ran up to me. She slid around in the stempel, punch and finally fell right beside me. "OH NO!" She shrieked as her legs shimmered for a seconde and were replaced door her tail.
"Claire Winters is one too!"
"That's why she quit the swim team!"...

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PART 19: CLAIRE'S POV

As I walked down the hallway everyone stared. It seemed endless. No one could quite grasp the fact that i'd come out of the accident ok. We'd spread around a story that the truck went over me, and i'd just suffered from post trematic stress, but still they stared. "Hey, Claire." Someone said, coming up to my right side. I looked over to see a pretty blonde haired girl. "Oh, umm. hallo Tasmin." I stuttered out. "So, did u hear about Piper Goodfair?" She asked. I stiffened at the familiar name. Piper was...

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PART 18: STELLA'S POV

My eyes flashed to the pretend nurse standing closely beside me. Now? Really? I thought to myself. "I need to speak to Miss Winters alone if that's ok." She announced in an alluring voice. Nearly everyone in the room stared. David was the first one to snap back to reality. "Right. Come on guys." I watched them trail out the door, looking over their shoulders as they went. Before anyone could make me leave I shut the door and went to sit at the end of Claire's bed. She looked weary, and uncertain. "I suppose your wondering...

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PART 17: CLAIRE'S POV

So this is what dying feels like? I thought to myself. Well it's sure not peaceful like in the books. I was in an incredible amount of pain, but it was better now. The nurse had probably gegeven me some medicine of something. I felt so helpless, just lying there, unable to move. I could barely breathe, so I figured I probably had a few broken ribs. I tried to force my eyes open, but they were shut like glue. I couldn't verplaats any part of my body, due to the fact that I couldn't feel any part of my body. Then a thought occured to me. I must...

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PART 16: CLAIRE'S POV

Tears poured down my face the whole lunch period. Ethan, David, & Macy tried to comfort me, but it was no use. Will was too busy being in shock. I felt like a starfish who's arms and legs had just been ripped off door festering seagulls.. except, unlike starfish, my limbs wouldn't grow back. I didn't heal as fast. "Oh, c'mon. She'll come around, Claire. It'll be ok. I promise." David reassured me with a grin. Yeah, right. Even he couldn't keep the shock off him...

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PART 10: STELLA'S POV

I curled my hair quickly. I didn't want time to think. I was fairly sure this bonfie would be akward with both David and Will there. After my hair was curled the right way and my makeup was perfect I went into my closet to look for an appropriate outfit. Then a thought occured to me. This was an after school event. Which meant I could wear whatever I wanted! Yes! I pushed back the school clothes and grabbed an oranje tanktop and shorts. I changed in a hurry and slipped on my flip flops. Then I headed volgende door without a word. I didn't bother knocking,...

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PART 9: STELLA'S POV

"STELLA!" Claire shook me viciously. "What, whaaaat?! I'm up!" My eyes fluttered open. "School today stupid! Get up!" I wondered if I looked half as confused as I felt. "Huh? It's Sunday?" She laughed quietly and jumped off the bed. "Actually it's monday. Way to sleep away the weekend, lazy butt!" I glared and threw my hoofdkussen, kussen at her. I dressed in a rush, wearing my hair in a plain ponytail. Then I slipped on mmy favoriete light green aeropostal sweater, sweatshirt and shorts. I kicked on my flip flops and turned to Claire. She was wearing...

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PART 8: CLAIRE'S POV

The sun baked down on my skin as lay on the beach.
It was so quiet, so peacful without Stella here. But the strand was never the same without Stella. I fought off the urge to leave. Stella was spending time with her sister, having fun. I didn't constantly need her with me to be at the beach. In fact, I didn't need her to go for a swim either. I could swim alone and have just as much fun. I would! I stodd and brushed the sand off of my dress. Then i pulled it over my head tonen off my new bething suit. It had green stripes all over....

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PART 7: STELLA'S POV

"Stella!" Claire hissed at me. She shook me till my teeth rattled. "WHAT!?" I nearly screamed. "It's 6:00, that's what! And don't yell at me!" She said. I sighed for a seconde and then sat up. Oh joy, my first dag of highschool, where I would be a lame freshmen. Claire looked at my expression. "Your not excited?" She asked, wearily. "Well I guess I kinda am. I mean at least we don't have to wear uniforms like in junior high!" She laughed. "Yeah, those were pretty ugly. Now get up and get dressed lazy bones, we don't wanna be late!" She was smiling...

PART 6: STELLA'S POV

When I woke up, I could here voices in the living room. Familiar, yet unfamiliar voices. I went to the bathroom and changed and put my hair up. Then I went to the living room to see who was here. "Hey!" Someone squealed when I stepped into the room. I knew her immediately. She was tall, she was tan with wonderful brown hair, and she was my sister. Ally. My much meer girly sister than I. "Hey Ally." I smiled at her half-heartedly. This weekend, was going to be interesting! "What ARE u wearing?!" She scoffed. I looked down at my shorts and t-shirt, questioningly. "Huh?"...