Okay, so for some reason this got deleted... I don't quite understand why considering everything that's in this is stuff constantly used on fanpop... anywho...
This is the voorbeeld for my new story "Toxic Valentine," staring Duncan, and my oc Stephanie.
This is NOT a story for those who are against swears, sex, drinking and all of the sort, all those will be referenced in here.
I appreciate if criticism and commentaren were left, but nothing too rude... this is my first OCxTotal Drama Cast Member story. And please remember this is only a preview, so it's really short and kinda crappy...
I really hope u like it :D
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Duncan’s POV
I hear the screeching of my alarm clock, I immediately verplaats my hand over to the snooze button. “Ugh...” I moan.
I remove a leg from the cover of my blankets, and then eventually remove the other; I look up, a lot had happened in the past few months... from moving out, to my issues with Gwen, to learning how to deal with my family, who still hate my guts.
Between Gwen and the cops, I had way too much to deal with... they weren’t really cool with Gwen and my stunt last summer, apparently almost having sex in the mayor’s pool is against the law. It’s been around a jaar now and the cops are still on our trail.
As for parents, I haven’t been on the approved lijst yet. Gwen’s mom hates me and constantly reminds Gwen that Trent was a lot nicer and cleaner and all that shit, and then my own parents have been reconsidering sending me to prison... I guess I kind of deserve it after I made our neighbour’s keuken-, keuken explode after mixing something into their food...
And Gwen, she has been a pain in my ezel lately, not Courtney of Heather pain in the ass, but still a pain in the ass. She’s been less fun and has been avoiding me; maybe I fucked things up for us.
As for this summer, the only good thing that has come out of it is getting my own place, my parents pay for it, and they just don’t want me around them. They even got rid of all my stuff just because they don’t want any prove that I’m their son.
Dammit, this sucks...
I hear my phone buzz, I reach out and grab it, and I read the text;
hallo man! Bridge and I are heading to the pool, u wanna come? Invite Gwen if u want.
“Geoff,” I say. I text back, “I’ll come,”
I only want to go to get a little piece of eye-candy, Geoff and Bridge will spend all the time making-out in the pool anyway. Who knows... maybe the solution to my problems is waiting for me there...?
So there's my crappy story voorbeeld ;P leave any comments!
This is the voorbeeld for my new story "Toxic Valentine," staring Duncan, and my oc Stephanie.
This is NOT a story for those who are against swears, sex, drinking and all of the sort, all those will be referenced in here.
I appreciate if criticism and commentaren were left, but nothing too rude... this is my first OCxTotal Drama Cast Member story. And please remember this is only a preview, so it's really short and kinda crappy...
I really hope u like it :D
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Duncan’s POV
I hear the screeching of my alarm clock, I immediately verplaats my hand over to the snooze button. “Ugh...” I moan.
I remove a leg from the cover of my blankets, and then eventually remove the other; I look up, a lot had happened in the past few months... from moving out, to my issues with Gwen, to learning how to deal with my family, who still hate my guts.
Between Gwen and the cops, I had way too much to deal with... they weren’t really cool with Gwen and my stunt last summer, apparently almost having sex in the mayor’s pool is against the law. It’s been around a jaar now and the cops are still on our trail.
As for parents, I haven’t been on the approved lijst yet. Gwen’s mom hates me and constantly reminds Gwen that Trent was a lot nicer and cleaner and all that shit, and then my own parents have been reconsidering sending me to prison... I guess I kind of deserve it after I made our neighbour’s keuken-, keuken explode after mixing something into their food...
And Gwen, she has been a pain in my ezel lately, not Courtney of Heather pain in the ass, but still a pain in the ass. She’s been less fun and has been avoiding me; maybe I fucked things up for us.
As for this summer, the only good thing that has come out of it is getting my own place, my parents pay for it, and they just don’t want me around them. They even got rid of all my stuff just because they don’t want any prove that I’m their son.
Dammit, this sucks...
I hear my phone buzz, I reach out and grab it, and I read the text;
hallo man! Bridge and I are heading to the pool, u wanna come? Invite Gwen if u want.
“Geoff,” I say. I text back, “I’ll come,”
I only want to go to get a little piece of eye-candy, Geoff and Bridge will spend all the time making-out in the pool anyway. Who knows... maybe the solution to my problems is waiting for me there...?
So there's my crappy story voorbeeld ;P leave any comments!
Style:their way ahead so we got to go
November:we gotta built something to sail something we can row ow
October and Kenya:it doesnt have to be a boat
Kenya October December November and Style:as long as we stay afloat o why did we buil Gwen face
Kush and Lh:its almost ready to zitplaats, stoel sail
Lh:just hammering the final nail
the girls:o o
Lb:we really did this fast
Lb Lh and Kush:soon we back in first class because they build Gwen face
the girls:we build Gwen face
the boys:we gonna take first place
the girls:because we build Gwen face
November and Lizzy:ah yea
Lizzy and Style:*holding each other*we build Gwen face
Kenya and October:*sliding*yea yea
November:we gotta built something to sail something we can row ow
October and Kenya:it doesnt have to be a boat
Kenya October December November and Style:as long as we stay afloat o why did we buil Gwen face
Kush and Lh:its almost ready to zitplaats, stoel sail
Lh:just hammering the final nail
the girls:o o
Lb:we really did this fast
Lb Lh and Kush:soon we back in first class because they build Gwen face
the girls:we build Gwen face
the boys:we gonna take first place
the girls:because we build Gwen face
November and Lizzy:ah yea
Lizzy and Style:*holding each other*we build Gwen face
Kenya and October:*sliding*yea yea
Brittany:the strings of my hart-, hart are a dangle mess
Demon Destructible Lizzy DD Destructive Korea and Style:oo mess
Brittany:its beating so hard it jumps out of my chest
the girls:oo chest
Brittany:i tried to fit two men in my soul
Corabella:oo soul
Brittany:i ended up stuck to a pole
all the girls:*hands on the pole*she got stuck worth her luck stuck to a pole
Brittany:i fell for every little thing he said
all the girls:oo said
Brittany:and when i close my eyes he jump on a sled
all the girls:oo sled
Brittany:he verplaats on im still stuck in this place
all the girls:oo place
Brittany:will somebody pour some warm water down my face
all the girls:*dance her direction*she got stuck shouldve eend worst of luck stuck to a pole she got stuck to a pole
Demon Destructible Lizzy DD Destructive Korea and Style:oo mess
Brittany:its beating so hard it jumps out of my chest
the girls:oo chest
Brittany:i tried to fit two men in my soul
Corabella:oo soul
Brittany:i ended up stuck to a pole
all the girls:*hands on the pole*she got stuck worth her luck stuck to a pole
Brittany:i fell for every little thing he said
all the girls:oo said
Brittany:and when i close my eyes he jump on a sled
all the girls:oo sled
Brittany:he verplaats on im still stuck in this place
all the girls:oo place
Brittany:will somebody pour some warm water down my face
all the girls:*dance her direction*she got stuck shouldve eend worst of luck stuck to a pole she got stuck to a pole
Name:Akaria (her middle and last name are classified)
Age:17
Is she super-natural?:Yup!Shes a necromancer!
Likes: Being normal,Talking to the dead
Dis-likes:Raising the dead door accident,her saying the wrong things at the wrong time,getting cut badly
Fears: Raising the dead door accident
Friends:Currently none
Enemies:Currently none
Advantages:The fact that she can raise the dead and talk to the dead is enough.
Birthday:August 15th,1993
(PS:an nercromancer is a person that can raise the dead)
Age:17
Is she super-natural?:Yup!Shes a necromancer!
Likes: Being normal,Talking to the dead
Dis-likes:Raising the dead door accident,her saying the wrong things at the wrong time,getting cut badly
Fears: Raising the dead door accident
Friends:Currently none
Enemies:Currently none
Advantages:The fact that she can raise the dead and talk to the dead is enough.
Birthday:August 15th,1993
(PS:an nercromancer is a person that can raise the dead)