True Writers Article: The Inevitable Fate----part 1-------chapter 1

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The Inevitable Fate----part 1-------chapter 1

posted by rory2011

chapter (1)

it's raining outsaid ,david finished his work early today ,he took his sons from school and brought them back home pagina
mary was daivd's wife and the mother of four children (kiven,poul, jack and kat ),when david and his sons entered the house mary was surprised seeing them in the house in that time
"you're early today "mary said
"yea ,mary can I talk to u in the keuken-, keuken ?"david asked
"yea ,sure"mary said

mary and david sit on the sofa that their little where daughter sleep at night
"ok I don't know how to tell u this ,but we should verplaats "david said
"move to where ? and why? "mary asked
"this place is no longer our home" david said
"you lost your job today right ?"mary asked
"no ,it's not about the job ,it's your father" david said
"david my father can't do anything ,he's not even my real father , he intimidated u that doesn't mean he's dangerous "mary said
"no ,listen your father want to..." david and mary conversation cutted door ringing the bills door
"oh my god ,they're here "david said

poul opened the door ,it was his grandfather with tow strange men
"is your father in home pagina kid?"george (the grandfather ) said
"yes ,he's in the keuken-, keuken "poul answered
"then let me see him please" george said
"ok"poul said

when george entered the keuken-, keuken with those strange men david was very angry ,he was looking in george's face but george was smilling and standing afront of him
"so did u tell her? "george asked
"tell me what?" mary asked
"I was going to tell her" david answered
"tell me what ?,will somebody please explain what's going here ?" mary said
"I'll help your husband with make meer money door make this family lower "george said
"so you'll take our kids ?" mary asked
"no I don't want your kids ,your pathetic husband can't make money and he can't take this family expenditure ,so your life is useless ,If we killed u your husband can save meer money "george said
"but that's so overstated "mary said
"listen to me woman ,you're living in our money and we who decide who will live and who will die ,so u have tow choice ,you can save your family and die of u can die with your kids ,your husband will watching u with the kids when you'll all die and we will let him live to make meer money for us ,and u can't run away ,we have many men watching u "one of the men said
"you son of a..."mary cutted what david will say "I'll do it alone " mary zei
"mary...no please no "david said
"ok we will take u after two weeks "the man zei while he moving to the door

"are u out of u mind mary "david said
"we have no choice david " mary said
"I can save u "david said"
"if u saved me we will lose the kids ,it's ok daivd u did your best "said mary sad
"so u guys will still here of what "jack said
"we're here hunny ,ok act normal for the kids "mary said
"ok"david said

the days ran fast ,five days left for mary ,she was sitting with her kids everyday ,talking and playing with them to forget that she will leave them after five days ,her dream was watching her children growing up but unfortunately she can't be with them
mary's sons were sleeping in one small room cause the house is very old and small ,mary knocked the door before she went to sleep ,keivin opened the door ,"mom is there something wrong?" kevin asked
"can I talk to u inside ?" mary asked
"sure ,get in" kevin answered
mary sat down on kevin's bed ,"how old are u kevin ?" mary asked
"I'm almost 15 ,why ?" kevin answered
"you're a man now kevin ,you have to look out for your younger brothers and your little sister ,I want u to help your father "mary said
"yea of curse ,but why are u telling me this ?" kevin asked
"cause someday I won't be able to take care of all of u ,I just want u to understand that I'll be with u even if I'm not beside u ,I just want u to remember this " mary zei wiping on kevin's hair
"don't worry mom "kevin said
"I know" mary zei ,mary walking toward the door "good night hunny"said mary befor she closed the door
david heard what mary and kevin were talking about ,he can't take his life anymore ,he's almost losing his wife and he lost his job today but he doesn't want to tell mary
"mary ,please don't be emotional in the last hours "david said
"I know I just.... can't "mary zei crying
"I know it even harder for me but we can't do anything now ,I saw three men with guns looking at our house they were sitting in the empty building that near us "david said
"yea I know ,I just want to tell u something and please promise me to do what I'll say " mary said
"I'll do anything ,what u want ?" david asked
"don't let this happened to kat too in the future and don't tell her that I'm dead tell she been in school "
"mary what are u talking about do u think I'll do the same thing that your father did to u ?" david asked
"no ,I just think that she's just three years old girl but u don't talk to her of play with her just like when our sons were in her age ,don't hate her cause she's a girl and we are poor " mary said
"are u kidding me mary ,do I sound like a girls hater ? " david asked
"no ,I'm sorry I just... feel very angry ,I'm sorry I don't want to fight with u in my last days " mary said
"it's ok ,I think u should take some rest now "david zei
"ok "mary said

ITF, sadiebugz00 and 2 others like this

alicia386 Aww sad and very interesting. i have to say it really seems like a great book to read.

Zero_Delta Interesting that the father wants to eliminate Mary because of David not making any money...And I'm not trying to be rude, but I think you should go back and fix the capitalization. Otherwise I think it's good.

rory2011 no ,not just because of her husband can't make money ,cause mary's father can't take enough money from david because of the family expenditure ,and it's also a tradition ,fathers have to choose if they want their daughters to live more or not and george hate his daughter so of course he will choose her to die the money thing is just an excuse for goerge to kill mary

SweetHoneyBunny It's a good story so far and I hope to read more soon. To point out two things, remember to check your spelling and your capitalization. Other then that, it's really good. Keep up the good work.

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posted by 1999jacko

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posted by flabaloobalah

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What I Took From It, Chapter Two

posted by flabaloobalah

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posted by hgfan5602

Hi, my name is Jonas. I'm thirteen. I'm...well, not what u would consider normal.
I have twenty pairs of X-His from the Converse store volgende door, all pink. Okay, okay, see? I'm not normal. And that's not the end of it.
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So, this morning, I woke up, when my glass of Coke left from an jaar geleden shimmered. A misty face appeared.
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Was it my imagination...or did I get sucked into my glass of Coke?

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posted by 1999jacko

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posted by flabaloobalah

Genre: Realistic Fiction, Drama/Romance

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That first day, when we jumped out of the van, we were stunned. The house was this glorious, leaning, peeling, giant home pagina on a winding dirt road. The paint was a soft baby blue, something that reminded me of rocking horses and winter nights. Our Auntie Leila stepped onto the rickety porch and waved and smiled. Cautiously, Claire and I waved and smiled back. Uncle Jeb came to give us hugs. We returned the hugs without complaining....

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way Ch.8

posted by Problematic129

Chapter 8
    That was not subtle
    “My reports so good! I’ll get at least a D!” I squealed as Beth and I walked towards the school.
    Beth frowned. “A D? Why not aim for B?”
    “Honey the last time I got a B, was when one stung me.” I informed her.
    “You can at least try, bubs, it can’t be that hard.” Beth reasoned as reached the school parking lot.
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The Inevitable Fate 6

posted by rory2011

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" sit down please " the officer zei
David sat on that black divan, bank near the officer disk
" sir ,could u please tell me what's going on with my son Kevin " David zei
" today there was a brand in the sugar factory where your son work ,your son is a very good strong guy ,he helped all...

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way Ch.6

posted by Problematic129

*Thanks for all the commentaren and fans :) Please don't copy and please read and review. Note, my stories might be geplaatst later than usual, so your forewarned. Thanks for tuning in!!!*
Chapter 6
    Sage, the really strange red head
    I feel my blood boil when I see my gals outside drooling over football players outside with no shirts on. I suppress the urge to roll my eyes, Sage’s practically fanning herself, Ali has no shame in giving them the stalker look, and Beth is too pre-occupied on her phone.
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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way Ch.5

posted by Problematic129

*Thanks for all the commentaren and fans :) Please read, review, and don't copy*
Chapter 5
    Okay I’ll- wait what
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Rotten Tomatoes

posted by hgfan5602

This is a crazy song I wrote called Rotten Tomatoes, and I hired the Black-Eyed Peas to sing it. WARNING: This song was meant for entertainment, and should in no way be connected to real people, places, of things. It is not the author's responsibility for the medical bills if u die from laughter, of possibly, thinking I'm weirdness.
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Converse is awesome
The Westing Game is gruesome
My vrienden all ran
When they heard me say that

People say I'm weird
But look over there then,
That teen has a
White, fluffy beard

Chocolate coins rock
They're the celebs of the block
They're creamy and sweet
Cuz they always go to swim meets

I love Harry Potter
of was it appel, apple Rotter?
It was everyone's favorite,
But it soon molded.

Now, I'm almost five
And I live in a hive,
Like my other amigos
Who live in anthills!

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way Ch.3

posted by Problematic129

*Thanks for the commentaren and fans :) I just noticed I put Ch.3 for Ch.2, my mistake I can be so dumb sometimes. But! I fixed it. Please read, review, and don't copy*
Chapter 3
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    Back to the story, Ali was right, the new substitute was HOT, door the time class was over the girl sitting volgende to my had drowned in a pool of her own drool. We make our way to the cafeteria and listen to one of many of Beth’s crazy stories, it’s basically this lame story that she recreates improvising as she goes along.
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The Inevitable Fate 4

posted by rory2011

two years later ...
kevin took his father's part of making money for this family and David stood in the house to take care of the others ,and to brought food and other needing for his family

Jack hated school so much ,but David refused to let him without education ,jack taking drugs and stealing money from other people ,he's not a good guy like Kevin and Paul ,so all David caring is around jack ,David couldn't understand that his son is a bad guy , cause jack look like his father so much with his black hair and his skin , his face shape ,he took his green eyes from his mother but he look nothing...

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way Ch.2

posted by Problematic129

*Chapter 2 up! Thanks for all the commentaren and fans :) Please read, review and don't copy*
Chapter 2
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Remember me Ch.14

posted by Problematic129

*Thanks for all the commentaren and fans :) Please read and review and please don't copy!*
Chapter 14
        A deadly experience
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    “Your sure she won’t suffocate.” My sister asked, doubtfully looking at the tie in the bag.
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Remember me Ch.13

posted by Problematic129

*Thanks for fanning :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 13
        Payback and revenge, a bad combination
    It was a few hours after the doctor showed me my gray hair, and I felt spooked. I couldn’t have been that stressed, could I?
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World of Shadows- Chaoter Five

posted by alicia386

Chapter Five
Book Two- Sophie

SECRETS ARE MEANT TO BE KEPT SECRET. DON'T GO LOOKING FOR THEM BECAUSE YOURS COULD BE AS EASILY EXPOSED. -Emma

I studied myself I'm the bathroom mirror. I was pretty, no vraag about that. I had dark black hair and gorgeous brown eyes like my sister. I kept my hair shoulder-length while Zoe liked hers long and covering most of her face. She once told me that it gave her a mysterious vibe. I liked my hair short because it showed off my roundish face. It was odd. Zoe and I are twins but my face always seemed a little meer round and cutesy then Zoe's face. ...

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World of Shadows- Chapter Four

posted by alicia386

Chapter Four

WHEN I NEED u WILL BE THE SAME dag I DIE. -Erica

For the last two days, Sophie hasn't zei one word to me. She was either locked up in her room of going to the mall with her new friend, Madison. It seemed like she was never home pagina and when she was home, she would never come out of her room. I have literally heard her whispering and if I stood there too long, everything would get eerily silent. It was bizarre. Dad would probably notice if he wasn't too busy sucking face with Carrie.
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A Cat Chasing Yarn (Cat's Point of View)

posted by sadiebugz00

The Yarn....

(Sequel to the A Cat Chasing Yarn (Yarn's Point of View) (This cat is going to be really perky and hyped up and energetic.))

OKAIZ, SO TODAY I SAW THE MOST AWESUME-Y THING EVER! A BASKET OF YARNZ!! I SAWZ MEH seconde favoriete CULUR IN THERE, TOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MEH favoriete CULUR IZ GREEEEEEEEEEEN AND MEH SECUND favoriete IZ PINNNNKK. SO I WUZ LIKE, POUNCE! SWIPEZ-Y! I'M SO AWESUMEZ! AND SO, I LIKE, CHASED IT DOWNZ DA STAIRZ, AND IT WUZ SO EXHILARATIN' AND STUFFZ. AND SO, LIKE, IT MADE IT TO THA HUMANZ AND DEY THREW IT SAID, "Go get it, Daisy!!" SOZ, I WENT AFTER IT AND hol, den I SAW SOME GREEN YARN, SOZ I RANZ PAST THA roze YARN TA GETZ DA GREEN..... I LURVVVVVVVVVV GREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEN!!!

Me (right) and my brother (left).

Mom (left) and Dad (right).

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vrienden Until the End- Chapter Seven

posted by alicia386

Chapter Seven

Since the death of Gwendolyn, Mr. Bulks cut the field trip short and gave everyone an A for the day. The Daltons were the most upset so they left a few minuten after Reese was arrested. Gwendolyn's body was not found. Police suspected that Reese had probably hid the body somewhere. She probably didn't want anyone to to find it. There was still an unsettling feeling in the air as everyone remembered what Reese last said. If she truly wasn't the one who killed Gwen and Abby then that meant that the killer was still loose and probably planning their volgende attack. If they were...