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posted by Insight357
Jet Avate sauntered into his apartment, his fingers cramping, and his eyes feeling glazed over. The sweet smell of fuel had buried itself into his nose and didn’t appear to be leaving any time soon. He went into the bathroom and looked himself over.

    “Another first place,” he murmured as he ran his hands through his dark hair, his dark blue eyes sparkling. “Another one-hundred grand.” Jet grinned. “And another guy who doesn’t know if they want to brutally murder me of worship me.”

    Jet had a reputation as the best straat racer of all time. He had a bounty on his head for fifty-thousand dollars, but no one had been able to beat him. Jet could outrun anyone, including the cops. Tonight the police almost caught up with him, but Jet swerved and made it look like they were after his opponent. Jet was a lot smarter than people gave him credit for; only one person had ever understood his true potential.

    An obnoxious beep came from his black laptop in the other room. The illegal racer sighed and pushed off the white sink and flicked the light off. He went into his living room and took a zitplaats, stoel on the plush tan sofa. Jet took the computer from the oak coffee tafel, tabel and lifted the lid. On the screen was a black screen with white lettering. He immediately felt anxious, with a bit of curiosity mixed in. He’d only received one of these letters, and that had been the time that-



Make sure no one else reads this message as u do. The moment u finish reading this message, please wis the message, then destroy the computer.

I have contacted u for a reason. u have a special ability, which will benefit me greatly in this case. The Carter Case. Please come to Virginia Mental Institution, floor five, cell F. Do not let anyone know your whereabouts, and keep a low profiel as u enter the Institution.

Arakne.




    Arakne. Of course, why would Jet think it was anyone else? The racer quickly read back over it to remember the directions. Though he understood Arakne knew what he was capable of, he didn’t know exactly why the crime solver would call upon him. Especially for a case that sounded so out of his expertise.

    It had been about six years ago, the last time he heard from Arakne. Jet had just gotten into the racing scene. Suddenly, racers started disappearing left and right. Each victim found was dead of almost dead. The almost dead ones had mutations. Arakne had stepped in to figure out who was behind it. He and another man working on the case, Thomas Brown, had narrowed it down to two suspects, Jet Avate and Henry Lisave. Detective Brown believed Jet was behind the crimes because the murders hadn’t started until he showed up. Arakne believed otherwise.

    Arakne sent Jet a message asking him to set himself up as bait for Lisave. He did as the crime solver asked, and Henry took it. They were able to catch the man behind the mutations and killings. Arakne told him that there might be a dag when he would call on Jet again for help. Jet was beginning to think that dag would never come, but here it was.

    Jet looked the computer over once meer and frowned. He had plenty of money, but no one ever wanted to destroy a computer. With one last sigh, he began to pick apart the pieces of the laptop and slowly destroy them.

***---***---***
    “Hey, Iz!” Ryan, Isabella’s boyfriend called from the dining room. “Can u bring a bottle of wine in here when u come back?”

    “Yeah!” she replied and squatted down to the wooden cabinet below the stainless steel sink. She was throwing a avondeten, diner party for her boyfriend’s promotion. That and they were celebrating her parents’ twenty-fifth anniversary. She took a bottle from the rack under the sink and walked it back into the dining room. She set it at the head of the tafel, tabel in front of her boyfriend. She then took a zitplaats, stoel between her boyfriend and her mother.

    “Thanks baby.” Ryan smiled, his cheeks dimpling. He worked as a police officer at the local station.

    It was quite funny actually, considering Isabella used to kill people for a living. “No problem,” she replied, fixing her amber gaze on him.

    A series of beeps followed her reply. She slowly turned around to look at her computer sitting at the edge of the living room. She rarely heard those beeps. It was an urgent signal. She slowly stood from the table.

    “Excuse me,” Isabella murmured and walked out of the dining room. She slipped around the uithangbord and bent down to look at her computer. She clicked at the dark screen, and white lettering popped up.

    She blinked at the name on the bottom of the message. Arakne. Excitement rushed through her. The last time she’d heard that name was when everything in her life fell to ruin, when all the adrenaline disappeared. Isabella knew the crime solver, because he was the one that made her give up killing. He was the one that made all the charges against her disappear. She hated him and loved him all at once.

    It was about four years geleden when she’d started on a mission. She had to kill different people, she didn’t know why, but the man that hired her offered to pay her two million dollars. She accepted and soon heard of people she had assignments to kill dying before she could get to them.

    An FBI agent caught up to her. Arakne came up with two suspects, Isabella Hanshew and Shane Gastrine, the man that hired Isabella. The crime solver came up with a plan to figure out which was truly behind the murders. Arakne made her tell him everything. He began to trust Isabella and asked if she could track Gastrine. She found him just as he was about to murder a teenage boy. Agent Mattis arrested Shane, then Arakne cleared all charges against her assassinations.

    Isabella blinked and took a small handgun from under the computer desk. She brought out the metal weapon and aimed it at the monitor. Isabella shot at the computer, destroying it. She had to get to the Institution. The normal life was killing her.

***---***---***

    Thomas shut the door to his apartment and leaned against it tiredly. Who knew having a girl friend was so much work? He meant to break up with her tonight, but his soft hart-, hart couldn’t do it. For one of the smartest detectives in the world, he was rather tenderhearted. Thomas locked the door and went into the living room. He collapsed on the blue divan, bank and stared up at the cream ceiling.

    His dark hair fell into his eyes as he closed them. Fatigue took over his body as he rolled onto his side to get comfortable. The scent of esdoorn-, esdoorn filled his nose as he suddenly remembered he forgot to turn to candle warmer off in the kitchen. Thomas groaned and rose from the divan, bank so he could go flip it off. The detective began to kruis the threshold of his red and white kitchen, but a long beep coming from his laptop made him freeze in his tracks. That beep meant the message was urgent. Any other message would beep three times then be sent to the archives.

    Thomas slowly turned around and walked over to the bureau in the corner of his cream living room. He clicked on the black screen and watched as the white lettering popped up. His black eyes widened as he skimmed over the message. Arakne, the only man in the world who proved to be a better crime solver than Detective Brown.

    Thomas wondered why Arakne would call on him. He’d made an inaccurate conclusion on the last case they worked together. Thomas had suspected the very man that ended up helping catch the real killer. Arakne had dismissed it rather easily, but even years after it still bothered Thomas. The detective chewed on his lower lip as anxiety swelled inside him. Arakne had gegeven him no choic; he had to help him. Thomas stood from the divan, bank and sighed. He never wanted to work with the crime solver again…

***---***---***

    Hot water pounded against Rainier’s back. She slowly tipped her head until her black hair spilled down her shoulders and fell into the stream of water. She relived her last dag as an FBI Agent. She’d resigned only two months ago. Her team went after a serial killer and one of the suspects attempted to take her life. She killed him, the man turned out to be the killer. It had shaken her up so bad; she resigned.

    Rainier was an excellent FBI Agent, but she couldn’t handle all the responsibility it came with. She’d worked many cases in her time; she should be proud rather than ashamed. What would her superiors think if they saw her now? Rainier, working as a columnist for a local newspaper instead of on the field tracking bad guys, of behind the scenes pulling together information to capture a deranged maniac.

    She turned off the water and stepped out of her white bathtub. She ran her hands through her long, ebony hair, pushing it back out of her face. Rainier looked at herself in the mirror, her violet eyes sparkling with hate. She hated herself for resigning even though it was for the best.

    “You’ve got mail,” the monotone voice came from her computer.

    Rainier raised an eyebrow and made her way into the living room of her small apartment. She’d closed the curtains before she got into the douche so she had no qualms about strutting around naked. She walked around the taling, groenblauw sofa and sat in the black chair in front of her wooden desk. She clicked on the message icon. The screen went black and white lettering began to decode itself.

    The ex-agent’s eyes went wide as she looked who the message’s sender was. Arakne. She worked under him and helped solve a murder case years ago. She hadn’t heard from him since, and thought that when she’d left the FBI she’d lost all contact with everyone else from that environment as well. Rainier stood up and walked into her bedroom. She plundered through her small closet in an attempt to find something to wear. She prepared for whatever mission awaited her.

***---***---***

    Ciel stood in the surveillance room, staring at the one-way window with wide eyes. Black covered the window. Was it a blackout? of had something happened during the attempted break-in? The psychologist could only hope that Akira was safe. He left the room again and walked over to the entrance of cell F. He slammed himself into the door, but nothing happened. The door had been unable to open for at least two hours now, the same amount of time the room had blacked out.

    A vibration went off in his pocket. Ciel felt around and his fingers skimmed over his pager. He pulled it out, seeing he had an urgent message. The man turned around and walked down the hallway quickly. He burst into his office and sat down at his computer. Ciel clicked on the message and watched as it loaded. The last time he’d received a message from Arakne was the time they had finished profiling the killer and closed a case. He never expected to hear from the almighty crime solver again.

    He bit his lip and looked at the address with wide eyes. Why did Arakne want to meet in Akira’s cell? The Carter Case… This involved Akira, but how? No murders had occurred, right? Arakne only took on special cases. Was this special? Ciel quickly disposed of the computer then made his way back down the hallway to Akira’s cell. Before he tried the door again, he peeked into the surveillance room. All the cameras were back on and the sheet was down.

    He spun and slammed himself into the door. It opened without any problems this time and Ciel stumbled into the room. Four other people had their eyes on him, watching him with curiosity and amusement.

    Ciel quickly straightened himself and took in the other people in the room as they did the same to him. “Who are you?” he asked.

    A brown haired girl smirked. “We could ask u the same question,” she responded challengingly.

    The psychologist cleared his throat, and began to introduce himself, but a loud beeping interrupted him. Simultaneously, everyone turned their heads toward the bed at the back wall. A laptop set atop the blankets and the screen was black. Suddenly, white letters began to appear, as if someone were typing them at this very moment.

Do not worry. I am Arakne. This computer is veilig and u can feel free to speak. I’ll be able to hear you.

    “Why are so many other people here?” Ciel asked immediately.

This case is going to require the assistance of u all. Jet, I hired u because I know u are meer than capable of taking charge of a situation and are fearless.

    The black haired man smirked and everyone knew that he was Jet.

Isabella u have an amazing tracking ability and u can defend someone until death. This could come in handy in this particular case.

    The brown haired, amber-eyed girl nodded.

Thomas, u know how to put the pieces together and know how to be sympathetic. u are very levelheaded and know how to play the game.

    The man’s black eyes narrowed slightly as if analyzing his words.

Rainier, u are the best FBI Agent I know, even if u are no longer apart of the organization. u are a talented tracker, u know a killer when u see one, u have many valuable skills.

    The black haired, violet-eyed woman bit on her lower lip.

And finally, Ciel. u are apart of the team because Akira Carter trusts you. u may also come in handy with your knowledge about the human brain.

    The man’s brown hair fell into his eyes as he looked at the ground.

I want u all to go to the volgende meeting place immediately. Get to know the man u will protect. Once u reach your destination, contact me again using this computer and no other device.

    The screen went white, then the laptop turned itself off. The five members looked at one another. Each of them wore expressions of confusion.

    “He never told us where to meet,” Jet murmured.

    “Arakne is testing us,” Rainier said. “There is a clue somewhere in this room. He wants to see if we can find it and how long it will take.”

    Ciel’s green eyes widened. “That would mean he would’ve had to been in this room in the past few hours.”

    “Did u see him?” Thomas asked.

    Ciel shook his head. “Everything that allowed a visual in the room was cut off. Everything just came back on when I came in here.”

    Thomas grinned. “Arakne has definitely been in here.”

    Ciel felt somewhat stupid for not guessing it before. Why else would everything have lost power?

    Rainier, Isabella, Jet, and Thomas began to zoek around the room. Finally, Ciel joined in and started examining the small bookshelf. It looked like someone had messed with the books. He glanced over all the titles wondering which book Arakne would be most likely to pick up.

    “The Wonders of Insects, Dream Cycle, Arachnid Encyclopedia, of America’s Most Dangerous Insects…” Ciel drawled as he examined some of the boeken that Arakne may choose.

    “Arakne is most likely derived from the word arachnid,” Rainier mused from behind Ciel.

    He looked up at her with an eyebrow raised. “Pick a book,” he said, “any book at all.”

    “Arachnid Encyclopedia,” she zei automatically.

    Ciel plucked the book from the seconde shelf and began to thumb through it. He stopped on page thirty-three. A blank slip of paper marked the page. Ciel scanned over it. Latrodectus, South, Virginia, West all had red circles around them. Was it blood of an ink pen? “What do u think it means?” he asked Rainier quietly.

    The women plucked the book from his tan hands and examined the page thoroughly. “The only reason I can piece this together is because I understand Arakne’s methods,” she murmured, her brow creased. “Southwest Virginia, fifth house on Lat Road.”

    Ciel arched an eyebrow as he stared up at the girl. “Where did u get the bit about the fifth house?”

    “After Lat Road of Latrod, there are five letters remaining. It’s the only thing it can mean and make sense,” Thomas interjected.

    “Looks like we figured out where we need to go,” Jet said. “Let’s get going.”

    The team traveled for about an uur until they finally reached Lat Road. Jet drove while everyone else looked out the window, squinting through the darkness to find the fifth house. They came to the fifth house and pulled into the lot only to find that it was an apartment building.

    “Um, did anyone happen to catch anything that might help figure out what apartment it is?” Ciel asked from the backseat.

    “What page was it on?” Thomas asked.

    “Thirty-three,” Rainier replied.

    “Maybe apartment three-zero-three?” Thomas suggested. “Or third floor, third apartment?”

    Jet parked the car. “We’ll figure it out when we get in there.” He slid out of the car impatiently and everyone followed suit.

***---***---***

    Akira Carter sat in the living room of apartment three on the third floor. He sat in a black office chair facing away from the door. His black eyes fixed themselves firmly on the uithangbord in front of him, and his elbows rested lightly on the desk. The room he sat in was dark, but he could still see the outline of the harvestman that crawled on his pale hand. The only noise in the room was the ticking of the clock that hung on the left wall. Tick, tock, tick tock.

    The door opened allowing light from the hallway to stream into the room. Akira squinted slightly, but didn’t turn around. He only smirked slightly, then said, “You’re early.”
posted by alicia386
Chapter Six: Two Goons, One Girl, One Man, and One Secret Room

      The door immediately slammed shut behind me. The one thing I never do is panic. It was the perfect time to panic but I had to keep my composure. I wondered if Darrell was able to escape. He couldn't possibly wait for me. He has the opportunity to escape and save himself. I took one step vooruit, voorwaarts and tumbled down the stairs. It was so dark that I didn't even notice them. I had quick reflexives so I was able to stop myself before I crashed of made a sound to ward off the intruder. A light switch was to my left so I flicked...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
12
    Darren
    No matter the coaxing, Stilere stayed stubborn, she wasn’t being left behind. u see, it’s like really early in the morning, how early? Like friggin three a.m., that’s how! I am tired, and I certainly don’t want any spook in my life now.
    “I’m coming!” Stilere yelled defiantly, smirking when she saw Alex’s shoulder’s deflate. She’s won the battle.
    “Fine,” Alex said. “But be careful, oh and your on watchful tower.”
    Watchful...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Eighteen
Book Six- Zoe

      How did the battle end? Well, Shane kicked some serious butt. I wasn't so bad myself. The guards may have been ghost but they were pretty easy to kill. All u had to do was kill hem like u would kill a human. It was that simple. It was what made the battle even meer serious then it already was. My sister. She killed herself. That is what it looked like. The odd thing was that The One was nowhere to be found. I searched everywhere in the kasteel but I couldn't find him. I soon gave up. He wasn't important. My sister was. The dream of my sister's grave...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, mystery and fantasy :)~
Chapter 38
        The river that drowned tears
    I ignored the freaked out yells and warning’s as I went past the speed and nearly demolished the car, we couldn’t take our time, we had to be fast. We finally reached the river, which was very close to the river, and I turned off the engine and jumped out of the car running to the lake.
    I plunged deep into the water and I swam through it to find the victim, who I found though made me gasp. Jessica was tied to...
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posted by Annabeth788594
chapter one

When I was a little girl my dad suddenly left. I remember being really close to him. Sometimes he would act strange though. Like he never stayed in one place long and was always looking behind him like he thought someone was following him. And one dag he zei he had to go for a little while, and he never came back. He was the best father I could ask for. He was kind and always did what was best for the family. And that is why it broke my hart-, hart to find out that he wasn’t coming back. At first I didn’t believe it and I didn’t want to. The only thing I wanted was my dad to come...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, mystery and fantasy :)~
Chapter 35
        Qualities of a hero
    “I brought u your favoriete foods, deserts, etc. Should hold u for awhile.” Jess says, handing me a steamy plate.
    “What are u planning on doing, Jess?” I ask, confused, but grateful she wasn’t starving us. “What’s your motive?”
    “Sorry, can’t give u all of my secrets, you’ll know soon,” Jess paused. “But right now, eat, strengthen your bones.”
    I take...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~    
6
    Darren
    Now, I don’t hate school, no, not at all. But the thought of going to it for a place of safety, especially with no one but creepy janitors in there, yeah, I’m not liking it.
    “How are we going to get in?” Brooklyn asked, eyeing the doors that, in morning look friendly and welcoming, but at night look dangerous and ready to gobble up innocent kids.
    “Oh, please!” Stilere said, looking at our faces. “You cannot be scared of school,...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy
4
Iris
    I hadn’t been really surprised when we broke apart after that weirdness, being with them brought back all those memories. But I’ve been beginning to feel a bit lonely, all of us really bonded that day, and it feels like were sharing a secret. The bad part is that we don’t even know the secret either.
    I still can’t stop thinking of that book, it just popped up from where the lightning hit. Something happened that made it do that.
    “Hey Zaria,” I say as I walk up to her.
    Zaria...
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posted by hgfan5602
Ya tell me,
Don't dance, don't dance,
Just stay inside and never go out
And scold me
All dag long, all dag long

What makes u think you're so damn awesome?
Don't ya know we have a life too, too?
We'd be sittin in watching TV
And I don't think u want that either

So what the heck can we do?
We're not just mindless robots with nothing else to do
We don't have time for homework
We just wanna have fun, fun, fun

We have a life, no time for homework
We can go ahead and play flag football
But I'm not goin inside

Why do u act like
There's nothin else better than
Doin homework all night long
I bet u never liked that when u were young

We've been playin outside
Now it's time to kick in and relax
No meer time for homework, just sit back and do the things I love to do
Cuz I gotta enjoy my life when I'm young.
posted by alicia386
Crime: Dectetive Story




Chapter 6: Two Missing People Makes A Certain Someone Happy

      Simone Rivers wore her blue strapless dress which made her look taller. She was already tall but she needed that extra height. She had her long blonde hair curled and wore the black wedges she recently bought. The whole outfits was around a seven hundred dollars but she wouldn't mention that to her cheap dad. She looked dazzling of at least that is what all the boys thought when they whistled when she walked by. She took pleasure on having their attention. Nothing could stop her now. She felt powerful...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, mystery and fantasy :)~

Chapter 27
        Creepy doesn’t even begin to describe
    “The drowning man? Seriously creepy, considering how she died.” Jess said, shivering. “They’ve got to be the number one suspects now.”
    “It probably wasn’t all of them, just a few, of maybe even one.” Cadence said. “Think is, Dorothy was loved door everyone, and in that vision everyone wanted to be her favorite, what gives?”
    “What?”
    “Who would...
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posted by Problematic129
Chapter 10
    The smell of young love in the morning
    You’d all be happy to know that I never buried a certain Meredith Baxter, but I did accidentally hit her during our lovely game of volleybal fifteen times.
    “Hey JONES! Watch it!” She yelled furiously at me.
    “Oh sorry, I didn’t give a had enough smack,” I shrug as I put on my most innocent face.
    Meredith glared at me but zei nothing more.
    Don’t u just love the feeling of having the last word?...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Eight

IF ONLY I COULD HAVE MULTIPLE LIVES of LIVE FOREVER. -Erica

      I was rudely thrown in a miniature room. He didn't say much when he lugged me here. Although, I could sense others nearby but when I looked there were no ghost of anyone near. I had finally gotten rid of the feeling to only have it come back again. This time I saw who it was. "Erica?" A shimmery figure exposed itself to me. A little surprise but not as surprise as Erica who was now flickering on and off like a light bulb.
      "Who are u and why did u attack me?" This Erica was not the one I remembered from...
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Chapter Twelve
 
      "This just in," announced anchorman Douglass. "Some new insight on the Dalton murder case has just been revealed. Not only have they discovered the real killer they also have a CD of the killer admitting to the crime. Although, they will not go public with the names and other crucial details we still keep faith for the Dalton parents as they go through this awful time. Back to u Joe."
      Dakota stared her tv with astonishment. She had just leave the jailhouse and arrived home pagina to find her parents watching the news. Not only was she surprised, she was also impressed...
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posted by hgfan5602
I've had the time of my life
We were comin and goin
But I told myself,
Kid, things are gonna be alright.

Things were hard,
Things were mighty difficult,
Things were strange,
But I kept my head through it all

Boy I survived...
And what a mess I've made
At least I made it through alive
Gosh, unexpectedly, it was the time of my life

When I thought
I could not text and party all night long
When I thought
No one's gonna keep me down

The strange life
The awesome life
Just comin and goin
It's weird how it is

One day, it's like "Awesome!"
And the volgende dag it's like "I wish I was dead"
Life's just always strange
But I've...
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Chapter Three

THE TRUE MYSTERY IS NOT WHAT HAPPENED IN YOUR LIFE BUT WHAY HAPPENED AFTER DEATH. ARE u STILL ALIVE, DO u TRANSFER INTO A NEW BODY, of WHAT? -EMMA

      Sophie didn't arrive home pagina until late that evening. That was so like her. She was such a party girl that she assumed that she could toon up whenever she pleased. I was getting tired of that. I really needed her today but she was too busy having fun and being social. I had spent the rest of the dag painting a new canvas of a stormy dag with wind, rain, and lightening. It turned out beautiful.
      Sophie came into the basement...
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posted by hgfan5602
I've been written
The painful truth,
Just two days ago,
When I was...betrayed.

He walked away from me
He threw me down in the sand
Like I was some little doll
Of little importance.

It was a scary thought
To think,
Of all those years...
When he took me in
Now he threw me down and that's that

I'm not a paper doll
So I will not be thrown down again
Cuz I am not a puppet
No one will control me with strings

I am invincible
I am an individual
No one shall make me suffer
Though I must cry sometimes....

Don't schommel, swing me door my head
Don't make me lose my mind
I don't want to destroy you
But I will, if u destroy me.
posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the commentaren :) Please read and review and please don't copy*
Chapter 4
    Something fishy
    I had the perfect excuse to go back to the station, after my parents rash behavior I would need to have an apology at the ready. I mean, if u fight in the police station be glad u weren’t arrested.
    I entered the police station, looking for anyone similar. I felt a tap on my shoulder and whirled around to find the boy I was looking for.
    Cadence.
    “Hello again, Destiny,”...
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posted by rory2011
chapter (4)


the vampires took me with my sister and my brother ,they hit us on our head to pass out and when we woke up ,we found our self's in a dark nasty old room ,the room were empty ,the only thing I can see is the sun light crossing that small window
I looked around me Sofia and Jeremy were still sleeping on the floor ,I smelled something weird ,I feel dizzy ,I can't see very clear so I started knocking the room door strongly "help ,please somebody help me " ,I can feel my body hit the ground strongly ,I want to get up but I couldn't verplaats ,I couldn't even breath

all I see now is darkness...
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posted by Dhampires
No matter how much u wish for meer it happens like the uur glass time runs out and you'll lung for more.

With that time your ideas that others may know them as sweet they run out and leave people wanting more.

We song writers, novelists, story writers and poets will all leave our adience want so much more. The reason? It's because of our massive creatively, our unique style and tenchquie it's what drives us to a certain point as of where we'll keep our audience entertained. While inventors may lose their touch after contrast copies from the same old ideas being modefiyed we have our minds being put to the test door our viewers. After all they matter most their who we write for right?