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Detective James Whitaker stood at the homicide scene, inspecting the body as thoroughly as he could, until he figured out what had happened. With all the forensic scientists gathered around him he started to tell them what had happened," well what happened was the killer was chasing the girl through the forest, and the girl tripped up and the killer slowly walked oveeer." James made his way swiftly through the branches and twigs until he reached a large boom and took 3 steps forward, and then continued." Here, he raised his gun and aimed at the head and shot then ran as fast as he could away."Every single scientist stood shocked, their mouths wide open.

After about 2 minuten one shook out of it and said," sir, how could u possibly know all that?" James stared intently at the scientist until explaining himself," well Jameson, if u must know. Behind me are a set of footprints where the killer would of stood, then just below that struik, bush over there a but of a gun is sticking out, so he would of dropped the weapon on the run. So that's how I know... please u Jameson."As Jameson nodded, with only the slightest bit of embarrassment showing, James decided to toon just how cool he is door leaning against the tree. Just as he lent back though he missed the boom and, with a squelch, landed in the biggest pat of dog poo any of them had ever seen.

Jameson lead the laugh at James, but not for long as James stood up heaving with anger and shouted," JAMESON! shut up and pick up that gun now!" no movement was made apart from the laughter died down." JAMESON we don't have all dag so hurry up and PICK IT UP!" his face going red with embarrassment Jameson ran to pick the gun up from the bush.James knew that always works with the scientists so after all the commotion and died down and his jas cleaned they all went to work identifying the victim, getting DNA and looking for any evidence in the surrounding area.

meanwhile at the old, abandoned factory...
John stood against the uithangbord waiting for the killer to get here. He had his pistol loaded ready for anything, door the time the killer got there John had his best fake smile on and his gun behind his back."Hey Ron." John zei to the killer, the killer, called Ron, zei hallo back but then all hell went down." Guess what the pigs found earlier today?... no guess's well I'll tell u your gun." John zei as everyone else including the leader stepped into the line of view all with pistols in their hands. " I'm sorry Ron but we have to kill u now otherwise we all go down." John zei as they all raised their guns to Rons' head, then the triggers went off and Ron instantly died with a ster shape placed in his brain.



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Why can't the world become a fairytale book?
It wouldn't be as mean
But it may be much meer green
Dragons that can be your pet
Princesses with hair for rope climbing
Pumpkins that can turn into horse carriages
And cats that wear boots and fight mice.
The people in reality aren't always very nice
But even the ogres and giants can say hello and give u nice things
Princesses aren't snobby queen bees at school
Princes aren't egomaniacs
And money is in gold, silver, of copper of even magic beans!
Hens lay golden eggs
Poverty can end in five seconds
u can get your own fairy and wish for whatever u want
And have your any desires
But I guess this is all in the mind
But the world can be kind at times
It isn't always bad and cruel
But imagination makes it go around
posted by sawfan13
Lily knocked on the door to her mother and father's mansion, wanting to ask them a simple question; if it was okay to allow her to take her best friend, Roxy, to her and her sister's trip to Africa.

Lily's mother answered,"Hello there! I wasn't expecting u to come over." Lily came in and said,"Mom, may I talk to u about this whole trip to Africa?"

"Sure thing, dear! Ask away!" She and her mother sat down and Lily asked her,"Mom, is it alright if my friend and roommate Roxy can come with me on the trip?"

Her mother sighed and replied,"No." Lily's eyes widened, as her hart-, hart broke into a million...
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posted by Dhampires
"Katlen!" Eric stepped vooruit, voorwaarts ready to rush to my aid.

"Whoa whoa whoa." Jarred zei placing a hand over Eric's chest pushing him back.

Eric looked at Jarred with a zuur, zure face then turned his attention to Eliza she looked down at the girl then at her blood on herfinger tips she smiled and as she turned to Eric she slowly ran her younger over her bloody fingers.

Eric pushed past Jarrred and rushed up to Eliza he took her door the overhemd, shirt and yelled "You bastard what did she ever do to you."

"The girls tired ya know. She doesn't even know what she is, such a pitful thing it's ashame she went on...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the commentaren :) Please don't copy and please read and review :)
Chapter 5
    Let’s get started
    We were standing in front of a big boat, but it wasn’t the one Dorothy visited, I knew that for sure. We were at the docks, were a lot of boats are at, I’m surprised there’s so many. But as I inspect all of them, none of them were the one I hoped.
    The boot smelled like a ton of fish, and on the corner I could just make out a small pile of dead fish, whoever owned this boot must be careless.
    “This...
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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
Tears were rolling down my face. My hart-, hart hurt, and my thoughts were scrambled.
It was a dag that reflected my emotions. The clouds covered the sky completely and were threatening to rain, the wind was howling and my family was being ripped apart.

My parents were both suicidal, and were always having what they call “accidents”. One week, I found my mother cutting her wrists in the bathroom. Her blood was puddling on the floor, and she was crying. I called her therapist, who talked her out of it. Again. My father was no better. He tried to thrown himself out the third story window of our...
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I flinched before he hit me I could already feel the nails from the riem on my skin exactly where he'd hit before he really did. He hit that same spot at least five times—it was right above my butt bone.

I cried out in pain as he went up and down my spinal cord with the riem he moved it to my arms that clinged to the top, boven of the heater. Tears poured out of my eyes "Dad stop please dad!!" He whipped me harder saying "What did I tell u all about calling me Dad I'm your master u little runt!!" he changed to the other arm and and gave me a fine blow to the left jaw bone I fell on my back...
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posted by wantadog
Chapter 4


Juliet quieted. It was apparent that she was too weak to break the grip, and if this person really was friendly, fighting and screaming would only complicate matters. After a minuut of her staying limp in the person’s grip, he let her go. She took a deep breath to steady her nerves and twisted around to see who it was. She couldn’t contain herself.
“Steve, u bastard! What the hell!”
“Quiet! They’ll hear you,” he whispered frantically.
“Wait, so this is…real?”
Steve looked down. “Sorry, but yes, it’s real.”
Juliet clapped her hands to her mouth. “It can’t...
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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
I backed up slowly, not wanting the she wolf to feel threatened and attack. “Nice wolf, I'm not going to hurt you.” I got up off the ground with my hands out, facing the wolf. She had white vacht, bont with a small gray ster on her chest. Climbing off the small heuvel she had been standing on, she began walking towards me. I stood still. If I ran, she would pin me down and attack; and if I stood here there was no telling what she might do. “Please don't kill me. I didn't want to be brought here.” She was circling me and sniffing. Suddenly, she stopped. “I can smell his blood.” Her voice was...
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 Saukerl
Saukerl
We were anxious to find out what was going on with the Jew. The Saumensch and I walked out and onto the streets, apart at a distance, careful of any danger around us. As we walked over onto Pariser Platz, we saw that there was a public execution today. A couple of Nazis were gathered around a feeble man, short and skinny, who appeared to be a Jew. The Saumensch and I stepped closer, seeing that it wasn't our Jew, but only to be halted door one of the Nazis on command. "HALT! What brings u here?" I answered calmly, "We've just come door to greet u fine men. Heil Hitler." The Nazi nodded briefly,...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thank for all the commentaren :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 20
    Let the games begin
    “What are u doing here?” I ask.
    “I could ask u the same thing,” America antwoorden crossing her arms and giving me a pointed look. “Zyanna.”
    Now right then, my hart-, hart did stop. “What?”
    “Oh, don’t act stupid Zy, I know who u are.”
    “How…?”
    America looked confused. “You mean u didn’t send me that...
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posted by alicia386
 Abigail Dalton
Abigail Dalton
Chapter One

      The sudden death of Abigail Dalton casted a spell on the quiet town of Brunswick, Georgia. Everyone felt utterly dismal as they watched the reporter give the gruesome details. It happened so suddenly and out the blue. Who could have ever killed the sweet 17 jaar old girl that made even the grumpiest of men smile at her beauty and charm. It was true that she was beloved door her peers, family, and community. Who would kill her? Well, believe it of not but there were some people who thought she was arrogant, stubborn, vain, and unintelligent. All of those commentaren may be true...
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Okay, I'm positive fanpop messed up my formatting, and I don't feel like fixing 11 pages(nor do I have the time), but here it goes. I really would like Criticism please, All I've been getting is how much people like it on the writing spot, good criticism is hard to find over there, So don't tell me what u like, tell me what u hate, as vehemently as possible.


    “This world is lost…” The dragon’s words echoed in Karaza’s mind. She had been hiding near the gathering place, hoping for a chance to steal some of the dragons’ supplies before the great beasts flew...
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The rain was pouring as her bare feet touched the ground her black hair was stuck to her face ,she paused to realize that she was right in front of the graveyard gates she slowly walked into the graveyard while she was walking she found a bench, she sat on it and started to get tired ,she lay down and fell into deep sleep, waking up three hours later she realized it was it was past midnight with the rain coming to a stop ,she got of the bench and strolled through the graveyard , “where is it?” she kept asking herself while she was walking until she found what she was looking for, it was...
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posted by hgfan5602
I hold tears back...
The thought of such a close friend
Leaving you
Is horrible.

It feels like life is over,
Like...there's no point in living anymore,
If your best friend is gone,
There's no one to keep the warmth
With u anymore.

What's the point of life
If u don't have any friends
To share it with?
It's all over,
All of it.

No one's coming to calm me down,
And I'm not going to let them either.
I want to remember my closest friend...
But it's not easy,
If u have to leave them.

She will always be in my heart
She was an amazing friend to me,
She brought me so much joy
And happiness,
Even in the darkest of nights,...
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 Saukerl
Saukerl
Like I said, it was a dark and foggy night. I thought my eyes were deceiving me. I think I saw a Jew. This time around, there are practically no Jews. They are either in concentration camps- awaiting their death, of dead already. The Nazis are not being easy with the Jews. This Jew was covered with a black cloth, and he appeared to be standing over a cowering boy, twelve years old of age at least. I moved in closer, cautiously, with my Saumensch, and we were both suspicious. The Saumensch's eyes met mine. "Is that...a murder, Carls?" Matna, the Saumensch, was definitely suspicious. She never...
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I fought through the process,
And I was determined through it all.
I was brave and strong
And now I survived.

At first I was worried to death,
When the doctor zei that I had cancer.
I stayed strong
Cuz I knew that my family and vrienden
Would care for me,
And spread the word
So I would survive.

My vrienden and I
Were always supportive of me,
And we could talk for hours,
Playing on our DSes,
Talking about Legos
Like great vrienden ever should.

Later, I was cancer-free
And I celebrated
We did everything great
It helped me cheer up.

I found out
That many people have cancer
Not only me..
And I'm...
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posted by wantadog
Chapter 3


Juliet muffled her scream as she saw what was standing on the other side of the door. It was Phil, but not any Phil she had ever seen. Phil’s skin was black and bubbling, steam was being emitted from what used to be his skin, his pupils were gone, and he was giving off an awful odor, even worse than the cigarettes. He wasn’t looking her way so she dived behind the bar. “Oh my god, oh my god, OH MY GOD!” She clamped her mouth shut as her whispering rose to a shout. There was a grunt from the other side of the door and she heard a rattling noise as he beat on the door, trying...
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baby i want u so bad but idk if u want me to i think about u everyday wen im around u i feel soo veilig feel like no harm can be done to me wen ur here there the rain disappears to a bright yellow sun

[chorus]
wen ur with me i feel like were the stars lighting up the night sky were burning up inside i wanna make u mine u are the spark that ignites inside of me

youve been there for me for as long as i can remember now its time for me to be there for u and tell u how i trully and i hope u feel the same just dont want to let u go

[chorus]
wen ur with me i feel like were the stars...
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posted by hgfan5602
Together, at last,
We sing in unison,
As the eagles zoom past us,
Symbolizing true freedom now.

We are together,
Not just our country,
But all the countries of the universe,
Syria, China, Germany,
Russia, Canada, Brazil,
And, of course, the United States.

I have never experienced
Such an amazing feeling
In my whole life,
As the soldiers of the universe
March past,
We are in utmost glory.

The unity of the universe,
We behold right now.
Never again, we shall quarrel,
Fighting with our steel rifles.

We will be free,
Not just blacks,
But all of us,
Together, at last.

We will be equal,
Women and men,
And we shall work together,...
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posted by hgfan5602
We are going separate ways.
We must leave each other,
Though I regret it,
There is nothing either of us
Can do.

We are going separate ways.
The bright light shines in our futures,
For the separate ways we go
Are the best for each of us.

We must leave for the good of it,
Though I don't want to,
And I know u don't either.
But it is important that we do.

It is never easy
Doing what we do the worst,
Leaving each other,
And the thoughts that we are...
Best friends...leaving each other...

We must go our separate ways.
For our own good.
And we pray that one day...
We will meet each other again.
And we will.