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posted by alicia386
Chapter Nine: Escape Artist Can Escape But A Group Of Students Can't Even Escape From Their School

      Everyone was ready for the escape plan the volgende night. If it was up to me we would have had everything ready within an uur but tracking teacher schedules was harder then it looked. We were all set and ready to take off that night. I had learned that the school kept two emergency vans in the back. I nabbed the keys from the office when no one was around. I wonder how long it will take them to notice that a set of keys are missing. It was about midnight when our team assembled. Everyone was ready to go. Charles had to tag along since he had his license and had meer experienced. Even though Raven concluded that Darrell was only here because I wanted him around. She argued that Charles of her could drive and that they technically didn't need him.
      "Is everyone ready?" I asked. It was decided that Darrell and Charles would go to the boys dorm and sneak out through the back door of the dorm Lounge. They would be able to reach the vans and come gather Courtney and I door the office. Raven had chosen the worse job and that was to create a diversion so when we started the engine no one could hear it. Raven would have to pull the brand alarm and then dash towards the nearest exit and towards the wood where we would be waiting. "Then let's go." 
     Charles and Darrell were already off in the other direction. Courtney and I creeped to the office hoping the other teachers would be in bed but, of course, our luck wasn't that dependable. The secretary, Mr. Dasher, was sitting at his bureau typing. We needed to kruis the office into the back door of our plan wouldn't work. 
      "What are we going to do?" hiss-whispered Courtney as we squatted to the ground.
      "If we're lucky," which is something we shouldn't be counting on at the moment. "then Raven's diversion will happen soon and we won't have to do anything." I zei to her. 
      "Raven isn't suppose to pull the alarm until she hears the engine roaring," whispered Courtney. Courtney is a bundle of chatter but when the time comes she can be really helpful to the nerves. There weren't any signs of worrying of nervousness which was something I should learning from her. Unlike me, she has been going to a top-notch school where they teach u everything.
      "Then let's create our own diversion," I said. It was risky. This operation was risky. This school spent millions of dollars on security. In the dark corners are guard lurking around. Security systems are installed to not only keep enemies out but to keep u in. If u just step. He entrance door then u just sent off millions of signals to weapons that are set up to shoot. u had to be carefully. I had disabled some but disabling all would sends off warning signs to the staff.
      In moments, Courtney and I were pulling brand alarms and setting off numerous of alarms. Mr. Dasher leaped from his chair and searched the hallways. We were cunning enough to hide in a nearby corner where he wouldn't find us. We were under the stairwell. 
      "Look," zei Courtney. "There is a small door here. Obviously, a door is not suppose to be under the stairwell. Even though every ounce of me wanted to investigate, I had a mission to do. 
      "Come one Court, we have to finish this before he comes back." She sighed as we rushed off to the back door of the office. Everything was going smoothly until we arrived at the busje, van parked outside.
      A man in all black out a sack over Courtney and me. Before my survivor skills could kick in, he threw us into the busje, van we drove off. He was much stronger then he looked. He had a black ski mask over his face. In the car in a flash, we were off. My initial instinct was to throw a few punches but he ripped the mask off of his face.
      "Before u kill me, hear me out," he begged. Courtney and I was free from the sack and was able to see the concern on his face. 
      "What the heck are u thinking!" screamed Courtney. "Are u mentally retarded? Do u not know that sacking people on your side is insane?"
      "I'm sorry," he said. "Some guys were coming and I had to cover your faces before they realized who McKenna was. They seemed like some average criminals just looking for an adrenaline rush and if they realized who u were well, it could stir up some up some trouble."
      "Where is Charles and Raven?" I questioned.
      "They took the other van," he replied.
      "That was not apart of the plan," zei Courtney.
      "That was the back up plan just in case trouble came," zei Derek. "There were some much worse things happening before u came."
      "Like what," I zei tense.
      Darrell made a sudden jerk off the road and onto a cobblestone path. "Someone's following us."
posted by alicia386
Wednesday

First dag of summer and I'm already bored. I'm not bored enough to want to back to school. I'm just lonely bored. L. J called me several times this morning wondering if I was okay and if I wanted to go some place with him. I kindly rejected him. If it wasn't Jennifer of Tammie calling then I don't want to hear. Velvet signed me up book club thing. I do like to read boeken and she thought that maybe I could meet some new vrienden that have something in common with me. I think she is full of baloney. Velvet made me promise to go to the first meeting tomorrow. I don't know. We'll see how my mood is door tomorrow.
After much debate, I have decided to try my hand at writing a mystery novel. I've always loved mysteries, especially the original "Sherlock Holmes" stories, and shows like "Monk" and "Twin Peaks". The summary for the story I'm writing is in the in the section below. If u like the idea, let me know, because I'm really excited for the story!
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Summary:School's out and fifteen jaar old Harold McCormick is headed for his annual summer getaway at Science Camp, but when an accident occurs, Harold is detirmened to prove it is murder, despite the doubt of the police and everyone around him believing otherwise, and in order to save the camp, Harold must find someone who believes him, crack the case, and bring the culprit to justice before he strikes again.
I got dressed and slipped my jas with badge on and went down the hall. And then someone bumped into me. hallo watch where you’re going! “Sorry u Agent Montezz?” Yes who are you?

“Doesn’t matter Kyle zei for u to meet him in the shooting arena.” Where is that? “Take this hall straight down then make a right u will see a stair well go all the way down then make a left first door on your right.” Thank you.

He walked away then leaving me alone in an empty hallway. I followed the guy directions and stepped into a combat arena compete with targets bows, arrows, guns, and many...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Twelve: Small Rooms Makes for No Escapes

      Their headquarters was nothing meer then a room with monitors everywhere. They had enough in the budget to get a bigger space and tons meer gadgets, they just chose not to. Some of the monitors showed different aantal keer bekeken of the outside building. One monitor was tonen a desert somewhere in Africa. It is odd how they got one out there and why they have he out there. I didn't ask questions. I wanted to appear as if I knew everything about everything in the room. Marlo wasn't going to get the best of me. 
      Darrell stayed door my side...
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posted by IlovePatch97
Sorry it took so long, school is crazy. i hope this makes up for it.
don't forget to commentaar :D


Chapter 6




“Wait! Wait!” I said, needing a moment of processing. “This is real? I’m not dreaming, I’m not hallucinating and this isn’t an extremely well executed prank?”
“No Alana I’m sorry to say but this is real, unbelievable, but real” Chris replied. I turned to look at Patricia, her face unchanged like stone.
“So then what are we going to do? Are u bringing me to this Zerokenum guy so he can cut out my heart!?” I exclaimed in sudden alarm. I didn’t think Chris of Patricia...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
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    Iris
    It felt like being hit in the gut, I just couldn’t believe it. Not saying I’m bossy of anything, but I didn’t want to walk alone in a deserted park, but I did anyway.
    What I was not ready for, however, was the real pain in my stomach when I was pushed to the ground, hitting my fragile head in the process. Ready to let people hear my screams all the way from China, I turned around, and was startled to see a black thing passing us, flying on the wind.
    I knew going...
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Orion woke up with a dark black aura slowly disappearing from his body. Libra hobbled into the room and saw Orion quickly waking up," Orion your up I have been waiting for hours, now quickly outside," he zei hurriedly as he hobbled out through the other door that lead outside into a small arena. Orion stood up feeling fresh and powerful and ran through the door into the arena. Libra stood looking younger than he actually was at the other side, wand writhing about in his hand ready for a fight," come on Orion dont be afraid," Libra shouted out. So Orion stepped into his cirkel and drew his...
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posted by Dhampires
The most beautiful creature is the most deciving creature. Foul, cruelness, and haterid are the only things that makes it's hart-, hart whole. The rest is pit of darkness not one hearty emotion lurks in it's body, it feeds off fear- the fear of it's prey.
It was only a few nights eariler that she wore an white silk ballgown to the Ball-wearing matching gloves that came just above the wrist and glass heels. She'd had that beautiful blond hair flowing behind her back, her crystal blue eyes showed off her hair very well and her rosey lips placed together her face perfectly-not to mention her slim...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Three: New School, New Worries

      "You're lying," I zei but then again, who would lie about something like this. "My father would have told me if he was in danger. We have a strong relationship."
      "That maybe, but would he really want u to worry when your spy exams are coming up? Would he want to add meer to your plate of stress?" Darrell raised one eyebrow for my response but he didn't need one. He already knew what I was going to say.
      "You have a point but," I said. "What is the school going to do about it? Surely, they wouldn't let one of the most top, boven notch...
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posted by 1999jacko
Ron was waiting outside the school building for the MI6 agent that was being sent for him. A small, black car turned round the corner, it slowed to a stop in front of him, the door slowly opened an instead of the small agent the commenter had told him would come 3 men in odd black suits, white ties and black sunglasses stepped out and shoved a hoofdkussen, kussen case over his head, blocking his line of vision so he couldn't see what happened after that but he felt the smash of a cricket bat against his head while being roughly pushed into the back zitplaats, stoel of a car. Slowly his head started to hurt a lot and...
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just a warning every other chapter will be dark with a murder happening in almost all of them so if u don't like dark stuff don't read this one

Jameson was rushing around the room his eyes blood shot with tiredness, he had received the results of the prints hours geleden and had been working on it for the whole night. And when he had discovered who the killer and his little gang were he had instantly knew he was screwed, but tried to type it up so hopefully chief detective James would discover it and start arresting the people as soon as he was killed. When he finished his little message to James...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy
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Alex
    “Are u okay?!” I asked as I rushed to Zaria and Iris.
    “Somewhat,” Iris zei giving me a shaky smile, while Zaria replied. “Define okay.”
    I helped them out of the water, they were soaked, and kept on slipping. Which led me to fall into the water.
    “Sorry,” Iris said, looking at my now wet clothes sorrowfully.
    “It’s okay let’s just get out of here.” I said, pulling them toward the ground.
    “Wait!”...
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posted by 1999jacko
Dark Fantasy(I think)

Drake and Sam stood at the edge of the road waiting for the cars to stop zooming past. mannetjeseend, drake was starting to get really impatient so she started to shout," oh come on! how long does it take for us to be able to kruis the road," his face going red and all the while Sam was laughing his head of at the rants that mannetjeseend, drake was going on about until finally he said," come on man lets just go under the bridge it may be the long way but its easily quicker than this, so come on." Sam had already started jogging towards the entrance to the little path that lead under the bridge door the...
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Through Her Eyes... Chapter One- Life No More?





Alice could still fell the warm breeze glide across her skin and through her blonde streaked aardbei red hair, making it fly every which way. She remembered looking over at he father with his warm brown eyes and brown hair a shade litter then his eyes. His nose big as every. She would always make fun of him for that nose. She remembered leaning in to give him a warm kiss on the check and saying, “I love u dad.” He looked down at her and said,”I love u two.” As he turned into the volgende road, She gasp. He slams on the breaks but it’s...
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Chapter (13):
"So, are we gonna walk home pagina of is Noah gonna pick us up?" asked Leo, as they descended the school steps, "I'm calling Noah" replied Abbie, "Okay then" zei Leo, he shoved his hands in his pockets and started rocking back and forth on his heals, Abbie fumbled her messenger bag for her phone,and found it just before she could dial Noah's number, it vibrated lightly signaling that she had a text, "I got a text" zei Abbie, "Who's it from?" asked Leo, "Noah" replied Abbie after she'd checked the name, she read the text, 'Stay where u are I'm picking u and Leo up, From ur 'Also...
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posted by hgfan5602
Run now. Run fast. We all have a place that we desire to be, and that place is not home pagina for me, unlike most people. My parents have started to torture me since last December, and I have had enough of it. My hart-, hart is racing, and I know I have to get away now. I can't take any meer of this. My parents have been holding me in my room, locking me under chain and key, beating my head against the wall. Not your normal kid, the kid who thinks doing homework is torture. This is what I call real torture. Yesterday past midnight, I was thinking, "Why do my parents do this to me? Why? Why? I'm definitely...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the review!!! :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 9
    The Seven Deadly Sins
    Greed, gluttony, envy, lust, sloth, pride, and wrath. The seven deadly sins, we all know what they are. Commit one and u are sinner, commit all, u are very bad sinner.
    If I have ever believed I committed one it would be wrath, I have a good temper, believe me, but when it is broken. When I’ve met my breaking point, that is when I am at my most unpleasant.
    In the bible, it tells us about...
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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
I dropped the bat and ran the two steps to his side. “Brett, what happened?! Who did this to you?!” His leg looked like it was torn apart. The skin was hanging in shreds, there was blood everywhere and I could see the bone. His arm was hanging at an odd angle and his face was covered with claw marks and a deep gash could be seen above his right eye. I grabbed some cloths from beside me and turned on the sink. Wetting one of the cloths, I began to clear some of the blood away. Brett gasped in pain. “I'm sorry. I should take u to the hospital.” I was getting up to leave the room to...
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posted by kitty190123
One day, a girl was walking through a forest. Her name was Rachel, and she was looking for a friend. Her and her friend, Misty, were camping, but then Misty disappeared. She then saw a dim white light. She walked towards it and saw a face, a body, arms, and legs. It was wearing a white dress. u know, when she thought about it, it looked a bit like... "AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!"

That's all for chapter 1! Please tell me if it needs to be a little longer and feel free to post your vragen and comments!
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