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((Dear Reader,
This work is the culmination of eight months of roleplaying. u can find the original roleplay at link. I would like to take this opportunity to name the fabulous people who gave new life to these characters.
Fred Weasley - hetalia4thewin
George Weasley - hetalia4thewin and peterpansbff
Hermione Granger - Hermione-Fan361
Neville Longbottom - Hermione-Fan361
Ron Weasley - peppergirl30
Luna Lovegood - peppergirl30
Ginny Weasley - Kgirllovespasta
Cho Chang - Kgirllovespasta
Albus Dumbledore - Spainofhetalia
Sirius Black - Spainofhetalia
Lee Jordan - Hermione-Fan361
Severus Snape - wa391488
Draco Malfoy - wa391488
Harry Potter - dragonsmemory
Lord Voldemort - dragonsmemory
Narcissa Malfoy (nee Black) - thejokersgirl13
Dean Thomas - DeanThomas
Bellatrix Lestrange (nee Black) - Brooklyn_Helena
Astoria Greengrass - Brooklyn_Helena
Seamus Finnigan - HarryPotter1997
These are all the characters that appear so far. Please take a moment to thank them. And remember, this is a fanfiction of Harry's seventh year. There will be references to the vorige six years, so try to be familiar with the first six books.
As of yet, this fanfiction is nowhere near complete. In fact, this tale promises to be the longest Harry Potter fanfiction yet written, so be patient. There are to be seven main movements of the book. The first strts here and ends with Harry's descision to go Horcrux hunting.
No matter how much this story sounds like a real Harry Potter book, it is, in fact, a fanfiction and should be treated as such. I do not write this tale for profit of any kind, nor does J.K. Rowling recieve any profit from this fanfiction.
Thank you.))
CHAPTER ONE
PAIRING OFF


It was a very normal sort of dag at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Well, it was as normal as it would ever get while Harry Potter attended the school. Everywhere in the castle, the students were acting like normal students. Down in the dungeons, Fred and George Weasley, master pranksters, set off a Dungbomb, effectively canceling classes in that part of the castle.
    Farther away, Hermione Granger, the brightest witch of her age, was struggling to get a better grip on her books. “Please. Don’t. Fall,” she said, as the boeken spilled out of her arms and fell everywhere.
    Just then, Ron Weasley came along. “Hermione, here. I’ll help u pick your boeken up,” he said, kneeling on the cold stone floor to do just that.
    “Thanks, Ron,” Hermione replied, smiling up at him. They finished picking up her dozen of so books.
    “Hermione...I have to go study for a Charms exam...would u help me?” Ron asked.
    Ron wanting to study? That’s new, Hermione thought to herself. Out loud, she said, “Sure, Ron. We can go to that one quiet corner in the library. Nobody will bug us there.” She then turned to Harry. “I have a lot of studying to do.” And without waiting for Harry's response, she dragged Ron to the library, shouting, “C’mon, Ron!”

    Meanwhile, in another part of the castle, Neville Longbottom was working on a Potions essay. He had never been any good at Potions, especially considering the teacher. Severus Snape was the most evil teacher u could ever have...unless u were a Slytherin.
    “Please let me get a good grade!” Neville muttered to the parchment as he wrote furiously. After just a few minutes, he got stuck. “I hate this class!” he shouted, throwing his quill across the room in frustration. Just as Neville began thinking some rather nasty things about his Potions professor, who should arrive but Luna Lovegood.
    “Neville, calm down, you’ll upset the Wrackspurts around your head…” she zei in her usual dreamy voice. That made Neville downright nervous.
    “W-what? Wrackspurts?” he stammered.
    “Oh they're little invisible creatures that float up into your ears and make your brain go fuzzy,” she explained.
    “Oh. Um, okay. Thanks for the warning…?” Neville replied warily.
    “I can toon some of them to you, I kept some in a jar when I found them!” Luna zei excitedly.
    “Really? Let me see!”
    “Okay! I’ll go get it! It’s in my romp, kofferbak up in the dormitory!” As Luna ran up to Ravenclaw Tower, Neville sat in a chair, waiting for her.

    Off in that quiet corner of the library, something strange was happening. Hermione was talking about Charms…and Ron didn't really care. He only cared about how her hair bounced whenever she moved her head up from the paper she was hunched over, of the fact that her eyes glowed whenever she talked about anything academic. Before Ron even knew what he was doing, he leaned into Hermione and kissed her.
    Hermione was surprised, to say the least. “R-Ron…I didn’t know u liked me like that…” She wrapped him in a hug and kissed him back.
    “Well I’ve wanted to do that since seconde year…” Hermione blushed and laid her head on Ron’s chest, her arms still around him.
    Just then, who should appear but Fred and George. They silently crept up behind the pair.
    “Hello there little brother,” they chorused.
    Ron continued holding Hermione in his arms. It felt good, but, as usual, he couldn’t have his moment. “Bloody hell, Fred, George, what are u doing here?” he asked. Hermione shot them a look.
    “What aren’t we doing,” they chorused again.
    “We just wanted to see our little brother,” George zei teasingly.
    “Hermione, eh? She doesn’t call u Won-Won too, does she?” Fred asked.
    “No, Fred, for your information, she does not call me Won-Won.” Ron hugged Hermione a bit closer to his chest. “And I think she would like u two to leave.”
    The twins each put a hand on Hermione’s shoulders. “You don’t want us to leave—“ George said.
    “—right, Hermione?” Fred finished.
    “Yes, I kind of do guys, sorry,” Hermione replied. She then buried her face in Ron’s T-shirt.
    “All right then,” they sighed. They then left the couple alone, and hid in a deserted corridor, watching people on the Marauder’s Map. They had “borrowed” the map from Harry, who still probably didn’t realize it was missing.

    Up in Ravenclaw Tower, Luna searched through her trunk, only to find that her jar had been stolen. She didn’t want to disappoint Neville…but she had to. She hurried back and found Neville sitting in the same chair as before. “I'm so sorry Neville, but…I think someone stal my jar of Wrackspurts…I didn't mean to waste your time waiting for me.”
    “It’s all right, Luna. I still believe you,” Neville replied.
    “Thanks, Neville. You’re one of the best vrienden I ever had.”
    Neville blushed. “Y-You’re welcome,” he stammered. Luna then hugged him.
    “Thanks for being a good friend to me,” she said. Neville hugged her back, smiling.
    “Sure thing, Luna.”

    Back in the library, Ron and Hermione breathed a sigh of relief.
    “Thank goodness they left, I was beginning to worry they were never going to leave…” Ron said.
    “Same here,” Hermione replied, looking up at him with a smile.
    “Hermione, maybe we should go. The bibliotheek might be closing soon…” Ron trailed off. If it was indeed late enough for the bibliotheek to close, then they would face not only the wrath of Madam Pince, the librarian, but also that of Argus Filch, the caretaker, and his skeletal gray cat, Mrs. Norris.
    “Where do u want to go?” Hermione asked.

    In a corridor hidden behind a tapestry of a knight slaying a dragon, the twins watched Ron and Hermione’s labeled dots carefully.
    “They’re on the move!” Fred zei loudly.
    George put his wand tip on the map. “Mischief managed,” he whispered. The map began to wipe itself clean. He folded it up and stuffed it in a pocket. They’d slip it back in Harry’s romp, kofferbak later. After all, he was the only descendant of the Marauders. The son of Prongs, to be exact. Together, they emerged from behind the tapestry, nearly bowling over their younger sister, Ginny.
    “Hello, little sis,” they chorused.
    “Hi,” Ginny zei timidly. Even though she was going out with Harry Potter, that didn’t mean she wasn’t still shy around other people. She quickly walked away from the twins, hoping to get very far away before they could think of a prank to pull on her.

    “Neville…am I embarrassing you?” Luna wondered. Just then, Ginny walked in.
    “Hi Luna,” she zei shyly. Even though they were around the same age and had been in Dumbledore’s Army together, she was still nervous around the strange girl.
    “No. Oh, hallo Ginny,” Neville zei noticing the redhead.
    “Hello Ginny! Have u seen my jar of Wrackspurts?” Luna asked.
    “How are u Luna? And, no, sorry, I haven’t seen it. Hi Neville,” Ginny said. She waved to Harry, who was just coming down the corridor. “Hi Harry,” she called, still shy. Apparently, going out with him didn’t change that at all. Then again, he was probably the most famous wizard in the world, and was incredibly handsome (in her opinion). Of course she would be shy.
    Harry returned her wave, then continued on his way.

    “Maybe we could go…into the Forbidden Forest?” Ron suggested, looking terrified at the very thought. He would never forget his first time going into the Forest at night. Back then, he and Harry had run into a group of acromantulas bent on eating them. Ron was mortally terrified of spiders, a feeling probably enhanced door that event.
    “What about the Room of Requirement?” Hermione offered. It was a bit safer than the Forest, and considerably meer private, as not many students knew about the room.
    “Sure…where do u think we could find it?” Ron racked his brains, trying to remember where it was.
    “You don’t remember?”
    “Hermione, I don’t remember most things. u know that…”
    She sighed. “Come on.” She dragged him to the seventh floor, just past the tapestry of Barnabas the Barmy being clubbed door trolls. She stopped in front of the blank stretch of wall. “Now, close your eyes and imagine the kind of room u want, and it will appear,” she instructed.
* * *
    Fred and George were hiding nearby, listening in on the conversation.
    “He doesn’t have a good memory, eh?” George said.
    “Looks like we’ll have to do a better job of keeping those Bludgers from hitting his head,” Fred replied.
    “No, I think it was Errol’s fault.”
    “How so?”
    “He keeps hitting Ron when he lands, the ruddy bird.”

    If Ron was younger, he would have thought of a room that would give him endless sweets and pudding. But now that he was older, he thought of a kind of place that would let him be alone with Hermione for as long as he wanted without any interruptions from anyone. He opened his eyes and saw a door.
    Hermione took Ron’s hand and opened the door. “Oh, Ron!” she exclaimed. The room was a calming blue, with plush white carpet. The couches were the same color as the walls, and there were bookshelves in multiple places around the room. Hermione hugged Ron tightly as the door closed behind them.

    Having left the seventh floor, Fred and George were in the midst of planning another prank. They had with them another Dungbomb, one they were about to set off. Just then, Professor Dumbledore, headmaster of the school, walked by.
    “Hello, Professor,” the twins chorused respectfully, hiding the Dungbomb behind their backs.

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posted by alicia386
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This is a modern dag remake of the classic Cinderella. I hope u guys like it.

Chapter One - Being Average

I thought today was going to be a cloudy, grey day. It would match my mood, but, as usual, it was sunny and blue. For one day, can it not be so perfect and beautiful. I am positive that the weather truly despises me. Everyone despises me.

Except for my best friend, Carlie. She must be the only one besides my mom who loves me and cares for me. She has been with me since I moved out here in Georgia. She must be the only one who can imagine what I'm going through. We both lost our mothers....
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This an except from the artikel How to Get Out of Your Own Way When Writing. This is advice from an accomplished auteur named Elizabeth Knox

"I prefer reading, and writing, in the third person – “he walked along the shore,” rather than the first person, “I walked along the shore.” Many novice writers start writing in the first person. There are some very good reasons for that. For a start, we’re all used to telling stories with ourselves at their centers. Also, using a first-person voice can be a kind of playacting. They narrator is a “not-you” you’re pretending to be.

Why I...
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posted by alicia386
Thursday

Kyle is the worst boyfriend ever! The party ended with me in a coma. Apparently there was alcohol in my drink. I had an overdose and it almost killed me. Kyle swears he didn't do it. I want to believe him. I really want to. I know Kyle had done it because I know saw him poor something in there. At first I thought it was water of something to make it sweeter. It wasn't water. I couldn't go to school today because they were pumping the alcohol out of my system of something. I'm not entirely sure what happened. All I know is that for a couple if minuten I was pronounced dead. My heartbeat soon started thumping again but I was in a coma. My parents were so worried. I thought for sure they would be dead from shock. Kyle is banned from coming near me. My dad implied that rule. My mom kept crying whenever she talked to me. All she could manage to get out of her mouth besides whimpers were muffled words. I don't think I'll be seeing Kyle for a while now.
posted by BlondLionEzel
Chapter 1

The volgende day, a knock came on the door.

"Is it them??" Lucy asked frantically.

Emily went to the door, and answered it.

"Hello!" Nick Wolfe, a half wolf male zei to the surprised Emily.

"Who are you???" Emily asked Nick Wolfe in a surprised manner.

"Well...I am Nick Wolfe, I go to every Hotel and free it's captured mutants" Nick answered in a very egotistical way.

"Oh?" Emily asked curiously.

"Is Nick Wolfe the god?" Lucy asked her mother.

"Well..." Emily tried to respond. Emily had felt that it would be right to talk to Nick Wolfe first, and then tell Lucy.

"You can think of me as whatever...
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posted by alicia386
What a change Such a dramatic change

Once I was small and ignored

Now I'm called when their bored

of looking for a friend

To talk to till the end I use to be invisible

Now I feel invincible

They can't hurt me

Look at what I can be

This is new

Something almost true

That great feeling

Was somewhat appealing

But soon disappeared

Whenever I neared

Now I am small

No longer tall

Completely ignored

Always bored

It happened so fast Invisible in the past

Then became invincible

And immediately back to invisible

It changes everyday I don't know what to say

Maybe it won't stay the same

I'll be forever lame
posted by BlondLionEzel
Prologue

It is the jaar 2468, Half-Animal, Half Human beings have been captured and locked up in facilities called "Hotels". They are experimented on and live in small cages. But the mutants believed there would be a god who would bring them salvation. And in a place called Hotel 93, the legend would come true.

"Mommy...I'm really scared..." A young Half Snake Girl told her Half Snake Mother. She had roze hair, a green tail and brown eyes.

"I am too Lucy..." The Half Snake Mother told Lucy. This mother's name was Emily, she had blond hair and a Diamond Rattleback snake pattern tail, and green...
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posted by BlondLionEzel
Chapter 3

Nick was now adjusted to his life as Melanie's sex slave. Last Monday, Melanie pinched his nipples and got on top, boven of him. Today was different though.

"Nick...I was thinking..." Melanie asked Nick, "Do u want to go hardcore?".

"Hardcore? What do u mean?" Nick asked Melanie.

"Well...I'll toon you..." Melanie responded as she took off her shirt, causing Nick to blush.

"Do u like what u see?" Melanie asked Nick, noticing his blush.

"Yes I do..." Nick responded shyly.

"Good!" Melanie zei as she quickly took off her bra, revealing a pair of huge, green, D cup breasts.

"Oh my god..." Nick...
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posted by alicia386
Friday

L. J can make me so mad sometimes. Today he told me to stay away from Kyle. I asked him why and he zei that Kyle was not the guy I thought he was. I told him to elaborate but he just shrugged his shoulders. How dare he tell me to stay away from the cutest guy ever? Besides, we have like 7 days left in school before summer comes. I probably won't ever see Kyle again. I need to make my verplaats soon. Forget what L. J said. With the thought of L. J in my head, I walked up to Kyle and kissed him on the lips! Yes, I know that was wild and crazy and stupid. Trust me, the minuut I realized what...
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posted by alicia386
Sunday

My mom and dad are atheist so I don't have to go through the constant struggle of attending church once a week of those annoying pastor and church anniversaries. Today I decided to go to the mall with my vrienden Jennifer and L. J. The relationship between my two vrienden is a very complicated one. For starters, everyone thinks they hate each other. Then there are times when u think they are flirting. I doubt they are ever going to get back together, but it is fun to watch their famous disputes. Today they were talking about Kyle. Jennifer was saying how much she believes that Kyle is...
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posted by alicia386
May

Wednesday

This is obviously my first blog. I really don't know what to write about. Maybe I can start with some identification. Hello, my name is Laurie Bailey. This is my last jaar in middle school. I won't go into too much detail about my location because I don't want creepy men looking for me. Well, anyways, I guess that is a good first blog. My sister, Velvet, thought I should express my feelings so I don't go walking around with unsettled feelings. I think she might believe I am going to strangle someone because I'm angry. Velvet bought me a journal and I was like blogging is so much...
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posted by sadiebugz00
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ROAD TRIP
Derek’s Perspective


A while later I call Jesse over so we could discuss Carter’s situation.
Jesse is quite attractive; she has ocean-blue eyes and long, flowy, bleached blonde hair, and looks much like a Barbie. However, she can be very fickle, so if I use the correct wording I could be able to keep Carter. But if she’s in one of her “moods” there’s no way on Earth that I’ll be able to keep him.
I hear a pounding hard knocking on my door.
Great… I think. She’s in a “mood”. I hurtle towards the door to keep her from waiting. She grimaces at Carter once she sees...
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posted by sadiebugz00
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TORN
Derek’s Perspective


I look down at the little rascal, soundly sleeping on the floor. I look around my extremely messy room with dirty clothes all over the floor. Carter happens to be sleeping on a few shirts of mine. My eggshell colored walls, which used to be white, are clearly covered in grime. There is a strong stench of wet dog, pizza, and some kind of rotting food from underneath my bed. What a decision… I think to myself. I can’t believe that Jesse is making me get rid of him… I bend down to get Bailey, Carter’s old stuffed rabbit, so I can keep SOMETHING of his to remind...
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posted by alicia386
"Oh god," groaned Luca Edgewood. He glanced at his watch,. It was already past 8am. He dropped his skateboard, got on it, and rode away down the busy streets of Brunswick.

"Be careful today!" His mother shouted at him through the screen door, but he was to far to hear her warning. Lucas's mom was very suoerstitious woman who believed in witches, ghosts other supernatural creatures. Luca thought all of this happened when his dad left.

Luca pushed back hard as he could with his right foot. He was already late. With all of his focus, he was barely able to dodge pedestrians, seeding cars, and occasionally,...
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Prologue

The sun is just minuten from rising and the night is growing lighter. An alter made entirely of blue marble, jade, and amethyst is illuminated. Two tiny babies lie on top, boven writhing and screaming in discomfort. They are naked, only a few days old and the chill of the stone slowly seeping into their bones will surely kill them. The larger of the two will not stop screaming while her twin just sobs quietly.
Their frail mother stands a few feet away determined to finish what she came here to do but her eyes are bloodshot and red raw from her constant tears. But she is not alone. Her husband...
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posted by juliet98
In the jaar 4125 the Earth was still turning on itself. Apparently everything was the same as it was two thausand years ago. But it wasn't so. The democracy we got fighting was distroied door a man. After 15 years of wars, in 4025 Cyrus defeated free people and he established the tyranny. The whole world was controlled and the freedom dind't exist anymore. Everyone lost trust in everything, in love, in courage, in God. Most of people didn't know that there was a prophecy. It zei that the humanity had to pass through a century of pain and fear to realize how important freedom was. But then in...
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Prologue
She never knew she had an uncle until her parents died. It’s strange how- sometimes in life when u lose important people in your life u gain some more.
Her mother and father died in a house fire. No one knew how it started except the one daughter who managed to survive.
But she was in no state to tell. She suffered mild burns but her mind suffered worst of all. She never spoke again.
She was kept in hospital for six months but eventually she was packed off to her uncle Scipio. She was thirteen years old and many zei it was a crime sending a child off to such an evil man as Scipio....
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posted by riehlemarie
Once there lived a normal middle school girl, of so she thought.She had long brown hair, green with a hin of blue eyes. Her name is Elizabeth. Elizabeth's mother, Rebecca, has blond hair, and blue eyes. Elizabeth always pondered about it.

When Elizabeth was 5 years old she asked her mom about it. Rebecca had to think fast so she made up a little story for Elizabeth so she wouldn't want to ask about it. So Rebecca told Elizabeth "Lizzie", [ Elizabeth's nickname] " u look just like your daddy, but daddy left us." Rebecca thought Elizabeth would be fine without knowing the truth, that Elizabeth...
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posted by BlondLionEzel
Chapter 3

Lawrence and The Dragon Princess now were thinking about their relationship, as they heard screaming outside.

"How dare u take Lawrence away from people!" Adele yelled as the Townsfolk started to break down the walls!

The Dragon Princess had been taught Love, Compassion, and other nice things while with Lawrence, but now, she had just seen red. She attacked the Townsfolk.

"I shall destroy you, Bloodthirsty Beast!" Adele roared as she slashed the Dragon Princess!

"No..." The Dragon Princess thought about her doom, and that she would really never have true love.

"Now...to finish what i...
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Zoë
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I stormed down the steps, into the closest empty classroom, and over to someone’s seat. Then I sat down, buried my face in my hands, and sobbed.
    “Why are u such a jerk, Ash?” I yelled at the ceiling. There was a faint echo.
    I jumped to my feet. The chair crashed to the ground. I kicked it as hard as I could.
    “You okay?” someone asked.
    I jumped, spun around. Lisa.
    “I’m fine,” I...
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posted by Bluekait
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Avery ran into the woods. Without looking back, she knew she was being chased door an un-natural force. She ran to the hut and locked the door behind her. Avery heard a loud thud. "Phew," she sighed. She climbed into bed and slept. The volgende morning, she was found dead at a gruesome sight.
Her head was found outside and the rest of Avery Wilson was nowhere to be found.
Her vrienden followed her steps to see...
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