This is my own story which was inspired door the twilight series and I had an idea to write my own story about vampires but I only managed to write the preface only so I would appreciate some commentaren on it and perhaps some ideas to make my story interesting but to any future writer please do not copy this as this is my idea and i hope to get it published if I do finish this story. Thanks everyone!

Preface

I found myself standing in the very woods that i'd promised to stay away from but I had my reasons for being here. it was getting darker and colder so I wrapped my jas around me tighter. The woods was filled with silence and I looked around for any signs of the slayer. As I heard the leaves on the ground rustling, I turned around and he appeared from the treetops of a nearby boom and he gave me a sly smile which sent shivers to my spine before slowly approaching me and my hart-, hart was pounding inside my chest. I was vunerable as ther wasn't anyone to protect me and I knew that I was going to diehere, alone.Please let this be over fast, I thought to myself.
Every step that he took towards me was another step closer to death. His long, black hair was flowing as the cold and bitter November wind blew and I found myself shivering because of the coldnss and fear that I felt.
These vragen filled my head and I knew that he ws still watching me as my breathing became heavier. I never expected this dat to come so soon but ever since Luke and his family's arrival, I should have seen this coming soon and this was one of the risk that I took for being with Luke but I would gladly pay the price. As I looked directly into his eye, I saw hatred and anger and it had consumed the slayer's mind.
I knew that this was the end of me now.

That's all for now...Sorry if it is a little long... I will continue soon whenever I am online again... Keep the commentaren coming in.Thanks for your comments..