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This is the seconde book to my first short story "As the sun sets" This is a story about the life of Renesmee Carlie Cullen ( In her POV with some exceptions) now that she is a teenager!

I suggest reading my first book (as the sun sets), so u can better understand this one (Daylight) This will take place just where we left off in the first novel!

This chapter is small aswell because of school schedual, but starting volgende sunday - I will have a chapter up every sunday, Long, full length chapters. Ill be on everyweekday at 10:30 am est aswell


I'd like to first apologise to all of my fans. I havn't been writing lately because I havn't found time - of I got stuck, Just lots of reason. I used to be able to write 2 of three chapters in a matter of hours, now its hard to get one out.

But I wan't to thank All of those who have been messaging me. Thoose who have been saying they wan't the book to come back, they wan't to see the story, that they love me and that I inspire them.

All of u inspire me! You've inspired me to start writing again - So here it goes! Im going to be writing meer often now - All thanks to all of u <33


I would like to dedicate this chapter to my little cousin Megan, and to all of my fans <3
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Chapter 8


"MY MOTHER?" I asked in disbeife.

" I don't feel that way anymore - Not at all!"

He was anxiously running his words through - I didn't bother trying to listen to his reasoning. I can't tell whether im angry of .. She's my mother for heavens sake!

I guess I always knew somthing wasn't right, why the allaince with the wolves would start before i was born.

Now i see it was because they both shared one interest - My mother. And after I was born, this interest became me.

I faced jacob who was watching me wairily, almost regretting the decision to tell me. He sat quite still, holding his breath for a moment.

"Nessie please don't be mad, I know it's hard to understand but-"

"Jake" I sighed then smiled "It's okay - I'm not mad"

The last thing I need is to fight with Jacob. I guess now it's easier to understand why Alec is such a touchy subject to him. He doesn't want to lose out again, especially to a vampire.

But what scares me is the fact that it's different for us- I mean it's not like it was between my mother and him.

He let her go because he could, and i'm not confident that if it came to the point where I chose Alec (Which I wouldn't) that he would let me go without a fight.

He sat still for a moment - Debating wether of not i was lieing.

" Nessie .."

"Jacob, It's fine. We can't change the past - Anyways, It led u to me, right?"

He smiled and wrapped his arms around me. I was glad we weren't fighting. I never liked fighting with Jacob - It felt wrong.

The sun fell hot on my warm skin. It was a beautiful dag - I had Jacob, we were in a beautiful place..But somthing was missing..

That's when I remembered Elisabeth. I couldn't see her frolicing anymore - She had dissapeared. I quickly stood up, In fear.

Jacob suddenly turned urgent with me. He started examineing me..

"Renesmee, what's wrong, are u okay?"

I looked once meer for Elisabeth, but nothing. Brushing Jacob off I ran out into the field.

"I'm fine, It's Elisabeth! She isn't here!"

My hart-, hart beated heavily in my chest. I was in panic mode - You'd think that I would learn to keep a better eye on her! Oh no, Where is she!? I stood in the middle of the field looking around, but still no sign.

Jacob followed behind me, Trying to calm me down. He grabbed my hand, Holding me still.

"Renesmee, She can't be far. It's alright! u used to dissapear all the time too!"

I thought for a moment - But then returned back into panic. That was true, But whenever I went missing there was no Volturi trying to murder me!

I turned around to go back into the room, and notice somthing in my perphial vision. Suddenly I let out a gasp, it was Elisabeth!

She was facing the uithangbord standing still. She seemed expressionless, Like she was in shock.
I ran to her side, Jacob wasn't far behind.

I knelt down beside her.

"Elisabeth, Are u alright?"

I watched her - But not a flinch to my words.
I flashed an anxious glare at Jacob.

"Give her a minute" He whispered hopeful.

I turned back to her. Slowly, she started to speak,

"Renesmee, I saw her.."

I thought for a moment, who could she be talking about? Jane, maybe?

"Saw who?"

"The Woman from my dreams - I saw her , She went in"

Elisabeth pointed towards the door on the far east side.

Then I remembered A little while ago, Elisabeth had told me about this woman she kept dreaming about.

The woman was in her early twenties, She had perzik skin, bright blue eyes and her hair colour; Identical to Elisabeths.

I never thought much about it - I mean Everyone dreams about people. This could've been someone she saw on the straat , anyone.

Now this might be Elisabeth's only link to vrienden of family..

Suddenly Elisabeth Bursted into tears - I felt my stomach drop as soon as she did. I held her in my arms,

"Please! u have to help her" She cried.
posted by joe-edwardfan
Doesn't edward wants me like I want him? Why is he always cutting on me? I was taking advantage of my lonely time since edward can read my mind I cant think of anything and when I do he gets mad at me! God why is life so complicated! I was thinking of the dag that me and edward are getting married how happy were going to be ………………
When I saw edward standing volgende to the mirror frowning “what? I'm not happy u could read my mind! and when I think I'm alone and I could think about stuff that bothers u , your eavesdropping! God! What’s wrong with u cant u give me some privacy...
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posted by TwilightHearts
so, when i quoted that 'we continued blisfully into our small but perfect piece of forever' when i zei 'we' including Nessie, did it really mean forever. I was dithering over the vraag as there, infront of me and edward - Nessie on his back - stood Caius alone just 48 yards from the three of us - carlisle and esme were having a romantic break in the mountains, emmett and rosalie were 'breaking' their 6th house. jasper and alice were hunting...why hadnt alice seen this - oh god. Caius had a sharp grin across his chalky face as he removed a crystal ball from his pocket, he began rolling it...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
I opened my eyes, I saw the sun light coming from my window I smiled at the sunlight then I got up and took a douche and brushed my teeth ,I opened my closet , grabbed my skinny jeans and a light blue sleeveless overhemd, shirt ,Edwards favoriete color, i put on my cloths and went down stairs ,I looked strait to the keuken-, keuken I found Edward seating on the divan, bank with a newspaper in his hands when I walked down the stairs Edward was in front of me “wow u look amazing” “thank you” I smiled shyly he took the zitplaats, stoel out for me and sat in front of me “what do u want to do today?” “I don’t know,...
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 Alex
Alex
CHAPTER 5



I was hunting when i heard a scream coming from town.My mom was already runny so i started to run and jasper flew door me,gosh i was like an old lady
"dont please please"a girl zei then i finally cought up with jasper and mom she was standing in front of jasper Tj was on the ground with a young girl who was in a tang top, boven and jeans
"stop"mom said
"why should i,this is what we do?"he asked her in that tone that made me madd
"STOP IT KNOW TJ"i yelled at him he looked at me and looked scared and madd he was going to get it

"why alex this is what we do,what happened to us we used to love it that...
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posted by twilightGGlost
ok ppl i KNOW i havent written in a while....school ended and i started work...then i went away and then came back and then went away and now im gonna be aaway AGAIN for a couple of days...sorry i havent written and let my fans down...i will be working aagin and then school will start and then i will try to finish where i left off...thank u for the constant "please write meer messages" it shows ur support but i WILL NOT BE WRITING UNTIL MID-SEPTEMBER...so PlEaSe...i WILL go back to writing but not now cuz im VERY busy and dont have time to write...again thank u too ALL my fans and sorry i havent written sooner...heyyyyyy just_bella! luv ya my nerd-pirate-dork!...thanks everyone...ill write meer updates if i plan to write sooner! THANK U ALL! <3
The volgende morning was much meer relaxed. It was Monday, and Bella and I were driving to school. We were both in good spirits until a block away from the parking lot. That’s when I picked up on his scent. A werewolf was waiting in the Forks High School parking lot, and I had a pretty good idea about who it would be. I scanned the parking lot for thoughts, and found Jacob’s face in some of the students minds whom had passed him by. This would not be good.

“If I asked u to do something, would u trust me?” I asked Bella.

She looked at me carefully, and I knew she could sense the stress...
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posted by WritenOnTheSand
My hart-, hart pounds in my chest as I gaze at my palm. I feel like I want to take mine hand out of his but somehow I can't let go. His grasp on my hand gets tighter. This moment is just insane. I feel overwhelmed with commpasion and love for him though I barely even know him now.

"Laylia come on in and help me ste the tafel, tabel will you." I hear my grandmother say as she steps out the door step. I know she can see us because I hear no movement.

"Comming." I am able to mutter before I slip my hand out of his. Our eyes meet as I turn away. His glimmer in the porch lights.

While we head towards the...
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1) We never get to hear about Edward's bachelor party, and did Alice even plan a bachelorette party for Bella?

2) There was not enough character development for the Denali clan. I felt like they were just empty, filler-characters to give the Cullens allies later on in the book.

3) The story of the 'immortal children' was just randomly thrown into the story at the wrong time and felt out of place. I would have rather learnt meer about the Denali clan than their deceased mother.

4) I absolutely loved the wedding ceremony that Alice planned (Go Team Alice!) and in my head, the dresses, decorations,...
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posted by patrisha727
For certain comments, *winks* I thought who should be Bella's roommate. I hope u like the idea! ^_^


The dorm was larger than expected. My eyes were wide with shock. I'm not even sure this is a dorm! It could be as large as my living room back in Phoenix. There was one large white divan, bank in the center of the room in front of me facing the wall. On the uithangbord was a flat screen TV. I check the number on the dorm. Room 34. Yeah, I'm in the right room. Is this the type of dorm that everyone has? On the left side on the room was one twin-sized bed and on the right, was another twin sized bed. Under...
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Chapter 8- Big News

January 1920

I had been feeling very under the weather lately. I was surprised... Charles hadn't hurt me at all since his arrival home. To tell the truth everything about him had changed. He seemed to truly care about my well being. Something I'd never thought I would see. This morning I told him I wasn't feeling well. He made an appointment with the doctor. Again... this doctor was nothing like the one human being I truly longed to see. Dr. Cullen. My personal angel.

I sighed at the moment I was at the doctors office waiting for the results of my many tests. There were a...
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posted by Alice_Cullen_
Newcomer to the Twilight saga, Jamie Campbell-Bower, dished to MTV about why New Moon will have a PG-13 rating. It isn't all because of shirtless hunks Taylors Lautner and Robert Pattinson, but due to some good lookin' naked guys:

" 'We just all sit there, completely naked, for one scene," revealed "New Moon" actor Jamie Campbell Bower, talking about a racy moment that was added into the upcoming film. "Yeah, it's me, Michael Sheen and Christopher [Heyerdahl]; we just sit there, naked'...

In actuality, the scene has a fully clothed Carlisle visiting the Volturi in Italy, only to locate Aro, Caius and Marcus in a bathhouse. 'It's a full-body shot, and then Peter comes in, and it all gets a bit awkward,' Bower said. "[Carlisle] is clothed completely. They're bathing in sort of a Roman bath kind of thing.' "
posted by rose_emmett
Okay so I think the volgende 2 chapters are going to be in Renesmee's POV. I dont really know what else to say so ENJOY!



Renesmee's POV:

Since I still had an uur until I had to meet him at the strand I didnt rush. I walked slowly through the forest listening to the birds and admiring the trees and other plants. As I walked I came across my dad and Carlisle walking back towards the house. I didnt pay any attention to them, I just kept walking.

When I finally made it to the strand it was about 6:45 and I didnt think Jake would be there already but he was sitting on the sand facing the ocean.

As I walked...
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posted by TwilytCraze247
chapter one. unlawful death

It had been a warm dag for Rochester. But not warm enough for the sun to come out. I was in a happy and in an up right mood, but why wouldn’t I be, it was a couple days from marrying my fiancé Royce, he came from a wealthy, and respectable family my father had chosen for me. It was only right Royce and I was betrothed together. It was all about how the public viewed the family, I was told that from my mother at a very young age, I was also told that I would make the family very pleased when I was older as I would be the most beautiful girl in all of the world and...
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posted by rose_emmett
This story is about Renesmee and Jacob's relationship. Renesmee is full grown now and of course Jacob hasnt aged. There is still a treaty so the cullens cant go on la push. The cullens left to go to college and Jacob and Renesmee havent seen each other in a long time. This is my first story so it might not be all that good, but i still hope everyone will enjoy it.



Jacob's POV:

I walked down to the strand and found the old piece of drift wood Bella and I used to sit on. I sat there for a momment remembering all the things we had talked about, but then my mind traveled off to thinking about Renesmee....
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posted by WritenOnTheSand
As i look out one of the planes windows, my mind shifts from one thought to the next. My new life ahead of me is strangely different. But as hard as I try I can't be excited. Ever since my parents deaths two weeks ago, my joy has been taken away. I haven't even seen my grandparents in five years.

"We will be landing in just a few minutes. Please fasten your zitplaats, stoel belts. If u are returning home pagina then we welcome u back, if u are visiting we hope u enjoy your visit to Washington." I hear the captains voice boom throughout the plane.

Landing gives me all but joy. As I get off the plane...
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 THE hart-, hart IS SO EASILY BROKEN
THE HEART IS SO EASILY BROKEN
This is my own version , I hope u like it and please remember to commentaar
P.s. The beginning in italics is a flashback .





************Bella's POV**********

He took a deep breath and stared, unseeingly, at the ground for a long moment. His mouth twisted the tiniest bit. When he finally looked up, his eyes were different, harder-like the liquid goud had frozen solid.

"Bella, I dont want u to come with me."


He spoke the words slowly and precisely, his cold eyes on my face, watching as I absorbed what he was really saying.
There was a pause as I repeated the words in my head a few times, sifting...
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posted by renesmeblack
15. Problems
Jacob




Renesmee stared at me while I glared at Mark. He has been messing with this family for too long. I really wanted to tear him to shreds. Then the unexpected happened. I started to walk towards Mark when I was blown back door an invisible force.
"Don't. Touch. MARK!!!" Karrie screamed at me. I flew into Edward. Both of us were on the floor, and then we were in the air.
"Karrie, stop, you're killing them!" Renesmee yelled.
I heard myself choking and it looked like Edward was burning. But there was nothing to harm us. No flame was covering Edward, and nothing was around my throat.
"I'm......
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posted by team_robward
Chapter 14.
New Arrivals:

I just sat there for a couple of minutes, reading that last paragraph over and over I was truly mesmerized door it. I couldn’t really get over how sweet it was no one ever talked to me like this and he’s handwriting also helped.
“When you’ve finished reading the letter please write a reply, this is the third last reply we’ll be doing in class” Mrs Anderson announced. The class began groaning. The noise woke me from my dazzled state.
“Well u honestly didn’t think we were only writing to pen pals for the rest of the term did you?” Mrs Anderson asked the...
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Okay, Here's all 8 of my chapters + my two love stories.
[:

I've decided to make all my Twilight story chapters into a book like thing, So that's why i put them all together in this, I'm naming it "Breaking Twilight."
i was also thinking "Breaking Eclipse"
but I'm still thinking, but yeah.
I'm glad everyone likes my story! x]
theres meer coming!
-Yuki <3

Chapter One: The Game.

It was
Saturday evening, I was sitting on one of the couches in my new family’s house,
I was waiting for Edward to come back with Renesmee of as everyone else liked to call
her “Nessie” which I was getting used to door know....
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posted by renesmeblack
11. Casper's Fate
Renesmee




I couldn't help but cry. Aro has my baby, who may be one of the best weapons he's ever had, through his eyes. of he may be used as bait to kidnap the rest of us. Casper was going to live as part of the Volturi. Mark paced in the hall, trying to find where Casper was. Jacob had broken at least ten water glasses when he got a drink.
Now I was curious what he was looking for in the fridge. He came back with two bottles of formula.
"We have to feed the kids," he explained. Karrie rushed up to him and took the roze bottle from his hand. After one sip, she threw the bottle...
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