Twilight Series Article: My Breaking Dawn Review

3

posted by TotallyMe105

Ok this is my first artikel ever on here so go easy on me.
For my first artikel I dacided to review Breaking Dawn since I have strong opinions on the book andso do most of u guys.sooo without further of do....

"Breaking Dawn Review"

Good Things:
1.)Personally I thought the wedding was beautifully portrayed and the way I imagined it and Bella finally stopped whining about Jacob long enough tosay "I Do" to Edward.
2.)I like how Stephenie Meyer gave a surprise withthe whole Renesmee thing.I also like how she made it lead up to think that Ness was going to be a boy.
3.)The book was well written and very descriptive and informative.She settled it down to three boeken finally changing it form Bellas POV to Jacobs.
4.)The Humor:) Ilaughed like crazy in this book.
5.)The Cullens.It seemed they became closer and meer like a family then a clan in this book.
Bad Things:
1.)Personally Im Switzerland but i mean seriously does it seem Bella mourns over the Jake situation a little to much and a little toooo long???
2.)I really would of preferred Edwards POV instead of Jakes. Is it just me of does it seem Edward barely shows his face in this book.
3.)I love fluff so I would have prefered meer Daddy/Daughter moments between Edward and Renesmee.He held her 3 times in the whole book andhes her dad!!!
4.)The Ending.It wasnt the best way to end a saga.
5.)The Nahuel Situation.Well I liked Renesmee being unique and not like anyone else so there are 4 of her species on earth!!!

Characters At There Best:
Edward
Alice
Jacob
Emmett
Rosalie
Esme
Renesmee

Characters At There Worst:
Bella
Jasper
Carlisle
Renee
Charlie

Over all 3.5 out of 5 stars

-Thx for reading:)

patrisha727, bitten_byedward and 1 other like this

zaray wow...........really i give it 4.5/5 stars but we all have opinions

11

Twist of Fate: The End

posted by twilightGGlost

Bella's POV

I looked up from the divan, bank where Edward held me and ran out of his arms.

"Alice!" I cried as I squeezed her small frame that would probably ed up giving me bruises. "Edward why didn't u say anything?"

"Sorry love, I was a little...preoccupied." Edward suddenly whispered in my ear. It was a reunion for Edward and Alice too. The two of them hugged each other gently because I was still sandwiched between them. Alice kissed my check gently.

"I saw u returning and making up! I told Esme and Carlisle and they're already packing.." She zei with exuberance before Edward interrupted.

"Wait."...

8

secrets chapter 18

posted by bella01

[still BPOV]

he leaned closer to me.his face was only a few centimeters from mine.when i realized what he is trying to do.so i tried to fight him.when he is about to kiss me,i moved my head which made him kiss my neck not my lips.i immediately regret that because he is opening his mouth now preparing to bite.i tried to fight but he is too strong for me.i do not want to give up but i have no other choice so i just decided to wait for the pain to start.i closed my eyes and pressed my lips together.i waited but there is no pain.i opened my eyes and saw darius staring at me.then someone pulled him...

10

Imprinted? Chapter Fourteen

posted by twilight_fan_8

The volgende morning I woke up early for school. Really, why must I wake up early when I have to wake up early in the first place? Today I have to do something about Edward, I have decided. I probably will not go to school. I need help from Alice because I do not know what to do.

Ring. Ring. Ring.

It's my phone ringing and I see the name Alice flashing on the screen. It's as if she read my mind.

"Alice, I need help," I said.

"Help?" she sounded startled.

"What do I do about Edward," I moaned into the phone.

"Oh, thank goodness I thought something happened that I missed. I do not know what to do about...

8

secrets chapter 15

posted by bella01

[BPOV]

i can't think straight.i don;t know what is happening to me,every time i think of how to escape,every time he is telling me that he love me,edward's face keep popping inside my head.every time i am thinking of not being with him i feel empty.i think i really like him,no,i love him.

"who is he"darius shouted.

i didn't realized that i spoke the last part of what i am thinking.

"i told u before i will never love you.i love someone else"i said

who is he?"he asked angrily

"is he one of your new family?"he asked

i did not answer.

"i will kill them all"he zei angrily

"i will not let u hurt any...

4

The Darkening ( Alternative Version of Eclipse)

posted by paniclover21

PLEASE COMMENT! TELL ME IF I SHOULD WRITE MORE! THANKS :D

Enough Bella, I’m not going to write notes anymore like a bunch of seconde graders. Your living the life u want to and now u have to deal with the consequences. I can’t handle this anymore. I’m protecting myself from getting hurt so don’t call, don’t write, and don’t even think about me! If I need to talk to u for any reason, I will get a hold of YOU. It won’t happen anytime soon so don’t hang out door the phone of anything….

Jacob

I slowly dropped the rain soaked note back onto the keuken-, keuken table. Well if Jacob wanted...

6

Breaking dawn my story chapter one

posted by fanpire39

1 the test reasults

Please tell me what u think .

Edward and I had just came home pagina from our honeymoon. Sadly I'm still a human.=( I don't see why he doesn't just change me . I've married him but no he says that would be selifish ....blah blah blah .

While I was thinking edward pulled my hand "time to get on the plane"he said.On the plane I was having very bad tummy cramps .I wasn't worried.

When we got to the Cullen house , alice was looking at me funny . When i went to the bathroom and came out she was in the bathtube wacthing me.

"Alice what do u what "
"let's get out of edward's hearing...

3

My Midnight Sun [edwards point of view] part 2

posted by BellaCullenHale

Edward and Bella

This is harder than i thought to write this one,so bare with me.It's kinda edgey compared to my others.Enjoy!

THE volgende DAY
FORKS HIGH SCHOOL
Here I am.In biology.Waiting for her to come in.
My classmates used to me being absent.As for,i nor my family can't go out into the sunlight [we can,just not where humans can see ].Or when were hunting.
Then the pain came once again.It wasen't that bad now since i'd hunted.Her milky brown eyes looked angry mixed with hurt,from my behavior.
''Hello.'' i greeted her.About to fully introduce myself.If I was going to do this.I may aswell do this right.After all,its...

8

Life is for Living (Esme's POV)- Chapter 11- Adventure

posted by alicecullenrox1

Chapter 11- Adventure

I woke up screaming in the middle of the night. Tom was quick to come and make sure I was all right. I assured him I was then stared at the ceiling. I really wasn’t all right. I don’t think it was possible for anyone in this situation to be anywhere near all right. I laid there the remainder of the night, jumping at the slightest noises out of inside.

The volgende morning Abigail walked in. “Tom is getting everything ready to get u safely transported to Lilly’s,” she told me sitting on the end of the bed. I nodded, looking out the window. “Is there anything I can...

12

Moonlight chapter 13

posted by Rob_patt_fan

“I think these are enough for today Bella… u did a good job!”

I smiled as I cleaned the blood from my face. But the thirst was now appearing! And I knew I needed meer but I tried not to hunt some other poor animals! We were in the house and it was around midnight when everyone came around me and Edward, and stood with smiles on their faces. I looked at each one of them; Alice, Esme, Rosalie, Jasper, Emmet and Carlisle.
Now… they were my family!

“We have a surprise for u two!”

Edward looked at me with an unreadable expression… I knew that the surprise was Alice’s idea but I didn’t...

8

Dark Moon ( Bellas POV) Chapter 2

posted by GothicGirl0525

Chapter 1
]Bella? Bella? BELLA? Are alright? Listen to me?”” Alice yelled at me. She’s starting to get worried and I could see that when I opened my eyes but when I opened my eyes I knew I saw relieve.
“Alice I’m fine. clam down please. Your scaring Neisse. I sorry I must of gone into Deep thought. I’ve been doing that lately. A little too much. I’m really sorry Honey.”I zei while trying to clam both of them down and holding my daughter in my lap in the car,
“Oh well sorry Neisse I shouldn’t of reacted like that. I should have known u were fine....

13

Imprinted? Chapter Eleven

posted by twilight_fan_8

I walked up to my room with Katie behind me. Why is this happening? Why does she have to be here? I led her into my room. I shut the door slowly after she walked in.

She walked around my room and looked at everything. Then she sat down on my bad and looked up at me. She looked... sad? Like she was going to cry. I wasn't expecting this. Not in a million years would I expect that.

"Bella, I'm sorry. I shouldn't of done that. But u probably know how it feels to be in love with someone when they don't like u that way. of at least that is probably what u thought was going on. I'm the reason...

12

Moonlight chapter 12

posted by Rob_patt_fan

Hey there! So... this is the 12th chapter... volgende chapter will be sooo much fun and exciting! thanks to Joe-edwardfan for inspiring me and thanks to ashesandwine for being such a good friend! Love u all! Don't forget to commentaar and rate! Bye for now

“My eyes…”

My chocolate colored eyes were gone and I knew they would not come back, EVER. I got afraid if Edward didn’t like me the way he did before.

“Of course I do!”

Edward zei with a smile on his face. What?! He could read my mind now?

“I can’t believe it! What?! It’s so unfair! I want my silenced-mind back!”

I tapped my legs...

7

30 Things I have learned from Twilight

posted by goodgirl1

1. u can enjoy the boquet while resisting the wine.
2. The future is not set in stone.
3. Men are crabby when they're hungry.
4. Nothing beats an irritable grizzly bear.
5. True love knows no boundaries.
6. Some people are just danger magnets.
7. Even eternal enemies can work together to save something they love.
8. Forget the fangs - real vampires sparkle!
9. Soul mates exist, even if it takes 100 years to find them.
10. Porshe 911 Turbos make really great bribes.
11. Friendship is like the sun on a cloudy day.
12. Snow just means it's too cold for rain.
13. Family is about meer than just blood.
14....

2

Bella's New path Seths POV chapter 22

posted by courtneykutie

It has been 3 years since i have been back to forks...and we are going back cause charlie died...

In these 3 years,I have lived with Bella and Edward Cullen and there 3 kids ,Vickie,Jesse and Renesmee.
Renesmee is half vampire and have human so she grows really fast and stopped so in 2 years she has grown to look like a teenager and her brain is like way smater than me.Bella is a vampire, edward changed her at the last minuut and saved her life.Edward zei when she changed,that for a 1 week jaar old vampie she is acting like a 100 jaar old.

So bella could see her kids write away!she was happy...

12

Imprinted? Chapter Nine

posted by twilight_fan_8

I've got writers block. NO! And the world comes crashing down around me :(

No really I do have writers block. Writing this chapter was hard so, I hope it turned out good!

Rate & commentaar Please ;)

---------------------------------------------------

When we got into Alice's car she was about to burst. I could just tell that she wanted to know everything that had happened when she was gone. And knowing Alice, she wouldn't be happy until she knew every last detail.

"So tell me, how did it go?" Alice zei while trying not to sound too anxious.

"AMAZING!" I blurted out before I could contain myself....

10

Moonlight chapter 7

posted by Rob_patt_fan

-You won Edward.

Edward stood up and came to my side. He had his eyes closed and he was fragile.

-I can’t understand Jasper’s thoughts. It’s like; he empties his mind every ten minutes. Why am I a nonsense creature these days?!

I hugged him and got his hand in mine. I could see that they were all sad and they couldn’t concentrate on anything. When Carlisle showed up, everyone was in the living room. And I could understand that this time, my existence there, was no good! So, I made an excuse and Edward took me home pagina without any other word. Edward wasn’t in a good mood so I didn’t ask...

14

Imprinted? Chapter Five

posted by twilight_fan_8

I woke up very tired. I turned my phone on and realized that I has missed seven of Alice's calls. I felt bad, but I couldn't call her now, I had to get ready for school. Charlie was already gone, luckily. Once I was ready for school, I didn't feel like sitting around and waiting to leave, so I just left a few minuten early.

When I got there I realized that the parking lot was practically empty. But, Alice and the Cullens were all already there.

"Alice!" I yelled even though I knew she heard me pull up. She walked over to me, smiling.

"It's okay, u don't have to apologize to me," Alice said...

14

Imprinted? Chapter Three

posted by twilight_fan_8

Is anyone even reading this? Should I just stop updating?

If u are reading it enjoy!

-------------------------------------------------

Ring. Ring. Ring.

The sound of my phone woke me up. It was Alice.

"Alice what do u want?" I zei into the phone.

"That's a nice way to greet your friend, isn't it? Well I don't want anything from you. I have information on Jacob for you."

"Really? How? Tell me!"

"Well it's kind of a lot and I feel that I should tell u in person. Not over the phone. Can I come over now?" Alice asked.

"Sure," normally I wouldn't let Alice over at this hour, but I wanted to know...

13

Imprinted? Chapter Two

posted by twilight_fan_8

"Alice, I'm so sorry that I just ran out like that," I zei when I realized that it was her.

"Well I did go home, after u left. But I saw u in a vision and from what I saw, it did not go very well. Do u want to talk about it?" Alice said.

"I didn't even talk to him! I only saw Billy and he zei that Jacob was out with some friends. Which I doubt. Did u happen to see where he was?" I asked hopefully.

"Well ,for some reason I couldn't see anything at the Blacks house. It was like I was blind. Normally I can see anything when I am looking for it. But I just couldn't," Alice said, obviously...

12

Kayla's Visions, Chapter 6

posted by twilight-7

I followed Jacob as he sniffed out the vampire. Was I doing the right thing? Should I really go charging after the seemingly harmless golden-eyed vampire? Maybe she was a friend of the Cullens of of the Denali Coven. I’d met with them briefly once. Tanya, Kate, Irina, Carmen and Eleazar. Tanya with her aardbei blonde locks had her eyes set on Edward. When we first met I thought I saw disappointment in Tanya’s eyes. Her chance with Edward was gone but when she found out I was only human a sudden hope bloomed in her. I had a little wander in her mind. I wanted to know if she was planning...