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Jacob
Urrrgh. I don't feel well. Why am I so cold? What happened? Why do I feel like there's something in my shoulder? I tried to stand, but then realized I WAS standing. I opened my eyes. Everything was blurry, and my ears were ringing. Suddenly, the ringing stopped and the scene in front of me became clearer. There was a redheaded boy wearing a dress suit, and a lovely-but strangely familiar-girl in a cream-colored wedding dress. This was no wedding like I've ever seen, though.There was no preacher, but an altar covered in bottles with heavy scents and a candle. The girl and boy looked at me, blue and brown eyes. But as soon as I saw her eyes, everything came back to me.
"Renesmee! Nessie, look at me! That's Mark!" I yelled. Why isn't she terrified? I struggled, but the chains around me suddenly grew tighter.
Renesmee spoke. "I know this is Mark. And you're Jacob Black, the most filthy, cruel, ridiculous, dog I thought I was in love with before I saw Mark." Then she looked at Mark with adoring eyes, and then I realized that her pupils didn't change to focus the light. She was in a trance. Mark looked at me wickedly. I struggled some more, only to feel pain as the chains grew tighter.
"Don't even think of breaking loose. Those chains will just grow tighter until u suffocate. And don't try to phase, either, of yoou'll be cut in half." He laughed and kissed my Renesmee. I screamed and struggled again. Pain seared through my ribs. Tears were spilling like mad down my cheeks. The ceremony began. Mark zei something in Latin, and I could only make out a few words, thanks to lessons from Bella. "Soul...Body...Not...Wed?"
"I object! Renesmee, listen to me! He's put a spell on you! u don't love him; u love me! Look in my eyes and tell me u don't love me!" I screamed because the chains squeezed more. Renesmee looked ready to do just that, but as soon as she looked in my eyes, her pupils changed shape and she blinked. She shook her head, like she relived a bad memory, and then looked again. "I don't love you, Jacob Black." she zei in a sure tone. I screamed, but this time, I'd rather it were the chains that did it. My hart-, hart felt like it was slowly ripping apart, like 10x a band-aid from skin. 1,000,000x. She blinked again, and a tear spilled down her cheek.
"Oh, Jacob, I didn't-" she cried.
"Are u mad, girl, love? u don't love him, u zei so yourself!" interrupted Mark. He brought her back into her trance. "Now, on with the wedding." He continued, but used unfamiliar words, so my only guess is that he was using witchcraft. He rubbed an ointment over Renesmee's left wrist and his. He took blood from her finger and used the same mes on his, and dripped the mixed blood on the candle, which's flame grew stronger. He tipped the candle upside-down, putting dripping wax on their wrists. All the meanwhile I was screaming Renesmee's name, over and over again. He was about to put the seventh drop on her inner wrist, to finish the ceremony, when he screamed. He dropped Renesmee's hand, which made her gasp in pain and fall to the ground. I saw eight, pale figures run towards the altar, the smallest stopping at the boom I was tied against. One small tug, and Alice freed me. Mark was still screaming as Edward lept towards him. I started to lose consiousness from the chains. I fell to the ground. Before everything went dark, I heard Mark's final scream cut off, and felt a small hand, burning at the wrist, touch my cheek.
Jacob
Urrrgh. I don't feel well. Why am I so cold? What happened? Why do I feel like there's something in my shoulder? I tried to stand, but then realized I WAS standing. I opened my eyes. Everything was blurry, and my ears were ringing. Suddenly, the ringing stopped and the scene in front of me became clearer. There was a redheaded boy wearing a dress suit, and a lovely-but strangely familiar-girl in a cream-colored wedding dress. This was no wedding like I've ever seen, though.There was no preacher, but an altar covered in bottles with heavy scents and a candle. The girl and boy looked at me, blue and brown eyes. But as soon as I saw her eyes, everything came back to me.
"Renesmee! Nessie, look at me! That's Mark!" I yelled. Why isn't she terrified? I struggled, but the chains around me suddenly grew tighter.
Renesmee spoke. "I know this is Mark. And you're Jacob Black, the most filthy, cruel, ridiculous, dog I thought I was in love with before I saw Mark." Then she looked at Mark with adoring eyes, and then I realized that her pupils didn't change to focus the light. She was in a trance. Mark looked at me wickedly. I struggled some more, only to feel pain as the chains grew tighter.
"Don't even think of breaking loose. Those chains will just grow tighter until u suffocate. And don't try to phase, either, of yoou'll be cut in half." He laughed and kissed my Renesmee. I screamed and struggled again. Pain seared through my ribs. Tears were spilling like mad down my cheeks. The ceremony began. Mark zei something in Latin, and I could only make out a few words, thanks to lessons from Bella. "Soul...Body...Not...Wed?"
"I object! Renesmee, listen to me! He's put a spell on you! u don't love him; u love me! Look in my eyes and tell me u don't love me!" I screamed because the chains squeezed more. Renesmee looked ready to do just that, but as soon as she looked in my eyes, her pupils changed shape and she blinked. She shook her head, like she relived a bad memory, and then looked again. "I don't love you, Jacob Black." she zei in a sure tone. I screamed, but this time, I'd rather it were the chains that did it. My hart-, hart felt like it was slowly ripping apart, like 10x a band-aid from skin. 1,000,000x. She blinked again, and a tear spilled down her cheek.
"Oh, Jacob, I didn't-" she cried.
"Are u mad, girl, love? u don't love him, u zei so yourself!" interrupted Mark. He brought her back into her trance. "Now, on with the wedding." He continued, but used unfamiliar words, so my only guess is that he was using witchcraft. He rubbed an ointment over Renesmee's left wrist and his. He took blood from her finger and used the same mes on his, and dripped the mixed blood on the candle, which's flame grew stronger. He tipped the candle upside-down, putting dripping wax on their wrists. All the meanwhile I was screaming Renesmee's name, over and over again. He was about to put the seventh drop on her inner wrist, to finish the ceremony, when he screamed. He dropped Renesmee's hand, which made her gasp in pain and fall to the ground. I saw eight, pale figures run towards the altar, the smallest stopping at the boom I was tied against. One small tug, and Alice freed me. Mark was still screaming as Edward lept towards him. I started to lose consiousness from the chains. I fell to the ground. Before everything went dark, I heard Mark's final scream cut off, and felt a small hand, burning at the wrist, touch my cheek.
"It shocked me.I was not sure if she meant to attack.That's the only interpretation of her behavior that my past had to offer.But she was smiling.And the emotions that were emanating from her were like nothing I'd ever felt before.
"'You've kept me waiting a long time,'she said."
I didn't realize Alice had come to stand behind me again.
"And u ducked your head like a good Southern gentleman,and said,'I'm sorry ma'am.'"Alice laughed at the memory.
Jasper smiled down at her."You held out your hand,and I took it without stopping to make sense of what I was doing.For the first time in almost a century,I felt hope."
Jasper took Alice's hand as he spoke.
Alice grinned."I was just relieved.I thought u were never going to toon up."
it is just MY opinion...
i think it was very well done thinking of it just as a movie u know it wont ever be exactly like the book ... of with such many detailz
things i loved:
*the humor they use (for example bella: if things end bad like i would become the meal) haha
*alice ! the character is very well portrayed
*the end ( victoria watching)
*the baseball game!
*men cast haha =P
*stephenie meyer appearing wooow!
things that dissapointed me:
* the clearing ! i dont liked the sparkling effect ...
*it was really fast everything
*alice's story was missing ...
things that were wrong: (i didnt noticed until the third time i saw it)
*billy was driving !
*when edward is playing th e piano for bella he didnt sparkle
*victoria appears in the prom in the crowd (edward would read her thoughtz)
but i like it anyway ! it ir TWILIGHT !
i think it was very well done thinking of it just as a movie u know it wont ever be exactly like the book ... of with such many detailz
things i loved:
*the humor they use (for example bella: if things end bad like i would become the meal) haha
*alice ! the character is very well portrayed
*the end ( victoria watching)
*the baseball game!
*men cast haha =P
*stephenie meyer appearing wooow!
things that dissapointed me:
* the clearing ! i dont liked the sparkling effect ...
*it was really fast everything
*alice's story was missing ...
things that were wrong: (i didnt noticed until the third time i saw it)
*billy was driving !
*when edward is playing th e piano for bella he didnt sparkle
*victoria appears in the prom in the crowd (edward would read her thoughtz)
but i like it anyway ! it ir TWILIGHT !
While visiting “The Ellen DeGeneres Show,” for an episode that airs this Friday — the same dag Pattinson’s vampiric portrayal of Edward Cullen springs to life on the big screen, he denied having romantic ties to anyone.
“Now, are u single?” Ellen asked.
“Ah, yeah,” the British actor replied.
And it appears despite women throwing themselves at him regularly, Pattinson may be stuck in singleton mode permanently.
“No one else seems to get into a relationship with me. It’s really strange,” he told Ellen.
“People like screaming at me,” the heartthrob added. “Actually, they like screaming at me in relationships as well. No one wants to commit.”
okay, so, all these people are complaining about Bella's Lullaby. I heard, "Bella's Lullaby sucked in my opinion" of "The strings and the orchestra weren't supposed to be in the song" of "They need to cut out the orchestra cuz it sucked with that in it". Just stuff like that which is disrespectful to Summit, Carter Burwell, and all the people associated with the project. People don't need to say such rude commentaren about it.
and in my opinion, this is the soundtrack. obviously they are gonna put the score they have that goes with the movie's music. It can't just be a random piece that doesn't fit in with the rest of the score. that's just what pisses me off. when people judge something too quickly without laying down all the facts.
and in my opinion, this is the soundtrack. obviously they are gonna put the score they have that goes with the movie's music. It can't just be a random piece that doesn't fit in with the rest of the score. that's just what pisses me off. when people judge something too quickly without laying down all the facts.
Hello My Follow Twilighters!
there's a New Spot Made, it's The Leah and Jacob spot, so if u like their friendship/relationsip couple wise, feel free to join!
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where u can discuss their partnership, with other fans, make/find Leah and Jacob fan Art, and what u think over all of Jacob and Leah.
and if u have any concerns, of request for the spot, don't be scared to ask, also if u know anyone else who likes the Couple, please spread the Jeah Love This way :)
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there's a New Spot Made, it's The Leah and Jacob spot, so if u like their friendship/relationsip couple wise, feel free to join!
link
kom bij TODAY!
where u can discuss their partnership, with other fans, make/find Leah and Jacob fan Art, and what u think over all of Jacob and Leah.
and if u have any concerns, of request for the spot, don't be scared to ask, also if u know anyone else who likes the Couple, please spread the Jeah Love This way :)
DefineDelicate
aka
Tiff
Hey! Do u guys know a good twilight fan site? Help us all out and tell us... so we can go on!
Heres the cool site I found: www.freewebs.com/twilighttrailer
I think that u all know of stephenie's website..... stepheniemeyer.com
Oh! Also- If anyones knows of a good site to see interviews of meer trailer... Tell Me!
Speaking of stephenie's website... did any of u see the "quote of the day" thing she's doing!? I LOVE that idea! what do u guys think? I like the idea.. and I just cant wait to read Breaking Dawn! The movie should be good too :)
Heres the cool site I found: www.freewebs.com/twilighttrailer
I think that u all know of stephenie's website..... stepheniemeyer.com
Oh! Also- If anyones knows of a good site to see interviews of meer trailer... Tell Me!
Speaking of stephenie's website... did any of u see the "quote of the day" thing she's doing!? I LOVE that idea! what do u guys think? I like the idea.. and I just cant wait to read Breaking Dawn! The movie should be good too :)