*I know it may confuse u that Alice can see Renesmee, but in my version Alice has always been able to*
Renesmee’s Point Of View
My mind was conjuring up so many possibilities as a bounded up the front porch steps to my house. I had been at Jacob’s the whole dag and then my mom called and told me to come over with Jacob as soon as possible. I was reaching for the door handle, but the door flew open before I had the chance to open the door.
“Surprise!” A chorus of voices shouted around me. Everyone was there. Mom, dad, Auntie Alice, Uncle Jasper, Aunt Rosalie, Uncle Emmett, Carlisle, Esme, Grandpa Charlie, and most of the pack from La Push.
I took a startled jump backwards and Jacob caught me from behind.
“Happy Birthday” he whispered lovingly into my ear.
I couldn’t help the wide grin that crossed my face. Jacob and I moved our way through the door and everyone was surrounding me with “Happy Birthday’s” all around. My mom and dad both gave me a big hug and my mom kissed me on the forehead.
“Happy 12th Birthday Renesmee,” My mom laughed “gave u quite the scare didn’t we?”
“No.” I lied. My dad laughed obviously reading my thoughts. If he wasn’t around I would have gotten away with the lie too. I was a good liar.
“Renesmee,” Auntie Alice called from the keuken-, keuken “we made u a cake!”
I’m sure she didn’t forget the fact that I didn’t eat human food and that the cake was meer meant for my Jacob and his pack, but it was the thought that counted. I flashed her a grin. “Chocolate I hope?”
“Of course!” she laughed. All of a sudden, her face went blank. The cake dropped from her hands and splattered onto the floor. Uncle Jasper was at her side in a flash.
“Alice, Alice! What’s wrong? Alice!” he whispered to her. Panic clearly on his features.
Dad had the same blank expression as Auntie Alice as he allowed himself into her mind.
Some of our guest’s faces were puzzled. Some worried. I’m pretty sure mine was a mixture of both.
“Dad?” I asked as I moved to stand at his side. “Dad, what did Aunt Alice see?”
He was frozen for a seconde then glanced down to answer my question. “You, Renesmee.”
Renesmee’s Point Of View
My mind was conjuring up so many possibilities as a bounded up the front porch steps to my house. I had been at Jacob’s the whole dag and then my mom called and told me to come over with Jacob as soon as possible. I was reaching for the door handle, but the door flew open before I had the chance to open the door.
“Surprise!” A chorus of voices shouted around me. Everyone was there. Mom, dad, Auntie Alice, Uncle Jasper, Aunt Rosalie, Uncle Emmett, Carlisle, Esme, Grandpa Charlie, and most of the pack from La Push.
I took a startled jump backwards and Jacob caught me from behind.
“Happy Birthday” he whispered lovingly into my ear.
I couldn’t help the wide grin that crossed my face. Jacob and I moved our way through the door and everyone was surrounding me with “Happy Birthday’s” all around. My mom and dad both gave me a big hug and my mom kissed me on the forehead.
“Happy 12th Birthday Renesmee,” My mom laughed “gave u quite the scare didn’t we?”
“No.” I lied. My dad laughed obviously reading my thoughts. If he wasn’t around I would have gotten away with the lie too. I was a good liar.
“Renesmee,” Auntie Alice called from the keuken-, keuken “we made u a cake!”
I’m sure she didn’t forget the fact that I didn’t eat human food and that the cake was meer meant for my Jacob and his pack, but it was the thought that counted. I flashed her a grin. “Chocolate I hope?”
“Of course!” she laughed. All of a sudden, her face went blank. The cake dropped from her hands and splattered onto the floor. Uncle Jasper was at her side in a flash.
“Alice, Alice! What’s wrong? Alice!” he whispered to her. Panic clearly on his features.
Dad had the same blank expression as Auntie Alice as he allowed himself into her mind.
Some of our guest’s faces were puzzled. Some worried. I’m pretty sure mine was a mixture of both.
“Dad?” I asked as I moved to stand at his side. “Dad, what did Aunt Alice see?”
He was frozen for a seconde then glanced down to answer my question. “You, Renesmee.”
Max's POV
When we rushed in Sergeant straal, ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant straal, ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant straal, ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
bureau and called 911. When the police and ambulance arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant straal, ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
When we rushed in Sergeant straal, ray office and I saw Addi lying there on
the floor anger just rushed over me. Sergeant straal, ray quickly tried to
fight us but between the both of us we had him pinned down on the
floor within seconds. As Jordan was holding Sergeant straal, ray on floor I
rushed over to Addi. I checked to see if she was breathing and that
made me a little calmer but not enough. So I grabbed the phone on the
bureau and called 911. When the police and ambulance arrived I was happy
cause I knew that she was going to be okay and Sergeant straal, ray was going
to jail. Jordan and I had to stay on campus we weren't allowed to
leave.
Personally I read Twilight because kids kept bugging me because I haven't read it yet.
But after reading all four boeken I feel in love with them. I wasn't a fan of the writing style of the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in love with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I love the ending to Breaking Dawn. And love New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favoriete author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to love HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before reading Twilight...and just suddenly realized my writing was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm writing a vampire novel that I hope to publiceer in the near future.
But after reading all four boeken I feel in love with them. I wasn't a fan of the writing style of the romance. I prefer girl-on-girl. But I fell in love with Edward and Jacob.
The characters are lovable. Now I hated Bella she was annoying but that's the only thing I dislike. I love the ending to Breaking Dawn. And love New Moon.
Edward left in that book I almost skipped it.
As of right now; Meyers is my favoriete author.
She is way better then JK Rowling and Stephen King.
I used to love HP until I read Twilight.
Now I used to write before reading Twilight...and just suddenly realized my writing was nothing compared to Twilight. That's why I'm writing a vampire novel that I hope to publiceer in the near future.
New Moon in theatres November 20, 2009
