ok so this is my first stoy so please commentaar and tell me if u want me to continue and if u have any ideas it would help.plz.=D
(bellas pov)
I was studying for the dartmouth finals when edward walked in and through my book across the room.the volgende thing i knew he was on top, boven of me.you study to much he whispered in my ear his lips traced along my jaw and back up to my lips.then there was a knock on the door.go away alice!edward zei angry.i pushed edward off me and sliped into my defenive crouch. its ok bella its just alice.no its not i zei through my teeth then the door slamed down.a girl walked in and edward started screaming so i put my sheild around him and he stoped. who are u and what do u want!?!i asked hard.my name is jasmijn im from olimpia.then i relaxed my crouch because i knew of olimpia.jasmine smiled your from olimpia to right.i nodded im a telapath just like you,am i correct.yes i zei guilty.edwards eyes were confused and in shock.
(bellas pov)
I was studying for the dartmouth finals when edward walked in and through my book across the room.the volgende thing i knew he was on top, boven of me.you study to much he whispered in my ear his lips traced along my jaw and back up to my lips.then there was a knock on the door.go away alice!edward zei angry.i pushed edward off me and sliped into my defenive crouch. its ok bella its just alice.no its not i zei through my teeth then the door slamed down.a girl walked in and edward started screaming so i put my sheild around him and he stoped. who are u and what do u want!?!i asked hard.my name is jasmijn im from olimpia.then i relaxed my crouch because i knew of olimpia.jasmine smiled your from olimpia to right.i nodded im a telapath just like you,am i correct.yes i zei guilty.edwards eyes were confused and in shock.