My name is Bella Swan. I’ve lived on this earth for a very long time. I left my family to fine my older bother Jasper Swan. To dag I was moving out of my Adopted father John Smith house in Phoenix because I thought I didn’t belong in his world and because he didn’t share the same secret as me and my adopted mother Renee Dale who was similar to me. So I moved with my adopted mother in forks. It was hard saying goodbye to my father and step mother. When I got to forks it was different instead of seeing the sun I saw clouds.
When I got settled in my old room I went to the garage to ask my mother when I would be able to go to school she was surprise.
“Well Bells u can go tomorrow” she zei with a smile. “Bells while I’m at it I want to give u a gift.” she said. “Close your eyes and count to 10” she said.
I heard an engine. “I wanted to give u one of my cars before u got to school” she said. I just ran and jumped in her arms I was so happy I couldn’t talk. “Do u like it Bells.” “I LOVE IT.” I zei screaming the words. “Well before u go to school”… she zei laughing “let’s hunt” she zei with a smile. Then we ran outback to the woods. I was mad because she caught the biggest bear.
The volgende dag I went to school every one stared at me. I loved the attention. I got out of my car and then I smelled something I recognized it was Edward my wonderful Edward I was so happy, but I had to focus on what I was doing. I went into the office to get my papers for class. When I walk down the hall everybody stared at me with mouths open. Some kid named Toney was the first person to talk to me. He asked me to be in schools newspaper. Of cores I zei no.
“Tony I am sorry but I don’t want a lot of people staring at me they are all ready staring at me now, I’m sorry.” “Its ok I see u at lunch then see ya” he said. door that time I was in my Spanish class the teacher was calling order to the class room. I sat door this girl named Jessica she was pretty nice we talked walking to lunch together. Then I saw my Edward standing door the back door looking like a male model with some people. One seconde later he figured out my scent and was surprised.
I started to walk his way. “BELLA NO.” He screamed in his thoughts. I looked at him shock and sadness
“I’m sorry Bella, but u mustn’t come yet these people will start to wonder how we know each other, at across my face. He looks at me sadly walking to his table. Lest not today love” he thought. “Its ok honey I love you” I zei smiling. “I love u to Bella” After school I went to Edwards’s car those people were staring. One of them looked like someone I knew he stared at me for a second, and then I look at Edward. I couldn’t take it any more! “Get In” I told Edward, the people that were standing volgende to Edward looked at him for questions. “I’ll be right back” Edward zei looking angry. I laughed, he growled.
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