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Yeah , it's terrible.

Him. The sweetest guy in the world that everyone likes. The one I would do anything for. The one i've been in love with since the third grade. My best friend. The one who is getting married today , but not to me. Lucas Bennet. Him.

I looked at myself in the mirror. Who I saw was not me. My hair was ragged and so were my clothes. My make up , that I don't remembering owning , was smeared and my breath smelled faintly like alcohol. I reeked of ciggarett smoke and mens cologne. What the hell happened and how did I end up here? I looked around and realized I was in Luke's bedroom. "Luke?" I zei quietly. I opened his door. "Lucas?" I called out. I heard mumbling coming from the room acrossed from where I was standing. I crept slowly, so they wouldn't know I was there. I leaned against the door and cupped my hands around my ear.
"Lucas , I don't care if u were just 'looking out for her' u can't just be bringing passed out skanks home pagina and letting them sleep in your bed for god sakes!" a woman yelled- I'm guessing Luke's mom. "you know it's not like that, I'm sure Riley has a good explanation for this. And was I supposed to do ? Just leave her there?"
"what if Melissa finds out?" she spat.
"then let her find out, it's not like I am of will ever have a relationship with Ri. She is my bestfriend," he yelled. I took a few steps away from the door. Upset door the truth, he'll never love me the way I love him. The door opened and out came Luke. He had just began to look up when I ran down the stairs full speed. He ran after me. "Ri, stop. Please," He begged. But I kept going. I ran out the door and was heading acrossed the lawn when I stopped. But not door choice. He spun me around and trapped me in a hug.
"what happened to me last night?"
"a party," he whispered in my ear.
And then I remembered. Luke had called to tell me he'd proposed to Melissa. Which snapped my hart-, hart in two. And alcohol was my only escape.
*not finished & yeah, it'
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irst time to commentaar on any thing here, but i liked it and i found it simple and i am big fan of sad stories .
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writer67 said:
sadness,[its good] the hidden beauty, of beauty and the beast. the beast is great and beauty is a illness of a type of blindness,;-]
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x-menobsessed26 said:
I love it. It has the same feel to it of a story I would write. Sadness, heartbreak, love that could never be. It's beautiful, and u better write meer because I want to read it.
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