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Here's a story contest for u guys!

Rules:
Has to be one of these genres: Realistic Fiction, Fantasy, Historical Fiction, of Horror.
Has to have at least 3 paragraphs with five sentences in each, of five paragraphs with three sentences in each.
No bad language of innapropriate sentences in it.

Prize:
I will do a drawing of the main character of the first 3 winners' stories
(The winners, whoever got the best votes, has to go onto my "PegasisterFun's Writing Contest Chat"
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Firewriter said:
Alright, here's my sucky attempt. Fiction/ horror maybe??

' Blood. That was all I remember seeing. Pools and pools of blood. The feeling of electricity still coursing through my half numb body keeping me alert. A dim swaying lamp hanging low from the dark ceiling giving off very little light, making everything eerie. The chair, cool steel metal, tipped to it's side. Darkness all around. A fence, cold under my blood covered fingers. What happened? Where was I? '

"Miss Taylor?" My head snapped up, eyes wide, frantic. My hands on the metal coffee cup I held tightened; my knuckles turning white.

' Hands tightening on the cold metal arms of the chair- electricity- screaming...'

"How are u feeling?" The cop asked sitting in the chair behind his bureau opposite mine. He was some what thin. A little older, early forties maybe. I shrugged in response to his question.
"Okay I guess." He nodded, clearly shocked at how calm my voice was in comparison to my state when they found me. He put a pale yellow file on his bureau in between us. I stared at it. People rushed around the office, doing their jobs and working on cases, although mine seemed to be the biggest one so far.
"Miss Taylor, do u remember anything from what happened?"

'Knives, guns, tazors, crying, screaming...'

"No." He leaned back in his black chair, it squeaking silently under his weight. He put his fingers up to his mouth thoughtfully. Watching me for a brief moment.
"Do u remember any details about your attackers of whereabouts?"

' "Don't u remember me?" Breath smelling of common Chinese food, eyes black mirrors, intimidating. Shortly cut raven black hair and deep olijf-, olijf skin the color of wet sand. Long mes in hand and familiar black uniform on. Hēi'àn.'

"No." I replied steadily. His deep brown eyes narrowed slightly as he studied me. Then, standing up, he grabbed the yellow file off his wooden bureau and patted my shoulder.
"Well, u just focus on getting better now. And if u remember anything, don't hesitate to tell us." I nodded and watched him as he walked off, stopping at another officer who had talked to me earlier. Asking the exact same questions. He was an African American man, well build and almost bald. I strained my ears to listen in on their conversation. Although it wasn't that hard to hear them.
"Detective can I help you?" The African American cop asked.
"Uh yeah," he tapped the file almost nervously and looked ever so slightly back at me. "I wanna put a watch on this girl."
"Why do u want to send this request?"
"I feel like she's hiding something. Almost like she is trying to protect her attackers."
"Detective, that is normal for someone if their life was threatened. I would give her some time."
"Look, Caleb, there is something different this time. I just want a watch put on her." Caleb walked off and I kept an eye on the detective. Me being quiet is protecting you. I thought.
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rugbylover said:
She was doing fine until she saw a mysterious man walking towards her. Who was this man she wondered the man asked “are u Annabelle?” she answered “yes what do u want with me”. He zei “I want all of your 13,000,000 dollars and if u don't I will kill you”. Annabelle was frightened she wondered why he thought she a homeless woman would have 30,000,000 dollars she would have been living inside a masion already.
He must be mad to do this to the wrong person.

Suddenly the door burst down it was batman but something was off about him. He looked strange but then he pressed a button. She was nocked unconcsios. After two hours Annabelle saw batman carving something into her arm then she thought only bellatrix lestrange does this. It wasn't batman it was bellatrix Annabelle zei “your not batman your not here to save me u are Bellatrix Lestrange just because I have muggle parents doesn't mean u have to do this'.

Bellatrix Lestrange responded with “I'll do what I did to Neville Longbottems parents to u aka the crucirtist spell. Ha ha ha”. Annabelle tried to get up but she couldn't. “I don't have 30,000,000 dollars” she screamed “I know u don't it was just an excuse to kill you”. The writing zei mudblood “why are u treating me like how u treated Hermione Granger yes I know they made films about Harry Potters life”. “I know are u an idiot now to kill u ha ha ha AVADA KEDAVRA” and in less then a seconde she was dead.
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